Reviews For BEFORE I LET GO
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2019 9:48 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: MARCH OF A HUNDRED BOXES/ 7 LIVES EXPOSED

Very great new banner. I hope Diane can do the right things for her and Blake. I can't wait for the next update to see Mel and Carl feelings

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2019 7:42 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: MARCH OF A HUNDRED BOXES/ 7 LIVES EXPOSED

Poor Carl, in the middle of the fire; he doesn't have lots of possibilities here.

I fear for Blake and Diane: they have a few dangerous and greedy people after them and so is Ted.

Great story, very dense and so well written!

Thank you for the fast updates.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2019 4:16 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: MARCH OF A HUNDRED BOXES/ 7 LIVES EXPOSED

ABSOLUTELY LOVE THE NEW BANNER! Kudos to your banner maker!

Question - who's in the center pic?



Author's Response:

Thank you so MUCH!! I'm really glad that you like it! I've been trying my hand at banner making for awhile. I'm not as good at it as Marny, and can never hope to be. But I'm growing! The center pic is of Judge Melanie Marcus; a very necessary change from the 'Mel' she was with Lindsay. Also, if you look in the bottom left corner, you will see who I envision as Diane in the picture with Blake. I was going to add the Docs in, but couldn't find a pic of Alex. 

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2019 1:22 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: MARCH OF A HUNDRED BOXES/ 7 LIVES EXPOSED

Nichelle:

 

I really love this universe and am so happy to see that the guys are beginning to see Michael for what he is, a real snake.  Feel bad for Carl as he really loves Debbie but Michael is causing havoc in even in her life.  Hopefully she will come to her senses before she loses Carl too.  

Sfscarlet

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 5:30 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: MARCH OF A HUNDRED BOXES/ 7 LIVES EXPOSED

I was kind of drained after finishing Secrets and thought I'd wait until tomorrow, but as I was crawling into bed... I thought... Hell!  I've been waiting for this chapter! 

I'm looking forward to Mel, Diane's and Carl's 'talk'... and now have to wait five more chapters.. 🙄 🤪 🙃 😁

I think Diane better get a restraining order out on Michael when he gets back to town. But then again with Kiki as a manager... she won't take no crap from the little insipid.  I hope Diane heeds Carl's words... because, yeah... blackmailers just keep coming back for more. But it will be a while before Ted and Blake are back in the Pitts. Lots could happen before then.

YES!!! PLEASE LET CARL MOVE! Roommate for Ben... B/J has property... anything available at the Tremont apartments? Just how will Debbie take care of Michael then???

Next chapter... B/J's POV... OH PLEASE... let the confrontations begin... I'm waiting for all of Michael's plans to be brought to light. Let him try and dig his way out while facing the other ten people in the room. Let Brian's POV tell Michael to get off the island and never  speak to him again... restraining orders in place. That would be a happy day! (I'm feeling mean tonight.)

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 5:23 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: MARCH OF A HUNDRED BOXES/ 7 LIVES EXPOSED

Wonderful Update!😊

True, Deb disappoints cause of moron Micheal. She should take lessons from Jennifer, to be a good mother. She never coddle Justin, let him responsible in life. Deb need to realize her faults.

Micheal never learns, Will he? But he is gonna learn a Big way.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 2:45 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: MARCH OF A HUNDRED BOXES/ 7 LIVES EXPOSED

Michael just has this inherent knack for ruining everyone's lives doesn't he. Carl probably thought when he met and married Deb he'd have someone to grow older with. I feel bad for gin but he'll be better off.

Diane has to try and find out what Tino's up to and get a warning to Blake. Dr. Crystal should have OD'd a long time ago. The one thing Ted has going for him is the backing of his friends. Even with Brian's past it's going to be hard for anyone toto get him and Ted using again.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 1:40 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: MARCH OF A HUNDRED BOXES/ 7 LIVES EXPOSED

Looks like Diane is getting everything in hand.  Deb's brought everything on herself.  I just feel sorry for Carl.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 12:57 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: MARCH OF A HUNDRED BOXES/ 7 LIVES EXPOSED

Wow, wonderful update.  Your writing this week is really on a roll and I love it.  Fantastic writing as usual.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 12:57 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 8: MARCH OF A HUNDRED BOXES/ 7 LIVES EXPOSED

Diane can't pay off blackmail cause it will never stop until all the money is gone and even in death they will hound their kids I relatives until their last dying breath.

Best to beat them at their own game by keeping the Power Position while letting them think they have it, Plus gathering more information puts them on the defensive while you are playing offense.

Diane is smart to make the best changes for the diner and having great people to help make it Fabulous.

Jennifer getting Ben to keep the house and make money will further help to severe the ties to Michael and Deb and give him a comfortable best egg for later.

Carl should just start looking for a new place because even with the threat of her marriage ending Deb is arrogant enough to believe that Carl will never leave her, even if she wavers for a second all Michael has to do is call and she will revert back to Bully Deb, so he should save himself the agony and just let her reap what she has sown while he finds his peace.

Jennifer was totally accurate about Deb t she doesn't deserve pity she deserves exactly what is heading her way right between the eyes.

Thanks for the Update 😃

You must login (register) to review.