Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2017 4:57 am Title: Chapter 23

Why am I dubious of both Michael and Lindsay? Seems convenient both have their epiphany at the same time 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2017 2:01 pm Title: Chapter 23

Are Michael and Lindsay finally seeing what they did wrong? That's too good to be true. 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 23

I love Warren in this. He's level headed and seems to really understand people. He gives small insights into people that others my noth think about. Slightly different perspectives. Especially Brian. Love that he really likes and respects Brian, but how he climbed up to where he is, how honest he is and because he doesn't kiss his ass. More importatnly though, because he has real affection for Justin. Yup, Warren is a trrific character in this and am emjoying him thoroughly. He pulls no punches and is brutall honest, a character trait that  Brian himself admired is anyone. they'd make a great business team. 

I'm really really like how Brian seems to be so protective if Emmett. soemthing we don't normally see, at least not so blatantly. 

I hda to re-read the part with Michael adn Ben to make sure I hadn't missed anything vital. Did Danny's talk with Michael actually make a difference? Is Michael actually going to grw up a bit or this just a temporary thing? Ben's right though. they need to work on themselves and Michael needs to take onus for the shit he's caused. Nees to stop feeling sorry for himself. Perhaps once they do, they'll be able to be parents to Hunter.

Lindsey too seems to be whilsting a different tune. she and Mel seem to be coming to some kind of concensus. they'll part as friends and both be parents, but Lindsey at least has finaly admitted what everyone already knew. Kind of impressed.

Brian's words are causing me pause though. That neither she nor Michael do anythig without a selfish motive. Are they pulling the wool oever everyone's eyes here? Do they have some kind of plan afoot? (are they smart enought to HAVe a plan afoot?)

Nice quiet time for Brian and Justin, Who'da thought of Brian fishing? Definitely a time for him to become more introspective mind you. To be more open with Justin, and show him as his true self. They are definitely on teh right road together!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 23

Everyone is finally figuring this out.  I like that.  This is one story I love to read every day.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 2:39 am Title: Chapter 23

I'm loving the "getting to know each other" scenes.  It's so refreshing to see a different side of Brian.