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Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2017 12:20 pm Title: The Awakening

OMG, my heart is breaking for Justin, Brian too, obviously. But Justin has been there with Brian through all of this and he now finds out that Brian can't even remember him :( Bless him!!! So loving this!



Author's Response:

I am so sorry that my accident has left me without internet access all this time.  I can now let you know how much I appreciate all your comments on my story.  Once I am finally able to return home and back to my computer where I write my stories, I will immediately get back to work on continuing with this one.  Thank you so much for your patience.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2017 12:11 am Title: The Awakening

Glad Brian finally woke up but, damn, it's not fair he forgot Justin completely. However my sadness at that was interrupted by giggles at the appearance of Dr. Marcus Welby, MD. Lolz. TAG



Author's Response:

Fantastic!  You are the first person to catch on to my little tribute to my favorite Doctor from my favorite medical show when i was young.  I was indeed thinking of Dr. Marcus Welby.  And boy, did I have a crush on the gorgeous James Brolin back then.  LOL!

As for Brian, the angst is just starting... well, more so for Justin of course.  But take heart.  Nothing stays the same in this world.  Thank you for making my day, TAG.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2017 8:49 pm Title: The Awakening

It's time for a redo.  Brian needs to remeet and get to know the Sunshine he has come to care for.



Author's Response:

Ah yes, they say that love is even sweeter the second time around.  Hopefully that is the case with Brian and Justin.  But of course, they'll have to work for it.  More coming soon.  Warm hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2017 6:43 pm Title: The Awakening

Noooooo omg! No memory of Sunshine...so unfair! 



Author's Response:

It's definitely a cruel diagnosis, but there is always hope that Brian will come out of this.  We know what a survivor he is.  Thank you so much for your comments, Glo.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2017 6:07 pm Title: The Waiting

This story is legit like my crack right now LOL.

I hate HATE Joan omg.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I actually had a different title for this story in the beginning.  I was going to call it 'Crack' but I was reminded that it might be confused with... well, you know what!  So I changed it to Cracked instead.  Thanks for the good laugh.    Oh, and I guess you have figured out how I feel about Joan Kinney.  LOL!  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2017 12:28 pm Title: The Waiting

Oh you tease. Can't wait to see what happens now that Brian is awake. TAG



Author's Response:

I'm afraid I'm addicted to cliffhangers.   But I can promise a lot more info on Brian's condition and the reaction of others in the upcoming chapter.  I will see you then TAG.  Thank you for your fun comments.  Warm hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2017 8:09 pm Title: The Waiting

Well the call to Joan rings true.  Just what will Brian remember?



Author's Response:

I knew that Joan Kinney was only capable of being negative with anything concerning Brian.  Thus, her reaction.  I can only say that Brian will have some memory issues to deal with, but more on that later.  Thank you so much for your great comments, YumYum.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2017 7:53 pm Title: The Hospital

Poor Justin taking the blame for what happened.  Don't know what would happen if Deb had called Joanie, but I much prefer the way you went.



Author's Response:

Justin feels guilty, but he has plenty of people in his corner.  He'll need them in the future.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 2:24 am Title: The Hospital

Loving this so so so much. Cannot wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you are hanging in there for this rather sad story.  I can promise you that it won't be all doom and gloom.  Thank you again for giving me your thougts.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2017 2:17 am Title: The Dance

OMG, NO. POOR BRIAN :(



Author's Response:

I'm sorry, SunshineSally.  I hate breaking your heart.  But hopefully time will heal your pain.  Thank you so much for commenting.  Warm hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 4:16 pm Title: The Hospital

This just breaks my heart...I never even thought of the fact, what if it was Brian who got bashed?? Omg Justin is a mess, rightfully so and thank God Deb is there to be, God help us, the voice of reason...



Author's Response:

The idea for this story came from one of our readers, but I must admit that I thought about a reversal of the Prom bashing way back in 2001 when I first saw it.  I just hope I will be able to do this complete change in the story the justice it deserves, and you will continue to find it interesting.  Thank you so much for your commnets, Gio.  Warm hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 3:52 pm Title: The Hospital

Glad Debbie's there to take charge. She'll take care of both Brian and Justin. TAG



Author's Response:

You are so right.  Debbie is a very emotional woman, but also very level-headed.  Justin did the right thing by naming her as the one to handle this terrible event.  Thanks so much for the comments, TAG.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2017 4:39 am Title: The Dance

Nice twist.  Can't wait to see where you take us.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, YumYum.  I hope that you'll have fun with the direction I take this very different version of the iconic prom bashing.  Of course there will be a few tears to start off, but I'll try not to make everyone suffer too much.  I really appreciate your wonderful comments.  Warm hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sabrinas79 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 11:40 pm Title: The Dance

Can't wait to read more...welcome back!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the warm welcome, Sabrina.  I do hope you will continue to find this story interesting as it plays out.  Warm hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 11:09 pm Title: The Dance

I've always wondered the same thing what if it were Brian who had been bashed.  I'm so along for this ride.

Can't wait to see how you are going to tell this story.

Hugs,
Jessica



Author's Response:

When watching the episode as it first aired, I actually thought it was Brian that Hobbs would go after.  Should have known he was too much of a coward to take on a grown man, but I had always wondered what would have happened if it had been Brian who was hurt instead of Justin.  Then someone I knew mentioned the thought again recently and I just knew I had to tackle the idea.  I really hope you will enjoy where this story leads me.  Thank you so much for the great comments, Jessica.  Warm hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Stauneauge Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 6:56 pm Title: The Dance

I love your stories and this version of the prom really intrigues me. How you'll let Brian cope with the aftermath of his bashing and I sooooo hope, Chris Hobbs gets what he deserves this time.

I think Justin would want to take care of Brian, but will Brian let him and will he have memory loss?

Ah, can't wait for more! I'm so glad to read something new from you, because many of your other stories I read many times already.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, Stauneauge, I always make Hobbs pay for his crimes in my stories.  LOL!  I actually have several ideas percolating in my head as to how badly Brian is hurt and how he'll react, as well as what this will do to his relationship with Justin.  I do hope you'll like the road I take with this story.  And thank you for being such a lovely reader of my work.  It makes me very happy.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2017 5:54 pm Title: The Dance

Intriguing premise. So happy to have you back writing again! TAG



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much, TAG.  I always love hearing from you.  I will do my best to keep this story interesting as we go along.  Thank you for giving it a chance.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

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