Date: Apr 04, 2017 4:14 am Title: Chapter 18
I love the idea, and Justin trusting Brian is huge!
Date: Mar 22, 2017 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 18
I think Brian's idea is great.
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2017 4:53 am Title: Chapter 18
Correct me if I'm wrong but I thought Deb never told Danny she was pregnant. In that case how could Danny be there for him if he didn't know. I love how Emmett gave Michael a chance to look at himself. And I adore how Justin threw Michael out of the office and is willing to trust Brian. Really I love this whole chapter.
Date: Feb 18, 2017 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 18
Huge step for our men, trust, they so love each other. I think that was a great scene because they both showed trust in each other. I don't think the plan is exploitation of the kids unless the house never opens or stays open a short time.
Mikey got schooled by Grampy/Uncle. He needs to read Dale Carnegie's "How to Win Friends and Influence People". Perhaps Grampy can get him a life coach, cuz he's on his way to losing Ben and he really doesn't care about losing Hunter. Maybe Danny comes he'll take him on the road as a wig mistress.
So, I am going to trust Grampy not to interfere but to instruct Brian. I see him making Brian a billion or two, lol . Oddly, I also see him locking the two in a remote electricity free cabin, just like he and Granny goes to once a year to rekindle their closeness. Yep, this story has me thinking all kinds of things. Hunter can drive them there in his Land Rover, cuz they won't fit in the Mustang, lol.
Thank you for writing this thought provoking and often hysterically awesome fic!!
Date: Feb 18, 2017 11:47 am Title: Chapter 18
I think the center is a great idea. I'm so glad Justin is trusting Brian. Warren and Brian make a good team. Now if we could just get Brian and Justin some alone time....
Date: Feb 18, 2017 7:21 am Title: Chapter 18
Warren and Brian are going to work miracles for Justin.
Date: Feb 18, 2017 4:46 am Title: Chapter 18
LAWD HAM TURKEY!!!! Clean up in Kinnetik! God I wanted to punch that mealy-mouth mofo OUT!!! Michael is a spoiled entitled brat even though he grew up with significantly less money than Justin. Debbie's sacrifices mean absolutely NOTHING in comparison to what he supposedly didn't have....SMH Everyone needs to wash their hands of him. Some people just can't be helped to become better humans- Michael is such a one!
As for Brian: First his interaction with Justin here was so important. The fact that he actually cared what Justin would think of him showed his growth, which Michael and Lindsay love to ignore. Secondly, I'm so damn HAPPY he is not running to Michael's rescue and didn't buy into the guilt trip. Again that's showing real growth as a man- a married man. He's putting his family business first, something Michael can't do because he's a selfish POS. And last, I think that even though Drew is the face behind the foundation, this is Brian honoring Justin's vision and also wanting to help. Like he said, he could have been Hunter if he didn't have Debbie. I think that statement is so telling! And yet Michael had Debbie but doesn't appreciate her, just think he's owed for being born. I actually cheered when Justin threw Michael out. This version of Brian and Justin is so well-developed!
BTW...Have I mentioned how much I LOVE Warren? Under that Daddy Warbucks persona he is still so approachable and endearing; just wholly human. He talk with Emmett- with all of them really- has made such a significant impact, it's giving me the warm fuzzies.
Great Chapter!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle