Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2017 4:52 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow.  Love how Ted takes up for Brian and tells Deb he's insulted that she would blame Brian without knowing the truth.  Emmett's right on about Michael being delusional.  Poor Ben.  He's the one who is really hurting.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 6:37 pm Title: Chapter 2

It's funny...I had JUST re-read the first part, and then chapter 1 in this when I saw that you had updated. I was hoping you would. YAY! Happy camper.

So, as a parent, I can somewhat see Deb's initial reaction. We all want to support our kids. We all want to think the best of them and would hope that they wouldnt' do harm to others. She however seems to have blinders on! She's faced with the whole gang telling her the same thing, yet she still doesn't want to face facts. She wants to deny it. Wants to stick her head in teh sand it seems. Then, she seems to think that Brian needs to do something about it and seems affronted by the suggestion of him seeing Dr. wilder. Not sure where her thoughts are going to take her. I can only hope that she doesn't continue to look at the situation blindly and that she actually WILL try to get him the help he obviously needs.

question is, what will Michael's reaction be??

Nicely done and again, was thrilled to see the update!

thank you.

Cheers,

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you are enjoy this.

I was inspired and had a small space of time to write, so chapter 3 (not grandly long) has been posted!

 

I hope you keep enjoying it :) 

thanks for the review

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 1:27 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well it seems like they're finally getting through to Deb. Talk about delusions, Michael has always been a piece of work! Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

thanks Ms. Glo... working on ch. 3 now. Hopefully won't take as long this time for an update... I have some great people guiding me a bit :)