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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 24 - 9:00 AM 12.17.2016

I knew after his dream ephiphany, he'd be there, but why make it a surprise to Susan at home?  he's still a jerk lol



Author's Response: Thanks for all your comments. I love the Kinney Cape Idea. Priceless.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 23 - 8:00 AM 12.17.2016

awwww, Bree asking Brian to marry her was just the sweetest!



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 22 - 7:00 AM 12.17.2016

I love how Bree is such a mix of her dads... looks from Justin, but like everyone keeps saying... personality from Brian!



Author's Response: Tough combination.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 21 - 6:00 AM 12.17.2016

I think I really like Seth... and if he came Brian approved, he must be a good guy!



Author's Response: We like Seth too!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 20 - 5:00 AM 12.17.2016

I love that Brian captures the moment on his cell phone... priceless!



Author's Response: He's just an old softy.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 19 - 4:00 AM 12.17.2016

dream, dream, dream... wide awake in the middle of the night... awwww



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 18 - 3:00 AM 12.17.2016

Debbie wants Carl to retire, but doesn't want to herself yet?  haha... 



Author's Response: That's Debbie.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 9:52 pm Title: Chapter 17 - 2:00 AM 12.17.2016

awww, poor Beau... he thinks his pack is in trouble since they aren't there for him... poor guy!



Author's Response: He misses his family.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 9:29 pm Title: Chapter 16 - 1:00 AM 12.17.2016

so because Brian is wrapped around Justin's finger it's ok for Craig? I don't get it... does that make Brian look bad in his eyes or better?  with Craig I can never tell what he's REALLY thinking



Author's Response: Craig is too conflicted.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 15 - 12:00 AM 12.17.2016

Craig's only reason for not going is his own damn pride and stubborness...he didn't think Brian was good enough or would stay with Justin (or even should)... that his son wouldn't have a normal life being gay... hmmm, he is married, has a kid, both Justin and his husband are more successful than you... seems like the only one losing here is you - asshole!



Author's Response: Well said.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 14 - 11:00 PM 12.16.2016

will it be enough to get thru to Craig?



Author's Response: Maybe.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 13 - 10:00 PM 12.16.2016

Teddy is hysterical... "snookums" haha



Author's Response: We love Ted.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 12 - 9:00 PM 12.16.2016

I like Seth... the Mel and Lindsay part seemed out of nowhere, but maybe setting something up for the future... wow, I know Gus is older, but it seems unreal that JR is already 11! wow



Author's Response: Time flies when you're having fun.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 9:07 pm Title: Chapter 11 - 8:00 PM 12.16.2016

good thing the wedding reception is being done by Emmett and not the country club or they'd all starve! lol



Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 10 - 7:00 PM 12.16.2016

Brian certainly has balls of steel!  Good for him finally calling out Craig... Brian was willing to stay away, but he wont put his family second... a lesson Craig should have learned a long time ago!



Author's Response: Yes, he should have. Brian always thinks of his family first.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 9 - 6:00 PM 12.16.2016

again and again, Craig is just an ass



Author's Response: Yes...sigh.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 8 - 5:00 PM 12.16.2016

use Bree's willfullness to the fullest advantage... brilliant Mr. Kinney LOL



Author's Response: He knows his daughter.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 7 - 4:00 PM 12.16.2016

yay... Jennifer seems much more relaxed and happy now!



Author's Response: It's about time too.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 6 - 3:00 PM 12.16.2016

Brian is such a smarty... like he has these ideas in his head and doesn't even know it until he needs them LOL



Author's Response: Yes he is.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 8:21 pm Title: Chapter 5 - 2:00 PM 12.16.2016

Brian needs a cape!!!! not a Rage cape, but the Kinney Cape! :) 



Author's Response: A Kinney cape; I have to remember that.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 8:15 pm Title: Chapter 4 - 1:00 PM 12.16.2016

Brian is the fairy whisperer!

and if Bree can't change Craig's mind, nobody can!



Author's Response: Ha!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 8:10 pm Title: Chapter 3 - 12:00 AM 12.16.2016

Brian saves the day... and Craig is being so awful!



Author's Response: I'm afraid so.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 2 - 11:00 AM 12.16.2016

so everyone assumes Brian needs to fix things again??? and doesn't even think about Justin, her brother, might be helping!!!!



Author's Response: Well he is Brian Kinney.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 - 10:00 AM 12.16.2016

Justin to the rescue!

I thought after Craig found he could have a conversation and handshake with Brian he would be able to be at the wedding... selfish ass



Author's Response: Not likely to happen in our story.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 5:39 am Title: Chapter 24 - 9:00 AM 12.17.2016

Beautiful story! Thank you for sharing it!



Author's Response: Thank you for all your wonderful comments. So glad you are enjoying the Sunshine Files.

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