Date: Sep 24, 2021 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well, there's a helluva place to leave us!
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2017 1:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG What what ! I hope Lilly is OK Is Chris Hobbs April's husband ? I can't wait for the next chaper!
Date: Jun 12, 2017 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
Omg! Please update soon. You can't leave us hanging too long with a Chris Hobbs cliffhanger. I am a sucker for Hobbs redemption stories though. Great story so far!
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2017 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh dear. It was bad enough Lindsay and Michael trying to say that Brian and Justin weren't doing a good job of parenting, but then you throw Chris Hobbs into the mix. We need another chapter asap.
Date: Jun 12, 2017 8:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well it appears the double standard for living their lives and raising children as they see fit is alive and well in Michael and Lindsay's warped minds. It's funny that one rule applies to their decisions (which they consistently disregards criticism from the others) while they basically negate that Brian and Justin have the same right to make those decisions for Lily as they do for Gus and JR. I find it very telling that Michael, in particular, has trouble understanding that their decision is NOT his business. As for Lindsay, what a trifling BITCH! She forgets all she and Melanie did to make sure that Brian was excluded except when they needed money or a body to pretend they were the perfect heteronormative couple... for Gus' sake, of course. It seems both Michael and Lindsay suffer from selective hearing and selective amnesia due to their chronic Bullshitteritis (inflamation of the constant need to start Bullshit, especially if it pertains in some way to denegrating Justin). Although that's not an actual medical diagnosis, it really SHOULD be! Once again, I'm impressed by Justin's restraint in regards to Michael's mistreatment of him. I would have cold-cocked the little whiny bastard! Someone really needs to knock those two off their high horses since their partners are apparently unable to and Deb seems to have no willpower to shut them up in her house. I swear Deb's house has officially become the land of Witless Wimps and Emotional Bullies!
What a cliffhanger at the end of the chapter! I can't wait to see the reactions from both Chris and Brian and Justin. I wonder if April knows anything about Chris' past that she lets him into her house freely. It shall be interesting to see how it all plays out and what decisions the guys will make about Lily and Riley remaining friends.
Awesome job!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 26, 2017 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm hooked already!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
Date: Apr 25, 2017 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
I hope that Lilly and Riley become good friends ! I hope the little girl can do the best in the story ! Lovely family I love Brian and Justin being fathers !
Author's Response:
I've always loved Brian and Justin as fathers too. Don't worry, Riley and her family play a big part in the story.
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2017 1:52 am Title: Chapter 2
Love the nickname - Sunbeam. Lily will be fine.
Author's Response:
I figured he'd come up with something similar to Sunshine for their princess. :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2017 1:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Let's face it, with Brian and Justin as her parents she's bound to be prococious
Author's Response:
LOL You got that right!
Date: Apr 25, 2017 12:45 am Title: Chapter 2
Yes.... before you ask.... I really wanted to smack Michael, LOL But when is that any new for me? LMAO Despite it all I really enjoyed this new chapter. I remember the first day of Kindergarten for both of my boys and I know I was much worse off than Brian and Justin. Yep... I was that parent who stalked the main office staff and teacher to make sure my darlings were alright. Or more accurately, for company since my house was just too damn quiet!
Dylan was another on who I wanted to pop a good one. Yes, I know he's a little boy but hey, he's messing with a sad little girl and I definitely have a problem with that. That said, I'm glad that Lily will be the one who brings Riley out of her shell a bit. School at that age is not only supposed to be about learning but having fun! Hopefully their friendship will continue to grow.
Great Job Bea!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
LOL yep, we're both members of the "I hate Michael club!" I can totally see you standing there watching every move the boys made at school that first day. Yep, I believe it! :P Thanks for everything you do, hon. Your support means more than you know.
Date: Mar 28, 2017 9:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a sweet intro. Had to giggle a bit at B&J's frustarion at each other being able to sleep. Oh if they only knew.
Looking forward to this! I'm nervous too. Chris is coming into the picture. You're mentioning protection and forgiveness. needless to say I'm VERY intrigued! Wondering what you're going to have Michael and Lindsey involved with as well.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Yes, Chris will play a major part in the story. I can't say more without giving it away, but I'm hoping to portray him in a way that I haven't really seen before. We'll see how it turns out lol. Oh, you know Michael and Lindsay. They always have to get involved where they aren't wanted or needed!
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2017 7:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww, I do love me some Daddy Brian and Justin stories. I hope Lily kicked ass. I look forward to more from this little universe? ;)
Date: Mar 23, 2017 3:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved this PCBeachlover...looking forward to reading more.
Date: Mar 23, 2017 3:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter!
and the story synopsis is PERFECT!!!!
nice job Bea!
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2017 1:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
J'aime beaucoup ce débuts ! Je suis impatiente d'apprendre à connaitre mieux Mademoiselle Lilly ! Merci pour cette histoire J'adore Brian et Justin avec une petite fille
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it. I love Brian and Justin as parents too! :)
Date: Mar 23, 2017 9:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Excellent start Bea!! Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2017 6:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Such a wonderful start...thank u for sharing...looking forward to more...💜
Date: Mar 23, 2017 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Welcome to KD! We love getting new stories here. TAG