Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2017 7:14 am Title: Chapter 5

That was wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2017 6:03 am Title: Chapter 4

Wow so Mel doesn't know anything about what her beloved wife did..Can't wait for her reaction...

Gus and Hannah are so cute.. 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2017 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad Gus and Hannah are getting along.  I do hope they four of them can be a family.  I know both Justin and Brian have hurt each other but they need get all the misunderstandings out of the way and do what Jen said and become friends again.

Gosh I love Emmett!  His commentary was always one of the things I loved about the show. :)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2017 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow, we learn that Mel didn't know about Hannah at all.  She obviously didn't know about Lindsay offering to pay for Justin to abort her.  What else does Mel not know.  Brian must have been surprised to learn that Melanie is pregnant, even more so to find out the dad is Michael.  Ewww.  Gus and Hannah are getting along well.  Looking forward to keeping up with this story too.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2017 8:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well, it's good to see that Ted has come to his senses and looks like he'll help Brian.  This is typical Deb believing the lies her son says without looking for the truth.  I hope Brian does get Gus, because he needs to be with his sister.  Love how Hannah thinks.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2017 7:31 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wonderful advice from Jen! And an honest look at herself too. Both she and Justin have grown up as a result of Hannah it seems. 

Brian's talk with Mel was informative. I wanted to punch Lindsay in her glaring eyes. Based on what Brian imparted to Mel and her responses, Mel didn't know about the baby at all. Hopefully she'll start asking some questions of her own and see Lindsay for what she really is.

YUCK!! Mel's having a baby with Michael?!?! And all for the sake that he and Brian would be fathers together??? As if...!!! I wonder if Mel knew that was part of the plan as well. Poor Gus having to be the bearer of bad news all the way around. I'm glad that Mel, at least, told him about Justin in a sense. Had it been left up to Lindsay it never would have happened since everything has to be about her. 

The interaction between Gus and Hannah had a good start. They both seem to be accepting of each other and have even found some common ground. I have to admit that I love that Hannah is into all types of sports, even though Justin isn't. It's really great that she takes after Brian in more ways than just her appearance. 

The talks between Brian and Justin were also very informative and important. It can't have been easy for either of them. I'm glad that Brian explained his real reason for leaving- at least to a minimal degree. Justin thinking that he just wasn't wanted was so wrong on so many levels. But in his defense, when told something enough it's hard not to believe the lie over the untold truth. Hopefully they can find a way to stop blaming themselves and each other and find a way to move forward. 

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2017 4:27 pm Title: Chapter 3

There's no doubt that Hannah is Brian's dispite what Deb may say. she needs to get her nose out of his business! She's pretty infuriating in this. So glad that All 3 spoke to her as they did. They're not going to put up with her crap, nor that of the others! Looking forward to the verbal beat down Brian and the others will do to them.

Really nice first meeting between Brian and Hannah. Will be interesting to see what happens when she and Gus meet.

Good on Justin for laying down the law with Brian as far as Hannah meeting the rest of the gang. Can't blame him at all. I'd do the same thing. What will Lindsey, Michael and Deb have to say and do about it all though. Mel too. Is Justin right in his assumption or will she find out some truths about it and see what her bitch of a wife is really like and what she said to Justin.

Emmett is wonderful!! So protective of Hannah and Justin, but is willing to gibe Brian a chance. Lord help him if he screw up mind you. lol. I highly doubt thatwill happen though. I think he's come to a point where he has his priorities straight.

Excellent chapter and eagerly awaiting more. Can't seem to get enough.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 24, 2017 1:23 am Title: Chapter 3

I love how protective Emmett is of Justin and Hannah but I'm glad he's willing to help Brian win Justin back into his life.

Hannah is so adorable.  I can't wait for her to meet Gus. 

Lindsay, Michael and Deb are in for a world of hurt courtesy of Mr. Brian Kinney.

I'm so hooked on this story.

Hugs,
Jessica

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2017 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 3

This story is so addictive!

I'm glad that Brian met Hannah. Deb needs to find a life along with her son. Both of them are really pathetic! I think Jen and Justin were right that Justin was the only person/thing to keep Brian around Michael. How can a grown man like Brian stay friends with a grown child like Michael? It has always puzzled me...SMH

I can understand the walls that Justin built up where Brian was concerned. And I'm glad that Emmett pointed out to Brian why he has them. Em is a super BFF for Justin. He was spot on to point out the difference between Michael and Justin. Also, I'm glad that he touched on the situation with Lindsay. As a person who has nothing to gain or lose by telling the truth, Em's word will carry a whole lot of weight in going toe-to-toe with Sargeant Pain in the Ass. 

I can't wait until everyone gets what they ought to!! I'm a little more certain that Lindsay lied to Mel as well. The only question is how is the fiesty lawyer going to handle it? YES, I'm still rocking in my Chuck Taylors with a brand new pack waiting for the next chapter for this and SWM! Go StarBaby!!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: krussell87 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2017 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

Yay Emmett!!!!

Reviewer: Stauneauge Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2017 7:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

Amazing begin of a new story and so you :-D

Already love Hannah!

Can't await the next update.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2017 5:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

Excellent chapter! I can't believe the audasity of them just being in his home uninvited! already drinking. then on top of that saying the things they did!

Glad Ted want;s no part of them and that he wants to re connect with Emmett. Again, he's showing his ability to think for himself now and is also taking responsibility for his past behavior.

Can't wait for Brian to meet Hannah!! And of course for he and Justin to see each other again. How long before they reconnect properly?

I want to bitch slap Deb so bloody hard! I must admit, I was freaking FURIOUS reading most of this update! So pissed off at his supposed friends and family. then she has the unmitigated gall to actually go to Justin's house!!!!!!!!!! Holy crapolla! Loved that justin told her that it was Brian's idea for her not to be anywhere near Hannah. will she at some point realize the error of her ways or will she continue on as she is? Michale and Lindsey we all know will stay true to form. What about Mel? where is she in all this? Is she a bitch or will she be more sympathetic to Brian and Justin? 

Cheers!!!!!

Elaine