Date: May 03, 2017 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 15
Interesting talk between Mel and Justin: maybe she will understand the dynamic that exists between Brian and Justin. Maybe will she see how her couple could work better.
I hope Gus will find his place when the family will expend.
Date: May 03, 2017 4:25 am Title: Chapter 15
The talk with Mel was truly enlightening for her. Justin was always lauded for being the most mature person of the group and it definitely showed here. He told her things that the gang never knew about why or how Brian and Justin succeeded. It wasn't sex; it was love in its purest form, not a preconceived definition of it. I really think that now that she has a better understanding of her part in Lindsay feeling stifled, she'll let Lindsay fly and just be there to catch her if she falls.
As for Justin's thoughts about Hunter, WOW! I can certainly understand Hunter being overwhelmed at hearing someone he admires sees the greatness he has the potential to be. I'm so HAPPY that he now sees the same thing in himself and isn't shying away from it. I just hope that on his road to being the best, he takes the time to really enjoy himself along the way. Out of all the characters, no one deserves peace and happiness more than Hunter!
Looking forward to more of this amazing work!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2017 12:35 am Title: Chapter 15
I see a side of Hunter I wouldn't have expected and that he can do greater things than Lindsay. Justin's talk with Melanie was educational too. Gret chapter.
Date: May 03, 2017 12:09 am Title: Chapter 15
I love Hunter's character in this story. He's amazing and he should know it.
I hope Gus will be okay with having more siblings. It's always tough when you are the oldest and have to learn to share your parent's affections.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2017 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
I liked this chapter, you put Hunter in front made him see what good is is to others.
Thanks for all the hard work in put into these stories.
~Teresa~
Date: May 02, 2017 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 15
So that last little bit almost had me in tears. Man alive....you worded that so beautifully! It was so emotional. I am soooooo glad that Hunter was able to hear all that and understand how great he is. How important he is to those around him. He's really seeing what remarkable possibilities lie ahead for him.
Interesting conversation between justin and Mel. Like Mel said, it seems teh student has supassed the teacher. He spoke truth to Mel. Hopefully she didn't just hear it, but actually listened. We all want to protect those we love, but by going overboard, we don't give them them opportunites to screw up and learn, or to blossom and grow. I think Lindsey will be able to really make a mark for herself in this new job. definitely something better suited for her than as Justin's assistant.
What a wonderful chapter!!!
Cheers,
Elaine