Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 8:48 pm Title: CHAPTER 25: CROSSING LINES INCURS BLACK EYES

Thank god for Misty.  She saved the day, just wish Gus hadn't gone through the abuse.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2018 5:57 pm Title: CHAPTER 25: CROSSING LINES INCURS BLACK EYES

I hope to Heaven Above it is Brian and Justin on that flight and the police are at the airport because I want Lindsay Peterson under the jail not in it!

Gus is one Brave Little Boy, I wish I was in the story cause in would be beating Lindsay's Ass All Up and Down That Plane, Off it and to the police waiting in the terminal.

That Bitch hit and repeatedly kicked Gus so they will need to rush to the hospital and Lindsay can wait until she is untapped very slowly and painfully.

I so hope someone heard her confession that she was going to give Gus to Brandon to use as leverage to bend Brian.

I also hope there are enough police there to keep Brian from killing Lindsay, death is too sweet for her she deserves to go to prison for the rest of her life and get what she deserves there.

Aiding and Abetting, Kidnapping, Assault with a vehicle (Please Let Leda Make It!!), Abuse of a child and so many others I Hope She Never Gets Out (Also hope they tapped her down by her hair and they have to rip out chunks to get her out of the seat!!!!!)

I Am Crying Here, Please Update Soon!!!! 

 

Author's Response:

Hey 'Misty', don't worry because like Lorie and Star, you got your punch in! I couldn't NOT have you in this scene- as heartbreaking and heartsick as it is- without you being able to cold-cock Lindsay at least one good time, my friend. 

I'll be updating this very soon, especially since it's drawing to a close very soon. This was definitely one of the most emotionally charged stories I've ever done, both professionally and here in QAF land. I'm STILL reeling from this chapter.

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2018 5:04 am Title: CHAPTER 25: CROSSING LINES INCURS BLACK EYES

Whoa! I hope someone will take Lindsey away before Brian arrives; the risk of him killing her is too high, but I hope someone will teach her a lesson when she will land in jail.