[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2020 7:24 am Title: Chapter 1
A really good start can not wait to read more
Date: May 02, 2017 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I'm hooked... you do this to me every time lol
Date: Apr 03, 2017 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the start of this. Brian is really different but still Brian because he does exactly what he wants.
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2017 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice start! ~ Kathleen
Date: Mar 21, 2017 12:22 am Title: Chapter 1
HMOF! Am all caught up. First brilliant and secondly just wow Michael I was screaming when he was beating himself up. But Ben what a tool...boohoo to you that Brian got lucky in love on his first time out. Never thought I would dislike him in a story but I really want to open a can on him!
Can't wait for more.
MissMerlot
Date: Mar 12, 2017 7:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm in love with the story alreadyðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Date: Mar 11, 2017 5:58 am Title: Chapter 1
This fast becoming one of my favorite of yours. Probably say that every time though. Lol
Loved that Carl gave an earful to Ben. Seems like Deb is willing to listen before running over to Brian again. Hopefully she really hears it. Ben is being a dick. Letting Michael get away with treating everyone badly.
Nice evening for L,M,B,+J and Gus of course. Justin will have a bigger group of friends than he thought I bet. Blake will be included as well.
While Emmett seems to be seeing the ugly side of himself, he's still judging. Felt bad for Blake having to give two bits of truth to Emmett. How long before he sees the ugly truth about Michael?
Even if Emmett and Ted do come around, it's going to take some real effort to become friends with Justin. He's not going to take any crap. He'll also stick up for Brian as well.
Thanks foe today's chapter!!! Loving this to bits.
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Mar 10, 2017 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so different. It worked though. Different sets of circumstances change us all.
I liked 'this' Brian and Justin. As always, I'm a sucker for them to fall in love.
I'll keep reading.
Yes, very interesting. Thanks
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love the way this is going! Justin is smart and Brian seems ready - what a terrific idea. And I'm never adverse to the shadow of Mikey in the background, needing to be put in his place. Thank you for writing.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love this beginning; Brian isn't desperate yet and I'm happy Justin saw that there might be more to come.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Terrific start to what will undoubtedly be another terrific story. Loving the fact that you are so keen on writing, and that you have so many ideas.
Curious as to why Michael is being beligerant to Justin. Is Ben talking about him? Praising him as a student and Michael is being a jealous idiot? I'm assuming the 2 guys that pulled him away were Ted and Emmett? Have to say, I may be one of the few who are looking forward to reading Ted and Emmett being misguided about Justin. I've often mentioned that it would be in interesting aspect to the story line. Of course they come around fairly quickly as they both figure out what's really going on, but it makes for something new and interesting. Their loyalties would naturally be with their "friend" Michael.
Brian is taking the initiative. Great!! That they took their time before sex again showed Justin that brian is serious. Can't wait for them to return to the Pitts! What Michael's reaction is going to be will be amusing I'm sure.
Great start!! Definitely looking forward to more! Kind of jealous of Lorie as she gets to read everything first. LOL.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the variety in your stories. Brian is the Brian he could have been. Justin is independant from the get go. Michael is an irritant, so nothings changed there. lol.
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Another amazing story....love it...... cant wait for more...thank u so much.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Definitely loving the start of this. I'm not keen on Emmett and Ted not being likealble characters but I will trust your creative mojo.
Can't wait for more.
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay a new story from my favorite author!!! Justin is being harassed by an irrational Mikey or is Ben saying Justin's name in his sleep? And I am assuming he's manipulated Ted and Em into thinking his fears are right. I'm hoping it's a short distance for them to get to the truth. Ted is best at Kinnetic and Em is best hanging with Baby.
Brian is very sexy so far. I can't wait to see how this progresses.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, I have to agree with the last reviewer, Amy. I keep thinking "this is it, she can't come up with another original take", then...BAM!!! Another original version. Please, don't make me hate Ted and Emmett, your takes on Ted have made me reevaluate the character. Can't wait for another update.
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 4:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh My God! How can I already be hooked in less than 2000 words? I'm kind of nervous about Ted and Em, but I love all of your stories, so I can't wait to see what's next!
Thanks!
Amy :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 4:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, I can tell already this is going to be a great story! ðŸ˜
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 4:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. And I love being your beta because I get to read everything first and you write great stories.
~Lorie