Date: Jun 14, 2019 7:30 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2
MINE, MINE, MINE!! That's Michael's mantra. He's going to have a rude awakening when he finds out that Brian will indeed choose Justin over Michael.
I'm surprised Michael's ears aren't burning from all the talking going on about him at the Pelican.
Ethan!!! I figured he was one of the menaces on the island. Can we hope that maybe he has grown up after all these years have passed? Yeah, I didn't think either.
David talking to Michael was a waste of his breath. Too bad Mikey's little plan to have everyone walk in didn't work. Even if they had, none of them would have been JEALOUS and FOUGHT over him. Michael sure thinks his shit don't stink, doesn't he?
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jun 12, 2019 4:51 pm Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2
great, thanks
Date: Apr 28, 2019 8:21 pm Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2
Can’t wait to see what happens wit Ethan. 😳
Date: Apr 28, 2019 4:11 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2
What an egotistical diabolically thinking idiot.
Happy David has Chase. He surely wouldn't want to get mixed up with that nut job again.
Duh duh duh... Oh no Ethan is on the island. Whatever shall we do? Can't wait to read what happens when Dumb and Dumber come face to face.
Date: Apr 27, 2019 10:22 pm Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2
Nichelle:
Great update. Michael is so delusional. It is frightening how hard he is working to manipulate his "friends" back into his life. He is like the beginning chess player- thinking he knows all the moves of the pieces and how the person will act without understanding that their are other moves than the one you think the person will play. Michael is a menance to all of them. I just hope that the gang all find ways to get rid of him in their lives to the extent that his manipulations can't impact their lives.
Date: Apr 27, 2019 11:22 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2
i have one word for you, you wonderful fanfic genius: MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEEEEE
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2019 8:34 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2
I don't know an adjective that means more than "nasty", but if it exists that would be what I think of Michael.
Even David is telling him to let go, but has he ever actually listened to David?
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2019 8:01 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2
Excellent writing & chapter.
David observation about Micheal is 1000% correct. Micheal never ready to let go of his immature feelings. QaF pathetic ending is all Mikey's ill-mind image.
After watching show 2nd time realised, Micheal always burdened Brian to be take care, by clinging. If not hate, I Surely could never like Micheal (or Hal's face, he showed off too much on Camera)
Micheal Brewing so much nasty. Brian is gonna Super mad at what Mikey trying to pull on Justin. So will Ted, Drew for Blake and Emmett.
ThankYou for update.:)
Date: Apr 27, 2019 7:30 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2
Wow Michael is completely crazy I hope everything will fall on him quickly and he will suffer as much as he does to others. David is 100% right, he studied Michael well. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2019 1:24 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2
Wow, great chapter. I love how you make Mikey so disgusting. I usually don't hate anyone or anything, but OMG I really, really hate Mikey. I don't know how you manage all the WIPS. My mind would burst. I have loved this story from the beginning and can't wait to see how it ends. Hopefully happy, PLEASE. Hope you are doing ok. It seems that so many writers are not updating and I really get concerned about them especially those who used to regularly update and now weeks go by. You all feel like family to me.
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2019 1:23 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2
It's so good to see updates on all your stories. This one just shows how unbalanced Mikey really is.
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2019 12:01 am Title: IN OR OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 7: REVELATIONS Part 2
Michael has some nerve acting like he is a pump and Brian his Prized Stud Ready and Willing to Serve Anyone Michael breaks him too.
For a man who wants Brian all to himself he certainly doesn't Love it Respect him.
Everything David said about Michael is 100%on the nose unless Michael says it is okay then everything is supposed to stay the same and no one can talk in love but him, he really is Peter Pan and he sees his friends as his list boys and servants who are to how when they Rajah walks in the room.
Brian, Ted and Emmett went out to find their success while Michael is stuck in Neverland waiting for them to pay tribute in cash and accolades for being allowed in his presence (Deb Is The Same Way!) and they aren't allowed to make a move without consulting him first.
Justin, Blake and Drew are the interlopers who want to crush the Rajah which ticks him off because they are successful without him e they don't need him.
Deb raised Michael to be a Princenot realizing that as he wants to be King and Rule alone the only time he wants to see Deb is when he needs his subjects back in line, after she finishes her own version of caterwauling he is going to send her back to the dungeon with other slaves to fight for scraps.
Michael doesn't Love anyone because he never understood what it means to sacrifice for someone more important than yourself.
Michael desires Power, Attention, Worshippers and Money without the others and his mommy fighting his battles he Invisible and he can't stand that.
Michael doesn't realize that every second his life expectancy is getting shorter.
Fantastic Uodates, Thanks😄