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Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2019 5:20 pm Title: The First Breakthrough

Brian has one memory... let’s hope the rest aren’t far behind! TAG



Author's Response:

There is that distinct possibility, and you won't have to wait long, TAG.  I can promise you that.  Thank you so much for commenting.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2018 4:53 am Title: The First Breakthrough

It was so wonderful to see an update on this story when I turned my computer on this evening. Brian sure had a wicked morning. I figured the dream was the sounding of the bat as it struck him, even before he realized that was what he was hearing. I'm not really surprised he went to Justin first, after all, justin was there when it happened, and it was Justin's voice he heard call out.

Yes, Brian played the brat this time. Leading Justin on, and still withholding information. But it is nice to see Brian wanting to be with Justin, after such a short time after 'meeting' him.

I have to wonder if you will give Brian his whole memory back. As time goes on, I'm beginning to think it might be best, if some things are left forgotten. I know I should censor my 'Michael Feelings' around you, but I can't help to say how the little prick strikes again. He was, oh-so-quick to tell Brian about the scarfing incident, but has yet not told Brian about the 30th birthday party Brian gave Michael, and how Michael subsequently wanted nothing to do with Brian. If it wasn't for the persistent Twink, Michael probably still wouldn't be talking to Brian.

Chris Hobbs has been suspiciously quiet these last few chapters. I can't help but wonder what the little homophobe has going on in his head, and what plans he's making for his 'get even' campaign. 

Hugs ~ Cathy



Author's Response:

Brian's connection to Justin is growing stronger each and every day, so naturally he felt that he was the one that needed to know about this breakthrough.  Together they will continue to explore their connection, which may bring back even more of the past little by little.  

There had always been a bit of teasing between Brian and Justin once they became close, so I wanted to show that the mischievous playful camaraderie was still there.

Now Cathy, never censor anything with me.  Even when I'm not on the same page with someone, I always respect their opinion, especially with someone as thoughtful as you are.  Strangely, when you look back on it there were a number of times when Michael helped out Justin with Brian (such as during the cancer situation when Brian kicked Justin out), and then there were a number of times when Justin helped Michael out (such as the situation you mentioned with the disastrous birthday party).  The way I see it, both men love Brian enough to put aside their differences if it was to help Brian in the end.  Maybe that's why I never felt so much animosity for Michael.  I completely understood his devotion and love for Brian (even if it was a tad too obsessive at times).  In a way, we are all obsessed with Brian, but who can blame us?  LOL!

Ah yes, Chris Hobbs... oh, he is still around.  And he will figure prominently in future chapters.  But for now, Brian and Justin need to grow even closer.  Hobbs is not uppermost on their minds for the moment.  More coming soon.  Thank you again for always giving me such wonderful comments, Cathy.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2018 3:37 am Title: The First Breakthrough

Great chapter.  A breakthrough for Brian is great. Can't wait for where you take them next.  Terrific writing.  Hope you have a nice Thanksgiving.



Author's Response:

The timing was right for Brian to finally remember something.  He is now feeling many of the things he felt with Justin the first time around, which is opening his mind up to the past... slowly, but surely.  The couple will explore that connection to each other in the coming chapter.  Thank you so much for your comments, Mamab.  I hope you have a great Thanksgiving day too.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2018 12:38 am Title: The First Breakthrough

It appears that Justin is the first thing Brian thinks of.  That's a good thing.



Author's Response:

Yes indeed, YumYum, Brian has already felt the connection to Justin that he had the first time around, so naturally he thought of him first when having his breakthrough.  I can promise a lot more connection in the next chapter.  Hope to see you then.  Huge hugs, Grammy

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