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Date: Apr 04, 2017 5:24 am Title: Chapter 27

This plan is awesome!!! Finally Ben gets a clue!

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 5:18 am Title: Chapter 26

They couldn't even make it a night. Still disappointed in Ben. Typical Michael thinks he just knows better than anyone else 

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 5:11 am Title: Chapter 25

Take that! I love this plan...

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 5:04 am Title: Chapter 24

I hope Ben wises  up

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 4:57 am Title: Chapter 23

Why am I dubious of both Michael and Lindsay? Seems convenient both have their epiphany at the same time 

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 4:57 am Title: Chapter 23

Why am I dubious of both Michael and Lindsay? Seems convenient both have their epiphany at the same time 

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 4:50 am Title: Chapter 22

This Mel is such a good one!

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 4:43 am Title: Chapter 21

Love.. just love! The frankness of the conversations pulls me right in

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 4:27 am Title: Chapter 20

Ahhhhhh, they both know that they both want it! **Doing my happy dance** 

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 4:21 am Title: Chapter 19

So Mikey throws a tantrum and screws over Emmett? ASSHOLE!

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 4:14 am Title: Chapter 18

I love the idea, and Justin trusting Brian is huge!

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 4:07 am Title: Chapter 17

I think warren may be quickly becoming my favorite person. He has the power and money to do anything, but he uses it all for good, and he'll stand by those who deserve it!

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 3:59 am Title: Chapter 16

What a fucking douche Michael is... and he doesn't even care!

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 3:49 am Title: Chapter 15

Twins? Ha... love it!

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 3:42 am Title: Chapter 14

Debbie still needs to come around about hunter, but I think she'll be a great asset as well

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 13

The sex with them is ALWAYS hot, but them talking was even better!

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 2:31 am Title: Chapter 12

Brian being ok with this and Justin bring the one fighting or st least resisting it is great... so are Justin and Michael related???? Omg 

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 2:23 am Title: Chapter 11

I'm disappointed with Ben but not surprised at Michael for how they are dealing with hunter. Glad Debbie is stepping up

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 1:46 am Title: Chapter 10

Lindsay is on full delusional trip.

She would be the one acting abnormal if she ever conned her way into the dinner.

Gus climbs right up on Grampy just like he's done it all his life!

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 1:33 am Title: Chapter 9

I REALLY like Warren... and Mikey is a bigger and bigger idiot!

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 1:20 am Title: Chapter 8

I like Grandpa... Marston is going to be an amazing ally I bet!

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 1:07 am Title: Chapter 7

You are writing such fantastic interactions.  that is the part I like the most... they are funny and light (mostly), but I can picture them so well and it flows so naturally

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 12:53 am Title: Chapter 6

I like this version of Mel... quite a bit!

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 12:46 am Title: Chapter 5

I so love Callie knocking Brian over with a hug and then Gus asking if Justy is his dad too - YES!!!!

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Date: Apr 04, 2017 12:38 am Title: Chapter 4

I seriously cannot remove the smile from my face as I read this... the banter between Brian and Justin is fantastic!

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