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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2017 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 18

It wasn't hard to see michael made his story up.

Ben needed to hear what Brian said... and actually hear it!

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2017 1:42 pm Title: Chapter 18

I love that Brian told Ben what he thinks about him. He needed to hear the truth. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2017 1:57 am Title: Chapter 18

Love the way Dan tore apart Michael's version of what happened.  For one who is supposed to be smart, Ben is unbelievable stupid.  He's not even sufficiently greatful that Justin is helping keep him out of the slammer.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 18

Omg what us he thinking?  He must have read a comic and there's was this as an idea.  He really thinks he can fool everyone? The DA, Carl?  Poor fool.  He will be lucky if he doesn't go to jail for filing a false report.

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 18

The lies start to be revealed. Ben is such a bad loser.

I love a defensive Brian.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2017 10:47 am Title: Chapter 18

Go Brian!  Ben does need to understand what he did to Justin was very serious.  Michael is crazy and could have really hurt Justin.

Alex and Emmett???  Yes, please!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 18

Well that went Brilliantly! Michael convinced no one Ben actually attacked him and he better pray the DA doesn't decide to press charges against him for filing a false statement.

Grant did a good job showing Emmett that Michael may have opened the door  to cruelty and spite but he willing walked through it, Michael didn't force him to play a 'Mean Girl' Emmett did that of his own volition so he should accept some of the blame too.

Ben also needs to face the fact that he gave into to his dark side to hold onto someone who saw him as a place holder and nothing else, you went into this relationship knowing that Michael is in love with Brian and instead of walking away with your dignity still intact he chose to stoop to Michael's level and Justin took the hit.

Ben saw Michael as a wounded puppy chasing after any scrap Brian gave him and he wanted to save Michael, in turn he lost himself to hold on to a lost cause and his jealousy turned him into a bitter, vile buffoon.

Wonder what Michael plans next now that his lie imploded on its self?

What is Ben going to do about Michael?

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 18

You go Dan! You tell Michael what a piece of shit liar he is! Woohoo! Nice warning for Ben Brian...well said

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 18

Some real home truths delivered during this chapter!!! Now Michael has been proven the liar he truly is and not just by Dan but by Carl AND the nosy neighbors! LMFAO!!!! What a pathetic schmuck! I hope Carl tells Deb every single little detail BEFORE Michael has another chance to spin another lie. 

I LOVED Brian’s talk to Ben. He's another idiot who wanted the undivided attention of an asshole! I swear Michael’s 'Mean Girls' syndrome is contagious! Ben better take heed to everything Brian said because all won't end well for him. 

As for Em and Grant's talk, I glad he didn't let Em wallow in self-pity, just told him the facts and made him hold himself accountable for buying into Michael's brand of crazy. Now maybe Em can truly become the person he thought he was. Oooh Em & Alex?? I think I really like that combo! 

Looking forward to more!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~ Nichelle 

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