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Date: May 02, 2017 2:50 pm Title: Chapter 60

Since the beginning someone has tried to destroy Brian.  Justin who loves Brian is still not seeing him clearly.  McFed is realizing that he has also fallen in love with Brian.  He'll have to live with that knowledge.  Brian loves Justin but not enough to keep him trapped if he felt Justin was.  And Cedric is very, very smart.  Shame Justin didn't hear McClaren's speech.  You said everything in it showing that McClaren saw Brian and not just what everyone seems to think Brian is.  Ted doesn't seem to see that by letting the men who tried to kill Brian he lost Brian's trust.  So Ted was dealt with.  I almost wish he hadn't signed.  We still need to know how Melanie is settled.  Plus you must tell us that Brian does come back.