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Reviewer: Lorna Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2016 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 16- A CALL TO CHARM

OH HELL DON'T MAKE ME WAIT TO LONG YOU FOND OUT WHAT HAPPENS BECAUSE I'M GOING TO BE GOING CRAZY TILL I CAN FIND out what's going to happen next!!



Author's Response:

*PEEKING @ Lorna from behind the computer screen* LOL! I know, I know.... I'm an evil chick with a pen and a dangerous imagination. I promise it won't be too long. I'm actually working on the next chapter. It won't let me work on anything else until it's written. SMH....they are so demanding!

In the meantime, Happy Reading and HUGS!

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2016 7:45 am Title: Chapter 16- A CALL TO CHARM

Whoa!!! What a chapter!!! You know how to tease us with angst and give us some sweat.

So happy to read that Mel heard the conspiracy and was able to get Gus out of the house.

And Leda is back... Mel and her are good together; they seem to like the same things. Beautiful couple.

Can't wait for more...!



Author's Response:

Thanks Claire!! I promise more is coming very soon. This one had me sweating it out too! And now it won't let me move on until I get the next chapter written. This combination of characters is just sooooooo demanding! 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2016 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 16- A CALL TO CHARM

I love this story. This chapter had me tied in knots and crying, worrying about Justin. It's so hard imagining someone wanting to hurt him.

Great work.

~Lorie <3

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Lorie. And a HUGE thank you for helping me in my quest to the become the Queen of Complex Conjecture and Disquieting Discourse between the characters by editing this behind me! I don't think I could do this so thoroughly without you!

This chapter had me in knots as well. Lindsay is....WHEW!! I wanted to wring her neck and smack her back into the conception stage within her mother's womb....yeah, I think she pissed me off just a little, LOL. But there is plenty of story line to come to lay the SMACKETH DOWN on her and the others. Have Community Slaps Nichelle? No but I think I may have something a bit better in store with many more lasting results.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Chelle 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2016 3:43 pm Title: Chapter 16- A CALL TO CHARM

I quite literally feel scik to my stomach. Lindsey's machinations...her complete betrayl is unbelievable. What I don't get, is that she seems to really belive what she's saying. That she really thinks Brian will marry her, that she could actually convice him to drop work to please her. Her sense of entitlements is mind boggling! and that she can so easily be bought........I hope Brian is able to call the clinic in time. How much more will she do, how far will she go to get what she wants. I wonder what's really driving her sometimes. Is it actually her desire for Brian, or is it the life she seems to think she's entitled to or is it simply teh approval of her father/parents.

what's to happen with Micheal. will he fall in line with Brandon and Connor, or will they go to far in just one night and cause Micheal harm? Will they "woo" him to joining forces? How far will he go?

So much angst and intrigue!! 

Thrilled that B&J are legally joined! Thrilled that Mel is a part of teh group and that Gus is safe.

Much adventure to come and can't wait!

cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Hey my Darling Elaine!!! Hope the move went well! I hate moving more than words can ever say! SMH 

Now for your review: Lindsay is a straight up BITCH in this fic. She is vicious and has a boundary problem in the worse way. Her reason for that is two-fold. First, she is truly her parents' offspring (that will be explained by Ron in the next chapter). She is not used to being told 'NO' and when she employs other tactics to get her way and they usually work. Sadly her second reason is because she DOES believe that everything she is doing will lead to her goals being met. She believes wholeheartedly that if she thinks therefore she is.... in other words she believes that she is the yang to Brian's ying; his equal in every way that matters and the perfect spouse for him because of her upbringing and social connections which she'll regain once she's married to a successful man who would fit in with the WASP nest. Since Brian has grown used to the finer things in life, it stands to reason that he is ready to take his place at her side. In reality- well within the context of this fanfic- she thinks she's a bitch, therefore is a Bitch but her ultimate goal is to be a Rich Bitch like her mom and sister before her. We'll see if her rationale works for her.

We will see the inner workings of Michael's brain and motivations in the next chapter along with a few of the others, including Ethan (let's not forget that he's still lurking in Pittsburgh too). I will say that his time spent with Brandon did leave quite the impression on him. Needless to say that he will NOT be happy with the current state of affairs between Brian and Justin. 

 

More drama from Angst-Mama coming soon!! In the meantime, Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2016 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 16- A CALL TO CHARM

Darn, the betrayals from Brian's oldest 'friends' is heartbreaking.  Glad that Mel was able to get Gus out, but these guys are playing deadly.  They'll have to keep Mel and Gus safe from Brandon and Connor. 



Author's Response:

Hey YumYum!! Thanks for tuning in! Lindsay and Michael are the reasons why some childhood friends should stay there...in CHILDHOOD! Whereas Brian has grown up while he lived in New York, these two stay suffer from "Remember When..." syndrome. 

Mel is resourceful by herself but with Brian, she will become more so. Plus Leda is on the scene. We'll see how Lindsay will respond to that bit of information in future chapters.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: LauraB725 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2016 1:30 pm Title: Chapter 16- A CALL TO CHARM

This was an awesome chapter! I'm so glad that Mel overheard the devious plan and immediately took gus away. Lindsay is a piece of work...pure evil...and Michael, we'll, he's just a moron plain and simple. Anxiously awaiting your next update! 



Author's Response:

Hey Laura! Thank you for the compliment of my work! It is more appreciated than I can ever say. Mel has been surprising me from the moment I started writing this fic. And it works that Lindsay underestimates her and that she is almost discounting Mel's friendship with Brian. Hell, Mel and Brian even underestimate how tight they have become down through the years.

Lindsay IS pure evil here! Someone would tell her that she's a cold, calculating bitch and she would say 'Why yes I am. Nice of you to notice.' On one hand she makes me angry but in the same breath it's absolutely fun to write her this way. It's rare that I get to play around with a character that knows right from wrong but doesn't give a damn about boundaries. It will definitely be fun to see where she ends up at the end of this story.

As for Michael, he's his usual moronic self but he's also desperate in ways that makes him dangerous to Justin and therefore Brian. The next update, we'll take a look into everyone's mind and their interactions with those around them. It will be part 2 to "A Call to Charm." 

Thanks for continuing to hang out with me on my writing journey! Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2016 10:40 am Title: Chapter 16- A CALL TO CHARM

Too angry to comment properly.....WTF!!! I can't believe that witch thought that story was all an act. Hopefully Brian calls and has his donation destroyed immediately. 



Author's Response:

Stay tuned, Tamara!!! There is more insanity ahead. What can I say except that I'm an Angst-Queen with an overactive imagination! Yeah that pretty much sums this story up right, LOL

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Chelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2016 4:04 am Title: Chapter 16- A CALL TO CHARM

Thank goodness their all so arrogant they didn't go to some secret lair to discuss their evil plans and Mel was able to hear it, they all need to get exactly what they deserve and Lindsay doesn't need to bring another innocent victim into her ugly evil games.

Michael is a playing games with dangerous people who hold all the cards and he is not going to like the hand he gets dealt if he doesn't listen to Brian.

This story is so riveting I can't wait to find out what happens next :)



Author's Response:

Hey ECH!! The saying: "Pride goeth before a fall" definitely applied here. The Satanic Square as I've taken to calling Lindsay, Ron, Craig and Connor are definitely arrogant and certain of victory each in their own rights. Next chapter will have an in depth look into each of their motivations as well as Michael's and the others. I'm so glad that although updates are slow coming due to my other WIPs and writing outside of the fandom, you are still vested in this trip of trouble! 

 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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