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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2017 4:23 pm Title: Chapter 15

again, Michael didn't think this thru... of course Ben has no marks on him, so how could he have done THAT much damage... I get Debbie running to Michael, that's her fear... and first response would be to just arrest Ben and sort it out after.  I hope Carl sees the truth adn helps Debbie see it too!

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2017 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 15

Michael is an ass. I'm glad Ben is getting help even if he is not my favorite person right now. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2017 12:44 am Title: Chapter 15

Love Justin's thing about right and wrong.  Dan, yet another great character.  How does Michael think he can get away with this?  How does Deb manage to not see things for the lies they are?  

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2017 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 15

Wow what a piece of shitty work the whiny brat is?!!framing his own husband just to get Brian's attention..hopefully Debbie would listen to others first before she jump into  conclussion about her son being the victim..

Well it's a little too late before Ben listen to Brian and started to realize about his not so perfect husband..hooe he can get out of this..

Is it Dan on the picture?bcos the name written is Brian??

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2017 5:08 am Title: Chapter 15

Whoa! This is the worst scheme I read about Michael; it's so deviant. I hope he has a brain tumor to explain that. Though, has he a brain large enough to host a tumor?

Why is he expecting to get Brian like this? By the way, Brian was right to warn Ben.

Ben isn't a nice guy here, but he doesn't deserve that!

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2017 3:32 am Title: Chapter 15

What a sick pup Michael is....I hope he goes into a mental institution, clearly he's ill. Dan sounds like a very smart guy, can't wait to see where this goes. 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2017 12:59 am Title: Chapter 15

Justin is a nice guy , maybe too nice. I hope Michael gets what he deserves.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2017 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 15

WHOA Michael went from calm to psychotic in a nono-second and now Ben is seeing that he should have listened to Brian and stayed away. (Damn That Gave Me Chills!!)

Ben is lucky Justin is willing to help because anyone else would let him deal with this on his own especially after the crap he pulled letting Michael believe that Justin was hitting on him.

Even Dan in a way believes that Ben should be left to fester in his own muck, but as a lawyer he is going to do what he can to help Ben and prove how big of a liar Michael is.

I like Dan because he is direct (like Brian) and knows better than to piss off Justin if he wants to remain friends.

Brian knows that he has nothing to worry about concerning Dan he is just determined to not fall into whatever scheme Michael is hatching.

I think Deb is just going to have to face that Brian is not going to come running every time they call.

I was not expecting Michael to go that far and it worries me just how much further he is willing to go to get Brian?

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2017 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 15

Too bad Ben didn't pop him one for good measure.  Mikey is just dumb enough to think this will work.  Will he cut off digits and appendages when Brian doesn't show up?  Ben child you in trouble but help is on the way. 


I like jealous Brian.  Half the battle is communicating and our couple is doing that so trust until you shouldn't.


Loving it!!!

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2017 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 15

Michael you lying POS. He's so sure this will bring Brian a running.... Delusional much? Ben is still an asshole but I guess even he deserves not to be framed for a crime he didn't commit. This version of Mel and Lindsay works for me....however I do love a good anti of them. This AU of a nice Lindsay/Mel and smart, less emotionally damaged Brian is fic crack for me. More...soon...please. 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2017 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 15

Micheal deserves every single bit of crap that's going to eventually come his way. He has absolutely no sense onf morality or integrity at all. He'll go to any length to get what he wants no matter who he hurts in the wake of his machinations. He is such a piece of shit it's unbelievable. what did mean exactly when he said, he was making sure he got what he wanted when he married Ben. Was it to make Brian jealous? Cause...that really hasn't worked out for him has it? He's just a deluded ass.

Glad Brian is keeping out of Michael's games to a degree. Not sure what Michael or Deb's reaction will be when they find out that he got a lawyer for Ben mind you. that he dodn't go running to Michael. Deb is going to find out just how far gone Michael really is.

I like Dan. Dan is a good guy. No threat to B&J's realtionship and willing to give Brian a dit bit of advise even. He's right that Ben needs counselling. Steroids of Crystal, addiction is addiction. Will he be going to the same clinic that Blake is working at I wonder? Ben needs to stop being mad at Brian. Not his fault. I like that Dan is honest about hsi feelings towards Ben. Ben has dug a massive hole for himself that he needs to eventually get himself out of. He hasn't done himself any favours by ignoring some major truths.

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2017 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 15

That psychotic little bastard!!! OMG!! I hope they fry Michael's ass in oil on the way to jail. Good for Dan noticing what apparently the cops were too busy believing Michael's ass to see... there are no defensive wounds on the alleged criminal. HA!!! I swear a turnip has more brains than Michael and yet he's getting Debbie to believe him. Now that's saying a whole lot. Don't get me wrong, I would defend my kids too but only AFTER checking out all the facts. If they were wrong, they would take their punishment and either learn from it or let it control them by becoming bitter. Debbie really should have to take parenting classes even if her son is supposed to be a grown man.

As for Justin, he's a better man- a better person- than I could ever be. After all Ben and his antics caused, I would have let the chips fall where they would after telling the police what I knew of Michael's idiocy. Brian's reaction to Dan and vice versa was hilarious! I wonder if Dan was one of Brian's tricks the reason he recognized him immediately. Or it could very well be because of Brian's business and totally innocuous. Either way, they make for a very different and interesting dynamic within the scope of learning a little more about Justin. 

Awesome job Star! This chapter gripped and held me captive until the very end of it. My anxiety spiked during the confrontation with Ben as it was meant to; my heart contracted when Justin interceded on Ben's behalf even after everything the man used him to accomplish in gaining Michael's attention (bet Ben's sorry as hell that he's ever had it now) and it expanded as Brian and Dan came to an understanding between them, knowing that Justin took the final step to include Brian in his life by introducing him to Alex. WHOA what a rush!!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2017 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 15

Michael is a piece of garbage.  I hope he gets in trouble for filing a false police report. 

Dan seems nice.  I'm glad he's able to still be friends with Justin and not be a threat to Brian.

Loving this story.

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