Reviews For Breath Stopping
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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2017 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

The initial scene in the series was already hot, but this is burning hot, on many levels: Brian doesn't stop Justin for 1 sec, as if he understood Justin's need for control without submission; Justin dares playing with Brian's most intimate area; Justin thinks only of Brian's pleasure, edging him until he couldn't take more.

Brilliant!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2017 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

A dangerous game, must have occurred during the pink tshirt faze.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2017 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow... so intense and so hot... Justin's need was on fire that night!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2017 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Damn!  That was so hot!

Reviewer: Saje Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2017 3:15 am Title: Chapter 1

You have been on my own secret list of "If only we could get" since we started this site. It is a very short list. So happy to have you with us! I am chair dancing right now!

I love your writing Justin's 'firsts' in particular.

Thank You for choosing to share your craft with us.

Saje

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2017 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1

CHRIST ON A BIKE, I forgot how bloody hot this story was. Thank you so much for posting it here on KD!!! I really hope some people have never read your stuff before, so I can watch them read you for the very first time :)

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