Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2017 3:44 am Title: Chapter 8 - The Meltdown.

I remember being pregnant.  This about covers it.  

 

I don't llike mpreg.  It has nothing to do with you or your writing.  I'm trying to push past it and just think of the story....but that is the story.  

When I cheated and looked, this story is LONG.  That is a long time to pretend all parts pertaining to a pregnant Brian are over looked.

I will press on.

Hugs.