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Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2018 11:34 am Title: The Visit With the Girls

 Starting to wonder if Brian will ever remember ... TAG



Author's Response:

Keep the faith, TAG.  But while striving to remember, Brian and Justin are certainly having fun getting to know each other again.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2018 12:25 am Title: The Visit With the Girls

OH!  I was so happy to see this posted again today. I do hope you are feeling better. If not, I wish you well, and a quick recovery.

So Brian and Justin were a little late. The shower sex more than made up for it. Even though Justin was tender, he still initiated it. Good to see were his priorities lie. ;) 

Mel was being such a bitch! Does Brian know that he gave up his rights to his son? (I don't remember that being covered.)  Anyway, Mel best remember this is a different Brian. When he learns the events for the reason he signed over his rights, I think we will see a pissed off Brian. So I believe in her best interest she lighten up on Brian.

Maybe Brian won't fight so hard against Justin this time around, seeing the bashing has changed his perspective somewhat. Maybe it's best he doesn't remember the past too soon. Let him get to know Justin without any preconception notions. That way, IF and WHEN he remembers everything, he will see Justin in a new light, so to speak. And it's apparent just how much he already likes to spend time with Justin. So... maybe this time around will be better for both of them.

Justin was wondering which drawings Brian kept. Does Justin know which ones he should have? Hopefully, Michael only took the surface sketches and didn't dig too deep looking for 'The Sketch', and Brian eventually, accidentally, finds it in the closet, hidden away, because Brian never told anyone he bought it. Didn't Emmett say something about a desperate queen buying it and Brian said, 'Ted, you shouldn't have?' So, nobody knows. So, why would Michael look for a 'hidden sketch'?  Anyway, getting off track here...

Thank you for this update, and I look so forward to your next one. Take Care...

Hugs, Cathy

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your thoughtfulness, Cathy.  I am feeling much better with my back, although I now have a cold thanks to the 5 year old that I spent time with this last weekend.  LOL!  A cold is something I can deal with, however.  

I knew my readers would forgive Brian and Justin for being late to the luncheon when you consider the reason behind it.  Poor Mel isn't quite so forgiving.  LOL!

Brian has been told about giving up his rights and the reason behind it.  Actually, as usual with Brian, he did it for a good reason.  He knew that Mel and Linds really love each other and it was the one thing that would bring them back together after their break-up if he gave Mel the legal right to be Gus' parent.  He often sacrificed for those he cared about, but didn't often get enough credit for it.  The relationship between Mel and Brian did get prickly often, but they also had a mutual respect for each other at times too.  It's complicated.

It won't be long before something does happen which will change everything, but in the meantime Brian and Justin will continue to build a new relationship with each other.  Some things just can't be denied.

Justin is aware of all the sketches he left behind, except for 'THE' sketch.  He never knew that Brian bought that one.  The next chapter will reveal what sketches Michael returns and everyone's reaction to them.  Hopefully, you'll find it interesting.  See you then, and thank you for always leaving such wonderful comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2018 7:02 pm Title: The Visit With the Girls

Things went very well for their visit in spite of their being late.  I can't wait to find out which of Justin's drawings Michael will return.



Author's Response:

Outside of irritating Mel, the girls were more than happy to see Brian and Justin, especially together.  As for the drawings, you won't have to wait long.  The issue of the drawings will be dealt with in the next chapter.  See you then, and thank you for the lovely comments, YumYum.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2018 6:01 pm Title: The Visit With the Girls

What a nice visit. Too bad it didn't spark any memories though. Um...when will something come thru for Brian? Hmmmmm anything? lol 

I wonder if Michael damaged any of the drawings or maybe just gave them away lol 



Author's Response:

Don't worry, Glo, it won't be too much longer before an event happens that will bring about huge changes.  

Michael is smart enough to know that destroying anything of Brian's would be suicide, especially now that he knows of their existence.  We'll deal with that issue in the next chapter.  See you then.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2018 5:13 pm Title: The Visit With the Girls

Great chapter.  Love this story.  Hopefully Brian will start to remember, but the fact that he has fallen for Justin again is fantastic.  Hope all is well with you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Mamab.  It won't be long before something happens which will shake things loose for Brian.  In the meantime, they are rebuilding what was lost without Brian even knowing it.  

I am doing so much better.  Thank you for your kindness.  Huge hugs, Grammy

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