Date: Dec 03, 2017 3:39 pm Title: Chapter 2: RELAX- RELATE- RELEASE!!!
I hope the decision is a good one.
Date: Dec 03, 2017 3:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: BEING BRIAN KINNEY
I just finished reading the first part and have so many questions right now but I'm sure I will know the answers soon.
Date: Dec 03, 2017 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 50: EPILOGUE
Thank you Nichelle for this amazing and bumpy story! All the angst was an incentive to read as fast as possible to see what was going to happen.
This last chapter is a great way to have closure and to see that quite everybody is safe and happy.
It's always great to see Lindsey and Mel at peace, even if they are no more together. I also appreciate when Mel realizes that Brian is not the asshole she always thought he was.
Poor Carl, he didn't deserve what Debbie put him through.
Ben is SO HAPPY that I smiled while reading this.
Date: Dec 03, 2017 1:33 pm Title: Chapter 49: TRUTH, DARE and CONSEQUENCES
I hope Brian and Justin will sue the surgeons once they are up and running (and fucking as well).
I can't wait to read what the eraser will do to Evangeline. Such a pretty name for such a nasty person.
Date: Dec 03, 2017 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 48: FEAST of the GOLDEN GEESE Part 3
What a chapter! Fireworks!!
Date: Dec 03, 2017 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 47: FEAST of the GOLDEN GEESE Part 2
What a cliffhanger! You sure know how to keep your readers awake!
Date: Dec 03, 2017 9:04 am Title: Chapter 46: FEAST OF THE GOLDEN GEESE Part 1
Oh no no no, they should have stay together as planned!
Date: Dec 03, 2017 8:00 am Title: Chapter 45- LIKE A TAYLOR-KINNEY SCORNED Part II
I hope Daphne didn't break her hands.
Debbie is in for a huge disappointment: maybe she will finally see Michael for what he is.
Date: Dec 02, 2017 8:15 pm Title: Chapter 44: LIKE A TAYLOR-KINNEY SCORNED Part 1
Hot scene with Mel, Lindsay and Colby!
Craig is in big trouble and nobody will help him; jail is going to be his permanent night/daymare... Poor loser. Speaking of loser: Kip is another one and he shot Jenny! Mel is coming to hunt him down, once she knows.
Date: Dec 02, 2017 6:45 pm Title: Chapter 43: HELL HATH NO FURY...
Oh, no no no, that can't be happening! Brian is going to do something stupid as soon as he knows.
Date: Dec 02, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 42: FULL DISCLOSURE
I thought Dickhead Dixon was injured by the car accident.
What did Craig say to Justin to make him so mad? I hope he will survive the surgery, but will have some physical after-effects.
Date: Dec 02, 2017 9:29 am Title: Chapter 41: WELCOME TO POINT/COUNTERPOINT
I love your writing and this chapter is a good example.
This part is wonderful:
"Craig still fumed that he had not inspired that kind of devotion in his oldest son, many times wishing he could go back and just make him straight. He remembered confronting Justin one time about him choosing to be a homosexual instead of being a real man, having a family and fulfilling his duty to carry on the Taylor name with dignity, honor and respect. Justin had laughed in his face stating that it was actually funny when straight parents blame their gay kids for being attracted to the same sex instead of what they deemed morally correct. He suggested plenty of contraception with spermicidal lubricant for the hetero population so they could stop giving birth to gay kids and then the species could die out knowing that they were saved from the ‘homosexual agenda.' That was the last conversation he'd ever had with the man he used to consider his son."
Date: Dec 01, 2017 4:37 am Title: Chapter 40: TAKING A STAND
So relieved they talked about these incidents and why Brian shouldn't have known. He would have done something drastic.
Date: Nov 30, 2017 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 39: HAMMERS
Now that Justin told about his encounters with Garry and Sean, I hope he will be able to close this awful chapter.
Date: Nov 30, 2017 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 38: IN THE LAND OF THE MISSING
Oh no, Michael is going back to the good Dr David! At least, he's far away from Britin.
Hello Craig, the loser: too bad the wife is gone, without her phone, but with all their money.
I hope the end is near for the Sap and Sean.
Date: Nov 30, 2017 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 37: DANGEROUS ALLIES
The last scene!!! Poor Craig is going to stay vertical for a few hours/days with the treatment he just received. The worst is that he will have nobody at home to take care of him. Too fucking bad! I hope he will receive a video of this, just to remind him to stop being a hypocrite.
As for his wife, she is smart enough, or weak enough, to accept the offer to relocate.
The viper's nest is frightening: Stockwell, the Sap and his nephew, Hobbs & Co, and who else?
Date: Nov 30, 2017 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 36- STACKED DECK
Good riddance Michael: he's too obsessed to think clearly and save his friendship and his marriage.
The plot is thickening a lot and I guess it's not at its maximum yet.
Date: Nov 29, 2017 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 35: IT'S A SMALL WORLD AFTER ALL
Drum rolls!!! This really isn't a great time to have a party: shit is flying from everywhere.
Even Dickhead Dixon is/was there, as painful as ever.
Date: Nov 29, 2017 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 34: FCUK (not talking about the French Connection y'all!)
The tension is very high, everywhere, and Michael has not arrived yet!
Date: Nov 29, 2017 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 33: THE MATRIX DECODED
So the banker is Brian's ex-brother in law? What an interesting coincidence for the Hobb's team.
Date: Nov 29, 2017 7:31 pm Title: Chapter 32: FIRE OFF- The Arrival of Avlossa
Oh no, not Jason and Michael: two very bad surprises that Brian and Justin won't take casually.
Date: Nov 29, 2017 7:07 pm Title: Chapter 31: AND IT CAME TO PASS
Poor Ethan, all alone in his hospital room...
I hope Brian won't be bothered more with that.
Date: Nov 29, 2017 6:10 pm Title: Chapter 30: PRESERVING THE TAYLOR-KINNEYS 101
It's just a formality, but with the punches he has self-inflicted, I hope Brian will have some medical backup to highlight what Ethan has done.
Date: Nov 29, 2017 5:33 pm Title: Chapter 29: DISTURBING THE PEACE
I hope John will let Brian know what he said and to whom.
Date: Nov 29, 2017 4:59 pm Title: Chapter 28: LOVE OF THE LOVELESS- Michael
Ben is on the way out of his "marriage" and Debbie is starting to see things; will it be enough for her?
Daphne and Carl's outbursts were very accurate and yet, I bet they are not over this.
It's amazing that you used a French author for some quotes. Did you read it during your studies or afterwards? If I remember it's a difficult one.