Date: May 04, 2017 5:18 pm Title: Chapter 11
This fight is going to be EPIC... I can't tell what side Mel will fall in though
Date: May 04, 2017 4:58 am Title: Chapter 11
Lindsay won't know what hit her when Brian is through with her.
Date: Mar 30, 2017 1:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
Like I said, y'all need to stay in yo lanes. Folks is gettin slammed around here. Dang, can you say that didn't go well? Poor Linds, not!
Yay, Brian is in love!!
Date: Mar 29, 2017 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
I wish Michael, Lindsay and Debbie would go away. I'm so tired of their shit.
Maybe Mel will side with Brian and Justin.
I loved Brian's rooftop confession. Our boys need some alone time. Please let us have some romance. :)
Date: Mar 29, 2017 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 11
Every aspect of Deb and Michael that B&J discussed is coming true. Deb is already placing herself in a position authority. what's up with Mel? So unlike her taking the caowadly way out. she normally would stick up for herself. Where's her usual fire? At least she knows that Brian will fight for what he wants. Did she purposely not adopt Gus for this reason? Do you think she knew that her life with Lindsey would come to this, so she was going to make it easier for Brian in the long run? (idk...that thought just occurred to me)
Brian was bang on with his analysis of Michael's reason for attacking Justin rather that approaching Brian. Michael will never want to face the truth and will do anything and everything in his power to avoid it.
Lindsey has balls I must say. She's stupid...but she has balls. threatening Brian they way she did. woah. Not going to get her very far that's for sure! She needs to go by the adage, "those who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones". Brian simply has questionable behaviour in his past, she on the other hand has criminal. She has no idea what she's up against and she's going to pay dearly for her threats.
Very excited to read what you have in store for us going forward!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 29, 2017 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
Lindsey is going to start a war that she might not win!
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2017 8:52 am Title: Chapter 11
Michael, Lindsay and Debbie are pushing the limits on ugly. So much fun to read. Lindsay probably thinks Brian is bluffing. He's not.
Date: Mar 29, 2017 6:42 am Title: Chapter 11
Oooh it's ON!!Lindsay should be prepared when Brian started pursuing Gus for custody..And Mel i don't know yet what her reaction about all of this but hoping she will agree with Brian now that she's seeing the real problem from people she thought were lovable..
Debbie is so cunt, sometimes cannot see past her son being the angel one and cannot do a single shit things to other people..It's disappointment to knownshe claimed to be a mother of all gay boys in Liberty Avenue while that only happen if people will agree and cater to her and her whiny brat's need...
Date: Mar 29, 2017 5:23 am Title: Chapter 11
All I can say is "THAT'S RIGHT, BITCH!!!"
Date: Mar 29, 2017 4:31 am Title: Chapter 11
We now join "Fool Ass Folk" already in progress. Be advised that the role of Melanie Marcus will now be played by Yellow Belly.
Melanie is a COWARD in every sense of the word. Instead of telling Debbie to GO TO HELL, she goes upstairs to go to sleep. Instead of making Lindsay make a choice, she stays silent! Even with everything she heard, the one freaking question she did NOT ask Michael was what did he say to get his ass punched. Why no one ever asks Michael what HE DID is beyond me! Her half-assed response is 'I've never known Justin to be violent.' Uhhhh DUH! If that was clearly the case then where the hell was the cross-examination of Michael to get to the truth? And THIS is a lawyer?!?!?! SMH
As for that envious harridan Captain Pain-in-the-Ass, she has a lot of nerve on so many levels. First to be in Brian's loft once again WITHOUT permission or using the key for its intended purpose constitutes Breaking and Entering. I guess the law only applies when trying to use it to threaten Brian's rights to be a father to Gus but not when she commits yet another felony. I'm so HAPPY that Brian brought up the reason why he signed his rights away. Selective amnesia much, Lindsay? What's even more telling is that she didn't dispute any of Justin's rebuttals. First it was about Justin punching Michael, then it was about Justin not doing what he was supposed to do by becoming an artist instead of having a child. I would say the bitch was crazy except that she is perfectly sane in a manipulative, only-good-as-a-walking-uterus type of way. She and her cohorts, Deb and Michael need to get a life. But then again since they are all apparently sharing a brain cell between them, perhaps they should start there first.
Incidentally, Lindsay and Deb thinking that they can take Hannah away from Justin is so...OMG! I wanted to flatten myself into the story and kick their asses!! Yet they just kept talking while Michael insulted Hannah AGAIN by calling her a brat, deciding that Justin is an unfit father and should be with Brian so that Lindsay could help raise her. WTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF!! I wish a MOFO would.... LWD HAM TURKEY!! But then too, Melanie heard ALL of this and still said NOTHING!! She needs to be disbarred just on stupidity alone. She's now contagious from being around the Toxic Trio who are trying to do anything and everything to achieve what they want regarding Brian. If that right there doesn't tell Mel where she ranks in the grand scheme of her 'marriage' I don't know what does. i feel sorry for that child growing inside her. I mean if she's a spineless coward now, what's going to happen when the baby is born and she has to fend off Deb and Michael then? An Erasermate Pen has more sense then any of those assholes (yep definitely included Mel alongside the Three Stooges).
Looking forward to MORE!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2017 3:46 am Title: Chapter 11
So Mel how does it feel to be nothing more than the womb for Deb's second chance to raise another Michael?
The kid isn't even here and already she is riding roughshod over Melanie and I am laughing!!
The closer they get to the birth the more Deb and Michael are going to be in her face, Lindsay will be too busy trying to use Gus to sabotage Brian and Justin to care unless Deb and Michael can be useful.
And while Mel is on maternity leave who is going to be supporting the family? Is Lindsay working??
Too bad Mel wasn't there to hear how Lindsay really feels about her life as a wife and mother might just open her eyes or make her more blind to Lindsay's actions<smh>
Hannah is so cute and very determined to keep Brian around :)
Hope Mel and Lindsay are ready to face the wrath of Brian because he has the money and time to bury them and I can't wait :)