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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2019 10:38 am Title: Chapter 21: LIONS AND SHEEP

I thought it was time to impart a few words... it's been a few chapters now.

Ian... get a clue... your numerous texts didn't do the job... move on, as Justin told you to. What does he think will happen to him if he turns up at Brian's???

Michael... I hope you're happy without Brian's friendship... this will be the last straw. Carl warned you... and what is Ben's take going to be on this? Does he even know about Rage and the killing off of characters? I hope all of that comes out at the dinner, in front of EVERYBODY!!! Before Michael is bodily escorted out (let's hope.) Why is it so hard for him to realize Justin has as much money as Brian?

Melanie... if she is having an affair, and apparently loves this woman, why does she want Lindsay back? To take care of the house? What a selfish bitch!

Justin's gut instinct was dead on about Myrna's assistant. Good thing he's gone. I know they say they can't shut down Brian's Kinnetik account, but with Cynthia having money now, can't the bills go out of Cynthia's account?

I say let Craig fry. When wife and son leave, help them out with money. Craig can swim in the gutter.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2019 2:16 pm Title: Chapter 21: LIONS AND SHEEP

Hi Sweetheart,

I've been having my own personal marathon this week re-reading through your fics all from the very begging. All In I&II, Before I Let you go (I'M LOVING THIS FIC!) Times Up I&II

I apologize for not commenting along the way, but I'm reading on my phone and it's hard for me to type in such small space and print. What can I say? I'm Old! ha, ha, ha...

Anyways I had to stop reading at 2AM last night, because the next link from chapter 21 to 22 in Times Up 2 is broken. I guess I needed to go to sleep anyways, but it's so hard to stop reading. I'm addicted!

So this morning I went back to the table of continence and clicked on chapter 22. The link is still broken... But when I dragged my ass off the sofa, and went to my computer the links works fine.

Just one more thing, and I'm not being critical, but you need a real banner for Times Up 2. Right now you have the Kinnetikdreams award banner (Congratulations!) and it's easy to page right by it when looking for the sequel. Or it was for me I had to go back and check the fic title. It was especially hard on my phone and the font that Kinnetikdreams uses on the ap that's all curly, I can't even read what the titles are. Again, old...

Anyways I'll stop bitching, my coffees finally finished brewing, and you fic is calling me! Have I mentioned how much I love your writing!

Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2017 9:47 am Title: Chapter 21: LIONS AND SHEEP

I think that will be the end for Michaels and Brian's friendship. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2017 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 21: LIONS AND SHEEP

Ethan is as dumb as Michael: they would make a perfect whiny couple.

Brian is really generous with Mel, but that won't get her lover in Pittsburgh.

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2017 7:53 am Title: Chapter 21: LIONS AND SHEEP

Michael is a loser,so is Ian !

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 1:16 pm Title: Chapter 21: LIONS AND SHEEP

Melanie wants her cake and to eat it too.  She's utterly selfish.  Michael is about to make the biggest mistake of his life, especially when Brian finds out what he's planning.

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2016 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 21: LIONS AND SHEEP

Really Michael! You're going to have Ethan just show up at their commitment dinner. Maybe this time both Michael and Ian will get punched by both Brian and Justin... The dynamic duo strikes, the whinny wussies...

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