Date: Jun 08, 2021 4:22 am Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
had to read it again. Love it
Date: Mar 26, 2019 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
did read it again. Great story
Date: Jan 19, 2019 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
a wonderful story, just loved it. To bad is over. You are a great writer
Date: Dec 11, 2017 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
I really enjoyed this story. It has so many interesting layers. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the journey with me, Susi!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Dec 03, 2017 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
Thank you Nichelle for this amazing and bumpy story! All the angst was an incentive to read as fast as possible to see what was going to happen.
This last chapter is a great way to have closure and to see that quite everybody is safe and happy.
It's always great to see Lindsey and Mel at peace, even if they are no more together. I also appreciate when Mel realizes that Brian is not the asshole she always thought he was.
Poor Carl, he didn't deserve what Debbie put him through.
Ben is SO HAPPY that I smiled while reading this.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
Well done! I enjoy in your stories
Date: Nov 16, 2017 12:46 am Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
Congratulations on finishing this masterpiece my friend! As I read each character's POV, it became quite clear that they all have found peace & love in their lives and you really can't ask for more than that. I loved this Series! You are such a fabulous writer babe, can't wait to see what else you're going to finish & what comes next! Bravo! Many hugs!
Date: Oct 25, 2017 3:25 am Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
Nichelle, the epiologue was very touching and really summed up the characters and what they have gained in life. I hope all our lives are made better by the people in them ( without the drama of trying to be killed)- great job on you first fanfic, first m/m and first etc.
Date: Oct 24, 2017 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
Now that it's finished I went back and re-read it all before putting it onto my kindle. I realized how much I'd forgotten over time. Disregard my surprise in my previous review about Evangeline....yeah...that was a big aspect to forget, but between longer updates and reading so many others, it had completely slipped my mind. SORRY!
Just as Ted referred to, "All's well that ends well". Those who so deserved it, got the retrubution coming to them. And I agree with Jenn...Go BUBBA!! lol
A part of me does feel a bit saddened by Deb's fate. She brought it upon herself though.
Everyone else seems to be living well and happy. So good. They all deserved it after the hell they've all gone through.
Brillaont story and as I'm reading through again, I'm appreciating it that much more.
Cheers and thanks!
Elaine
Date: Oct 22, 2017 9:27 pm Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
What a great epilogue: we have a part of closure for quite each member of the "family".
I really loved the one from Ben: it's as if he has been suffocating for years and was given fresh air to breathe.
I thought I remembered the beginning of the story, but it's not clear, so I will start to read it once more.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
Happy writing!
Date: Oct 21, 2017 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
What a fabulous ending Nichelle! Everything is as it should be. The assholes got what they deserved as did our boys. Love love loved it! You are one of a kind my sweet & sassy friend. You're writing is incredible and I will read anything & everything you put to paper, as it were. lol
Hugs & love xo
Your Shine
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 4:57 am Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
Love the ending of this. Everyone had a say and all are doing well except for Debbie. I'm glad to see that Horvath is still around though no longer with Debbie, a good move. Ya did good.
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 4:03 am Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
The Family has faced the trials and the pain together stronger than ever as a family should.
Everyone has found their own inner strength and it has shown them that they can face any obstacles alone and in a group with the ability to not let the weight knock them down for long.
Not even remotely surprised by Deb and her wanting everyone to just forgive and help Michael, she got exactly what she deserved which being on the outside looking in as the family passes her by.
Fantastic Story! :)
Date: Oct 21, 2017 3:57 am Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
This is such an amazing, wonderful story! Loved it and will definitely be saved to my hard drive. There were so many twists and turns! Loved that Justin got to punch out Michael and Brian got to punch out Ethan!
Love that they all got what was coming to them, especially Michael, Craig, Joanie, and Claire! Feel a bit of pity for Deb and that's only because she didn't keep harping on everyone after Michael was convicted and she realized how far he would go to make Brian his. Sadly for her, it took too long.
So happy that Brian and Justin survived once again (damn, girl, you had them both SHOT!! Nearly gave me a heart attack!) and are determined to stay together!
Looking forward to all your stories being completed and can't wait to see what you write next!
*HUGS*
Deb