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Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2018 11:43 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: THE WISEST COURSE OF ACTION

I just spent days reading all 53 chapters.

I just want to say that I love how much you detest Michael. However cunning and conniving he is, it brings me great joy when all his crap he pulls comes back to bite him in the ass. Purly poetic.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2018 2:58 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: THE WISEST COURSE OF ACTION

Let's hope that Michael will be contained before he does any more damage.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2018 5:09 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: THE WISEST COURSE OF ACTION

The next part will be a huge step! I can't wait to read it.

Write on Nichelle, we need our fix. Thank you!!!

Reviewer: bec2224 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2018 5:27 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: THE WISEST COURSE OF ACTION

I really love this story, can't wait for the meeting where there all together.  

 

Thank you for sharing with us.

 

 

bec

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2018 12:44 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: THE WISEST COURSE OF ACTION

I vote for kicking his militant midget ass off the island immediately!  YOU GO BERNARD!

I am so looking forward to all of them getting together and going over the list of messages they didn't receive, and hearing everyone's thoughts about them. And I can't wait to find out how Michael managed to do it, when it seems Brian, Ted and Emmett, were able to call their partners. I presume they will discuss Thimble Brain Ma's (Loved that name) soundbyte privately, each couple with their own counsellor. But, for during this meeting at the Pelican, Duke said they would have Ellis watch Michael, in case he meets up with the unknown variables. Should be an easy fix... Why not just have Ellis sit outside Michael's guest house, and not allow him to leave? And I'm still trying to think who these 'variables' are. (I know I've already made a guess, but I still wonder.)

14th chapter in, You said, Ben has asked Barry to make the divorce happen, lke yesterday. (Barry is the one speaking, so did you mean 'Phillip Marchand', Ben's lawyer?) I have to say, when I was double-checking those chapters in order to remember his name, I ran across Michael's inner monologue of how,  he wanted to kill off JT and Ken in real life, and not just within the pages of Rage. Why can't they all see that just like in REAL life, Zepher and Rage belong together? Sorry Zepher, JT and Ken are in, and Zepher is out. Out within the story pages, and Out in REAL life. And I don't feel one iota of sympathy for you, Zepher. I actually forgot how funny that chapter was. But then again, most of the chapters with Michael's musings are funny as hell, as he's dumber than a box of rocks.

Thank you for this update. Looking forward to the next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 6:58 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: THE WISEST COURSE OF ACTION

Michael being contained is the only way the others will be able to have a conversation that he can't interrupt.

Ben is celebrating this freedom from Michael and Deb but there is still more to deal with.

Everyone has a secret that his weighing on their hearts that needs to be lifted before they can move forward or get left behind.

Time for all secrets to he exposed so Michael and Deb have no weapons to use against them later when they confront them.

Getting Michael off that island and away from everyone is a good idea too, he won't rest until he has conquered and destroyed.

Ben should sell the store, collectibles and maybe the house to recoup what he lost catering to an overgrown moron, then a trip or a new residence might be in order in a gated community lol

I think they all should change their neighbors too time for Deb and Michael to face life with everyone coming to clean their messes.

Deb maybe getting the truth but like Michael she turns a blind eye when it involves Michael and after all these years it's really too late to change.

Great Chapter :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 6:14 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: THE WISEST COURSE OF ACTION

Happy I am to see another chapter of this.  I'm am so looking forward to the meeting with everyone but Michael.  Hopefull you manage to contain him, maybe put him in a sauna and lock the door?

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 4:43 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 6: THE WISEST COURSE OF ACTION

Great update.  Glad they are going to deal as a group with Mikey the pest !!!!!

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