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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 8:48 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 5: THE FACTS OF LIFE EXPOSED Part 5

Well done Drew! For once, someone dares telling Michael to leave Emmett alone.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2018 12:24 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 5: THE FACTS OF LIFE EXPOSED Part 5

Good for Drew! Love him! I only have one little problem with what he said....I know a lot of women who would never feel threatened by shit for brains either, so when he said he'd have to request a sex change in order to actually feel threatened by him, sorry hun, I love your writing but that didn't sit well with me. No offense babe...



Author's Response:

Hey Shine,

The only thing I can say about Drew is that he's still a man's man, even if he's gay. In saying that, he still has all of the basic stereotypes most men think in terms of women. Also look at who he dated before he wised up and snatched up our favorite queen, Emmett? Sierra was definitely one of those 'dainty' women who basically threw their panties at Drew repeatedly (or at least that's how I thought of her). Groupies, and also women who are determined to marry for money instead of love, are mercenary in their own rights, but never up for a physical altercation.

Now the rest of us can throw the hands, or elbows, or step ladders, and chairs as well as any man (Yours truly a leader among them. Too many barroom brawls to count under my belt, LOL), but in most men's minds, we are few and far between. Sterotypical? Absolutely! But on a positive note, in real life that's changing somewhat. As my mom always says, 'Honey child don't fool'em, just school'em,' meaning show them better than you can tell them. I think between Diane and Melanie, he'll have his eyes opened a little bit more before long!

HUGS, Darling~

~Nichelle

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2018 5:18 am Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 5: THE FACTS OF LIFE EXPOSED Part 5

YOU GO TEDDY! I've never read a sex scene between Ted and Blake. At least in that descriptive ferocity. It's plain to see that tape is actually having the opposite effect on everyone, as it seems to be getting them to communicate and depending on each other. Now, that they've come out of their post-coital haze, they should use Bernard as a sounding board, while all the emotions are fresh in the minds. Blake is right... Diane needs to fire Deb. I could be under 'lack of professionalism'. Let's see how her and Michael will survive with no job, and nobody to support their stupid asses!

Oh how my heart goes out to Emmett. Such a dear, sweet, wonderful man. The pain he's feeling right now is so palpable.  Drew is not gonna let that stop loving you, Emmett. But, it is good to go see the counselor. The counselors all need to hear that recording, too. The counselors need to have a group meeting together with everyone, with a locked door (so Michael can't get out). So, everyone can give him some hard truths he needs to hear, before they all tell him to 'stay out of their lives'.

Well, I'm all caught up... I can't stand not being able to go from chapter to chapter. But, I will sit quietly by, and wait patiently. Your writing is worth the wait. I just saw you have a new chapter up of JT2U, so that helps. Thank you for writing this story. It is so very good.

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2018 9:45 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 5: THE FACTS OF LIFE EXPOSED Part 5

Wow, this is fast becoming information that were not known.  On the bright side if I remember rightly, there are things that Michael doesn't know that will bite him on his ass.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2018 9:02 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 5: THE FACTS OF LIFE EXPOSED Part 5

Fantastic chapter.  You my dear, Nichelle, are on a roll now with this story.  Absolutely wonderful.  Hope RL is getting a little better for you. 

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2018 7:51 pm Title: FIRE AND ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 5: THE FACTS OF LIFE EXPOSED Part 5

OMG! Another heartbreaking chapter! Nichelle, you're killin' me here! Love how Drew handled the slimy weasel known as Michael and protected Emmett. I think he's handling the situations better than anyone; probably because he's never had blinders on regarding Deb or Michael.

Poor Emmett. I can understand how difficult it will be to tell Drew about his past, but it's something that has to be done for them to survive Michael's duplicitous behavior toward them all.

Love your writing more and more with every chapter and every fic you write.

*HUGS*

Deb

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