Date: Apr 28, 2019 4:22 am Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
This is not really a moan, but it sorta is!: Can we please have an update for this as we haven't since Feb? You left this with such a cliffhanger/mystery, its discombobulating!
Thanks,
Hugs 'n' stuff,
Deb.
Author's Response:
Hey Deb,
I know it's frustrating to have this particular storyline left in a cliffhanger. Believe me when I tell you it's doing the same to me. But since I've never been one to just put out a chapter for the sake of having done so, we're all stuck in this waiting game. The good news is that it's at the forefront of my mind, cooking up its own brand of mischief. The bad news is that I need to wait on it just a little bit longer, so that you all as the readers and the story itself, will not be slighted because of a rush job. My motto has always been QUALITY not quantity, and that's especially true when it comes to this particular storyline. Even I remain surprised at how it has weaved itself where it can only lead to a heartstopping climax and ultimately, a satisfiying end. Thanks for your continued patience, and support of all my work!
HAPPY READING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Feb 20, 2019 2:30 pm Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
Wow, seeing Jennifer acting so animalistic was intense. I can totally understand her passion for the Gus and everyone else who was involved but oh my goodness, that part of the chapter caught me by surprise.
The first paragraph has me a little confused as to who exactly Carlo's client is.....and who Carlo is anyway? lol Was this person in the story before & I'm having a senior moment? lol
What a chapter ending, holy shit! Talk about intense....wow!
Author's Response:
Hey Shine,
Rest assured, 'Carlo's client' was also a major surprise to me too! To answer your question though, Carlo is a hitman who only made a very small appearance in this work. He may come back briefly if he has some other information to impart, or in order to help the client in some way. I don't know yet, since other than an extremely primitive outline, I allow for everything else within the story to occur organically; in essence, the way life happens to all of us. Stay tuned!
HAPPY READING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Feb 19, 2019 8:25 pm Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
Gus is a brave kid. I hope he will be okay, so will be Leda.
Lindsay & Craig gonna certainly pay hell for their crimes. Hope Micheal pays his debt too. Their messed up thoughts are same.
Stockwell out.... we have a mystery killer ?!
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2019 5:52 pm Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
Well it looks like Craig got served for his part in this story and four more are going to get what is coming to them sooner than think.
One thing Stockwell should've always remembered when dealing with underhanded people is that God Forgives, But The Devil Never Does.
I get the feeling everyone associated with Connor and Brandon James are going to learn those words by heart and it will be a painful lesson they will remember for the rest of their lives...However Long That Is?
Craig is going to wish he stayed in his face with the other rodents who fear sunlight cause he is destroyed, Hell it he was that the moment he got involved with Connor and Brandon.
I hope Michael is arrested too he do should go down for a World Class A-HOLE with a pebble for a brain.
Lindsay waking up in a jail cell is quite appropriate since when the courts get through with her she will be buried ten feet under the prison.
way to go Misty (Thanks for adding me to the story:)) and her co-workers they are going to let anyone stop them from making sure Gus, Brian, Justin and Melanie get justice.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2019 3:12 pm Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
So glad to see another chapter and wish to read more. I want to find out how Gus is doing.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 8:04 am Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
Wow! So much good stuff. I hope Gussy is going to be Ok.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 4:48 am Title: CHAPTER 27: AFTERMATH
Bloody and punchy chapter! I hope Gus is not too hurt.