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Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2017 9:00 am Title: Chapter 10

I'm so happy Gus seems to be alright.  I do hope his arm isn't too badly hurt.  I love how concerned Bree is for her brother.

Can't wait to see what dinner is all about.



Author's Response: Bree loves her big brother.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2017 8:31 am Title: Chapter 9

John, we've all wondered the same thing.  How anyone puts up with Michael is amazing. 

I'm glad things seem to be going well for the girls.

Something is going on this weekend...what is it?



Author's Response: Michael is our little shit disturber.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2017 8:24 am Title: Chapter 8

Hmmm...what is JR planning?

Oh, no Debbie found out.  I hope she follows through and doesn't say anything.

Gus is just a horny teenager...he is his dad through and through.



Author's Response: Gus isn't quite like his father in every way - then who is? LOL

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2017 8:14 am Title: Chapter 7

I'm glad they finally talked.  Emmett should have been a psychiatrist.    He's always good at giving advice.  Or maybe he just speaks Brian and Justin fluently.

 



Author's Response: I think your last comment nails it.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2017 7:58 am Title: Chapter 6

Brian and Justin need to talk now.  There's got to be something more to this than just him being upset about Bree. 

Mel needs to reel in her anger for Brian or she's going to lose her family.



Author's Response: Right on both accounts.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

Mel needs to quit bitching and maybe she should take parenting advice from Brian.  For the most part he is doing a much better job.

I think this home improvement project is becoming a bit more than expected.  I do hope they can finish it in time.

Oh, no.  Trouble with Brian and Justin.  It's got to be more than Bree.  I hope they talk soon.



Author's Response: This home improvement could be the death of them all.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 4

Awe...Britin love.  Thanks for that.  They really are so in love with each other. 

Poor Gus.  He's clueless.  He needs to attend the Brian Kinney Stud School in a bad way.  ;)



Author's Response: Our boys certainly are in love.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 3

Yes, we all come when Brian Kinney beckons. lol ;)

I can picture them all standing around looking at Ronny's ass and drooling.  Boys will be boys.

It was nice of Seamus to make them brunch even though it was passed the time.



Author's Response: I'd sure come if Brian Kinney beckoned. LOL

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

Bree is so damn adorable.  Yes, inform her to help with the bubblehoo. lol  She's a trip.

Brian better keep his word that the house will still be standing when they get back.



Author's Response: LOL Glad you're enjoying Bree.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 9:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Why do I suspect that the kids are going to be better behaved than the adults? lol

I'm not sure how I really feel about Lindsay and Mel's getaway.  I guess I normally like them with other people so I guess we'll see where you take us.

So happy you have written another installment.



Author's Response: Thank you, Mel and Lindsay are going through some changes.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 8:12 pm Title: Chapter 18

Excellent story! Mel seems to cool down about Brian. Maybe, she's changing...



Author's Response: We can always hope Mel's changing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 17

I was afraid of Michael's reaction, but it was quite smooth.



Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 7:21 pm Title: Chapter 16

At heart, Mel is still an angry woman.



Author's Response: I fear you are right.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 7:06 pm Title: Chapter 15

One step forward and 5 steps backward with Melanie! She can't help it.



Author's Response: No she can't.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 6:51 pm Title: Chapter 14

Brian was ready to buy a top of the line microwave; it's good he went with Jenny, she's down to earth.



Author's Response: She's a very practical young lady.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 13

Ha ha ha, Mister Fix-it! Excellent nickname, so much better that asshole!



Author's Response: I like that nickname too. LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 12

The girls were right to get out, Mel is finally seeing things clearly. Maybe she won't poke Brian so much now. One can hope!

Briana is such a sweet sister to Gus.

It seems Brian has listened to Justin and he asked him before answering Briana.



Author's Response: bout time for the girls.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 4:52 pm Title: Chapter 11

I loved Gus calling Briana "short stuff" and also the last question "What's Babylon" which is better than "what the backroom of Babylon".



Author's Response: Gus has that nickname for his little sister from now on.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2017 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 10

I hope Gus didn't break more than part of the wall.



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2017 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 9

The girls' honeymoon will come to an end very soon: how will they manage to keep the mood this high?

Michael, as always, is a pain in the ass.



Author's Response: Yes he is. LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2017 8:20 pm Title: Chapter 8

The repairs in the girls' home and in their couple seem to be on a good pace.

Brian and his mother communicate about tough things and don't fight anymore. That's nice to read.



Author's Response: I'm glad you like the Brian/Joan relationship.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2017 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 7

Thank you Emmett for straightening Justin's mind about Briana and Brian.



Author's Response: Emmett is wonderful. LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2017 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh, that's not a good sign what's happening between Brian and Justin.

I like Lindsey in this story: she dares putting Mel in her place and tell her they were wrong regarding Brian. I don't know if Mel works so much for competing with Brian, as if she could. They both work, Gus is supported by Brian and they don't put money on their home, except for the loan. Why does she work so much?



Author's Response: Lindsay seems the more mature one at this point.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2017 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

What's up with Justin? I hope it's only how Brian acts with Briana.
Mel seems to have lasted more than 1h before bad mouthing about Brian.



Author's Response: You'll have to keep reading to find out.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2017 6:24 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ha ha ha, THE talk between Brian and Gus: funny, but serious at the same time. Not an easy step as a father, neither as a teen.

Lindsay is starting to feel ready to walk away; she can't fix Mel's way of thinking; Mel is too negative about so many things/people.



Author's Response: I love the relationship between Brian and Gus. It would have been great to see that develop on the show.

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