Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2019 9:25 am Title: Chapter 22: FROM BRITIN TO THE AMITYVILLE HORROR

I have different feelings warring regarding this chapter, starting with the party.

I'm not surprised the first words out of Debbie's mouth was to halt Brian, thinking he should go after Michael. What I am surprised about, is her lack of (do I want to say horror) to find out that was what Michael had said while completely sober. Melanie and Lindsay fall into that category too. There should have been gasps of shock and surprise.

I do want to say *Kudos* for each Michael and Justin getting some well-deserved punches, and I'd like to see them try and sue. Ethan came into their home, during their wedding... and Michael... Brian wouldn't let him. Besides, Carl was there. They were both well deserved.

I applaud Cynthia and Colby!

As far as Brian and Justin go... okay, Brian was concerned with the way Justin reacted... but when Justin more or less told him he knew that Brian forgave Michael for saying that before, Brian SHOULD have apologized. Then I think Justin should have said, 'he's your best friend, deal with it' and went into another bedroom, only arriving back in there 15 minutes later, and then dominating Brian, working through his anger. Brian should have had to stew for his lack of remorse.

Hey! This is what you get for asking what we thought of the chapter *smirk*

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2017 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 22: FROM BRITIN TO THE AMITYVILLE HORROR

What an end of chapter!!! Dominant Justin is really amazing to read.

Michael is in deep trouble with Ben and nobody but Debbie will help him.

The part with John, Peter and the drug is disturbing: a financial attack is one thing, but this is a reputation damage that couldn't be repaired easily. I hope they will have some evidence on the security tapes.

This will also lead Justin to explain to Brian how he knows the effects of this drug that he experienced once fully and a little with the Sap.

Lindsay is going to enter a "dick like" phase if Colby is patient enough.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 9:55 pm Title: Chapter 22: FROM BRITIN TO THE AMITYVILLE HORROR

It was hard to believe that Malicious Mel has changed so much.  But she's changed in a good way that bows well for J.R.  Daphne has found her match, another good thing.  John and Peter turning up gives this story another direction.  Then you have Michael, who should have been tossed out the moment Ethan showed up.