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Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 3:07 am Title: Chapter 20

YAY! Brian and Justin are officially going to be parents... AGAIN! Gus' reaction to the news was just too freaking adorable!  I love that Brian already has their names picked out, especially that they will have the initials B & J! Always a great thing in my book.

Mel's introspection was very informative and surprisingly, Michael's advice to her was very adult. It's funny that Michael pointed out how Mel treated Lindsay's infidelity. Although I could understand Mel's anger and frustration (it was a man and she was pregnant, after all), I still couldn't understand why she acted as if she never cheated herself. The fact that she was at least willing to acknowledge her insecurity because it was a man and not a woman, was very big of Mel. It's clear that it was that fact which hurt Mel more than the act itself. I wonder if with that revelation, she will finally get up the courage to tell Lindsay those things that she's afraid will hurt. Will she allow Lindsay to do the same? I agree with Justin. Those little secret thoughts can do so much  more damage if they remain hidden.

This is such a great story and I'm looking forward to MORE of it!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 2:53 am Title: Chapter 20

It's nice that the babies have names.  I'm with Brian I think they'll be born.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 1:53 am Title: Chapter 19

so sad that Craig doesn't accept Justin but so glad that Jennifer and Brian support him.  Can't wait to see how things progress with Gus being a big brother to their child

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 19

They are so attentive to each other and to Gus's needs to know.

Great chapter that shows how mature they became, but still young at heart!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 11:55 am Title: Chapter 19

I love how they are with Gus.  He does understand more than everyone thinks.  I'm glad they are going to include him and allow him to make decisions with the new baby.  I think he'll really like being a big brother...well more than he already is to Jenny.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 4:56 am Title: Chapter 19

Such a heartfelt, honest chapter! I really love the way Brian and Justin took the time to listen to Gus' concerns and address them one by one. They are great parents!

Looking forward to MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 4:54 am Title: Chapter 19

It's good that Gus is being kept in the loop this time.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 8:25 am Title: Chapter 18

I loved the way Michael and Justin feel about Ben and Brian and are free to talk about it.

Craig was surprisingly nice at the restaurant, but his last sentence to Justin was just an end to a potential warm-up.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2017 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 18

Well for once Craig seemed on his best behavior...well for him anyway.

I'm glad Shelby's parents like Hunter and the rest of the family.  Can't wait for Justin and His to get back to Brian.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2017 4:20 am Title: Chapter 18

Fantastic chapter.  No one got nasty.  Loving it.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 10:40 am Title: Chapter 17

First, my apologies, I haven't been available to keep up.  

Hunter, he's coming right along.  Good for him. 

Poor Gus.  He's going to need extra attention, I'm sure the boys can handle it.

They are lucky they werent struck blind, lol.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 6:33 pm Title: Chapter 17

Justin did the right thing when he called Brian to talk to Gus. Poor kid who has been thru difficult situations with his mothers while he couldn't have his father with him.

Hunter is funny when he tells Justin he will have to figure out Justin' disorganized organization.

 Michael's story about Lindsey was hilarious!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 17

It's kinda funny. I'm reading this story and keep expecting someone to do something bad, or act in a negative way. Everyone is getting along! There's the usual little blips i nteh raod, but that's found in any and all friendships, realtionships...family etc. They're all growing and experienceing life.

Really glad that B&J were able to reassure Gus. He's understandably nervous because of previous experience with L&M. Hopefully everyone, especially the girls will be able to help in that reassurance as well.

Hunter is getting so much experience. What a terrific opportunity for him. Glad that Lindsey has realized the opportunity given to her as well. that she's realized how poorly she behaved before. this really is the better opportunity for her.

Poor Michael...not something he expected nor wanted to see I'm sure. LOL! Naturally he had to share his misery with Justin. Both will be well on their way to inebriation just to get the images out of their heads. LOL.

such a great story!!!

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 10:24 am Title: Chapter 17

My poor Gus.  I hope he does understand that they will not stop loving him due to a new baby.  They are right, their situation is very different from Mel and Lindsay.  I think he'll be the best big brother.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 4:57 am Title: Chapter 17

I'm glad that Gus decided another baby might not be so bad.  But Michael walking in on Lindsay.  Ewww.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 3:43 am Title: Chapter 17

Awesome chapter! It's really ashamed that Mel and Lindsay's selfishness and vindictiveness towards each other has tormented Gus so much that he's afraid to trust that Brian and Justin won't do the same. It's sad that he equates getting a new sibling with being the forgotten child. Brian and Justin did an amazing job reassuring him of his place in their lives.

EWWWWWWWWW!!!! and at the same time LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! That was probably the closest Michael has ever been to the female anatomy for his entire life. And the fact that it was Lindsay... well even Justin, who has far more experience with the female form- especially drawing it- even needed his fair share of Beam, thinking about seeing her naked...LOL

Can't wait for MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 5:31 am Title: Chapter 16

Interesting talk between the guys; what is in the box? Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2017 3:25 pm Title: Chapter 16

Justin was so encouraging towards Shelby. Good that he has that from an artist like Justin.

Absolutely adore Gus and Jusstin's relationship! So loving. Gus is perfectly content in the knowledge that Justin sees him as his son. They obviously love each other deeply.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2017 10:31 am Title: Chapter 16

I love Gus putting in his two cents. lol  Him and Justin have a very unique relationship.  I'm glad Gus has two dads.

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2017 3:13 am Title: Chapter 16

Shelby is learning more than how to be an artist.  I love that Gus loves Jus.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2017 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 15

Interesting talk between Mel and Justin: maybe she will understand the dynamic that exists between Brian and Justin. Maybe will she see how her couple could work better.

I hope Gus will find his place when the family will expend.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2017 4:25 am Title: Chapter 15

The talk with Mel was truly enlightening for her. Justin was always lauded for being the most mature person of the group and it definitely showed here. He told her things that the gang never knew about why or how Brian and Justin succeeded. It wasn't sex; it was love in its purest form, not a preconceived definition of it. I really think that now that she has a better understanding of her part in Lindsay feeling stifled, she'll let Lindsay fly and just be there to catch her if she falls. 

As for Justin's thoughts about Hunter, WOW! I can certainly understand Hunter being overwhelmed at hearing someone he admires sees the greatness he has the potential to be. I'm so HAPPY that he now sees the same thing in himself and isn't shying away from it. I just hope that on his road to being the best, he takes the time to really enjoy himself along the way. Out of all the characters, no one deserves peace and happiness more than Hunter!

Looking forward to more of this amazing work!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2017 12:35 am Title: Chapter 15

I see a side of Hunter I wouldn't have expected and that he can do greater things than Lindsay.  Justin's talk with Melanie was educational too.  Gret chapter.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2017 12:09 am Title: Chapter 15

I love Hunter's character in this story.  He's amazing and he should know it.

I hope Gus will be okay with having more siblings.  It's always tough when you are the oldest and have to learn to share your parent's affections.

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2017 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 15

I liked this chapter, you put Hunter in front made him see what good is is to others.

Thanks for all the hard work in put into these stories.

 

 

~Teresa~

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