Reviewer: Stauneauge Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2017 8:27 pm Title: Chapter 18: SUSPENSION of DISBELIEF

OMG you updated one of my favorite stories. Love you so much, honey! Happy dance here.

Can't wait what shitstorm Brian will release upon their enemies.

How very suspicious I'm of Wainwright, I'm beginning to believe him.

Lindsey, however, is really deranged; and that dumbass Michael - no words here for so much stupidity, jealousy and hatred.

Hope you find time to continue and your inspiration and ideas for this plot don't leave you.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2017 6:37 pm Title: Chapter 18: SUSPENSION of DISBELIEF

I've got chills...they're multiplying...!!! 

WOW and holy shitballs! This is so intense! So many things going on in the lives of Justin adn Brian. Their so called friends have no idea just how deep in shit they are! Lindsey may have a slight idea, but I don't think Michael really does. He's not smart enough. He actually thinks that Brandon and Connor will want him. His jealousy is going to get him killed of he doesn't get his head out of his ass soon adn get some form of protection against the brothers. Unfortunately for him, he can't see past his own wants and what he sees as beingowed to him. Namely Brian's loyalty. He wants what he wants and screw anyone else. Lindsey, being cut from the same clothe as her mother, is more than happy to align herself with the brothers to get what she wants, what she feels she deserves.

Ethan is another character who has no idea what he's getting himself into I don't think. He's another one who thinks he's owed something, who thinks he deserves what he wants. He's certainly going to get what's coming to him, just not in the way he thinks or hopes.

glad that William seems to have come around. That he and Justin seem to have come to some kind of truce. that may be the only thing that saves his ass in the end. If what he's saying is the truth, then hopefully he'll be able to obtain soem kind of protection. If not, than his demise is iminent. May be iminent either way tbh. It's a good thing he went to Cynthia first off, and was given the opportunity to speak to B&J as well. they are better prepared now hopefully.

I simply cannot believe everything that is happening to our boys, particularly Justin. Life has not been kind to him in so many ways. thankfully he has Brian now as well as a ream of friends and family who will do all they can to protect both he and Brian.

Oh girlfriend......I was SO SO SO excited to see an update to this story!! It really is just so exciting, so thrilling! It's been interminally long since we've seen an update. No guilt, I know you've been busy!! I'm just so happy to see this. I saw it last night, shortly before I was turnign out the lights and forced myself not to read it. To wait until this morning so I cold go back and re-read a couple of chapters to remind myself where we're at. I wouldn't have gotten any sleep at all if I'd done that last night. LOL.

I hope to see more of these now. Such a cliff hanger!!! My anxiety level is at a high. I can't say enough about how exciting this is. You are such a freaking talented writer!! It blows my mind that we are all gived with your talent, and so very grateful that you share your gift with us!! HUGE FAN!!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2017 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 18: SUSPENSION of DISBELIEF

Wow.  Mikey and Lindsay both need to go down and Brian's just the one to take them down with a little help from his friends.