Date: Aug 27, 2018 5:29 pm Title: The Reenactment
First, I want to say, is how much I like the concept for your story. I've never read a story about a reverse bashing. Also, thank you for not letting Ethan make a reprise role in Justin's love life. It's apparent, Ethan needs a dressing-down. And, OH-So-Happy to learn the fortuitousness of my comment for the civil suit against Hobbs. As so it began... the student became the teacher. Thank-you... That line was perfection. I assume it began with the rim-job... *smirk*
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your comment on the concept of this story. One night last year it just dawned on me how different things would have been if Hobbs had gone after Brian instead of Justin. Of course, it did make more sense for the series to use Justin as the victim, but I thought it would be interesting to turn it around and make it all about Brian instead and how he would handle such a traumatic event.
Actually, I owe a huge debt of gratitude to another QAFer for bringing up the idea of a civil suit, when she questioned why they didn't have Justin or his family go after Hobbs with such a thing during the series. It is definitely what would have happened in real life. I'm so glad she approved of my plan to incorporate the plot into my story. And there will be consequences for this move for one and all in the future. See you then.
Oh, I'm sure there are lots of things that will occur between teacher and student and vice versa. LOL! Huge hugs, Grammy
Date: Aug 25, 2018 9:07 pm Title: The Reenactment
And so it begins....nice! Yes, body language! Love love love!!!
Author's Response:
This is definitely only the beginning, as our couple explores all the aspects of what made the previous year worth remembering. And, of course, body language will be a big help with those lessons. Huge hugs, Grammy
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2018 7:55 pm Title: The Reenactment
I think Brian will be happy to be a student in this case.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, indeed, YumYum. Brian will find the lessons he learns about his missing year quite interesting, starting with the next day. Hope you will enjoy it too. Huge hugs, Grammy
Date: Aug 25, 2018 6:55 pm Title: The Reenactment
I’m imagining the lessons going on after this chapter ended... mmmmm. Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
I do love a cliffhanger, TAG, and this one is a beauty. You won't have to imagine for long. Our boys will continue to explore the past, starting with the morning after in the next chapter. See you then. Huge hugs, Grammy
Date: Aug 25, 2018 6:25 pm Title: The Reenactment
Great chapter. Love how they are moving forward. Your writing is fantastic as usual.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for such sweet comments, Mamab. Brian and Justin have just barely scratched the surface of their past together, but now that the door has been opened they will have to explore more of those lost memories. The ride may be bumpy at times, but it also promises to be hot too, as you'll find in the next chapter. See you then. Huge hugs, Grammy