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Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 6:44 am Title: The Visit Down Memory Lane

I love the fact that Brian wants to make new memories with Justin.  That says it all, really. TAG



Author's Response:

It is true that when you find your soul mate, nothing can stop you from connecting, or in this case re-connecting.  Brian is beginning to accept the fact that there is something about Justin that makes him special, and he is finally ready to explore what it is, just as he slowly did at the beginning of their relationship.  Next up, a visit together with Mel, Linds, and Gus.  Who knows what that will lead to?  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2018 12:53 am Title: The Visit Down Memory Lane

Lots of memories.  But even if Brian doesn't remember the end result is the same.



Author's Response:

You are so right, YumYum.  Obviously, despite himself, Brian finds himself attracted to Justin in the same way he did the first time.  Some things just can't be denied.  They'll continue exploring the past, but the future is looking much brighter now.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2018 8:41 pm Title: The Visit Down Memory Lane

I loved your recreation of the events portrayed at the beginning of the chapter. Your phraseology brought us right back to that moment.

Let’s see if we can make some new memories instead. *fans myself*  So glad Brian told Mikey to go with Ted and Emmett. Not sure why Justin didn't broach the topic when the guys were still there. But it worked out wonderfully.

I have missed this story. I was beginning to think you were MIA. But, at the same time, knew you were coming back. I was just anxious to visit... Babylon!  Now we have to sit patiently back and wait for the bed at the loft (or they going to christen the lounger and share ice cream kisses?) However you decide to write the scene, I know it will be HOT!

Thanks so much for this chapter... Looking forward to the next one.

Hugs, Cathy



Author's Response:

I have to confess that re-watching Season 1 so that I would get my facts straight wasn't exactly a hard task.  LOL!  I'm so glad you enjoyed the visit to the past.  

Right now, Brian's only concern is learning more about this young man that everyone keeps telling him was so important to him.  He doesn't really have time to deal with Michael's issues.  

Please don't worry about me abandoning this story.  Unfortunately, I do have a lot of health issues that come up and will sometimes slow me down, but I love this story and will keep on working with it until the end.  I also have a beta (the best in the world for me) who has a daughter about to be married so she isn't always able to get to chapters as quickly as in the past.  But she is devoted to the work and will always come through as quickly as she can.  I am so grateful for your support, and your always welcome comments.  I look forward to them eagerly with each new chapter.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2018 7:31 pm Title: The Visit Down Memory Lane

Our boys are wicked sexy together & even sometimes sweet. Don't tell Brian! I didn't think he was gonna get his memories back in one night. It'll take time and hopefully lots of sex lol



Author's Response:

Poor Brian finds it hard to believe he acted the way that everyone tells him he did with Justin, but despite himself, he is drawn to the young man in the exact same way he did the first time.  They will continue exploring the past with their next visit, which will be with Mel, Linds, and Gus.  But who knows what event will finally shake free Brian's misplaced memories?  In the meantime, they'll just enjoy trying to get there.  Thank you so much for your great comments, Glo.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2018 5:23 pm Title: The Visit Down Memory Lane

Great chapter.  Just love this story.  As usual you writing is wonderful.



Author's Response:

And as usual, you make me feel so good about my work.  Thank you very much for your always uplifting comments, Mamab.  The next chapter will send our boys down memory lane again with Mel, Lindsay, and Gus.  I hope you will enjoy it.  Huge hugs, Grammy

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