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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2017 1:42 pm Title: Chapter 10

Brian may have started out not happy, but Bree has a way of making him so proud to be her dad.  Curtis will find that even though Alfred is a female, she's led him to a better life.



Author's Response: Bree is magical, and Curtis is heading for a much better life.

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Date: Jul 02, 2017 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 9

Woohoo.  Three sex scenes in one chapter.  And everyone had a good time.

PS-I made myself a promise to read your stories posted here in order, which will take me awhile.  But I just caught up on Zen Ben and can't wait till you post it here.  So much goodness I can't wait to comment.  The kids are growing up. <sniffle>



Author's Response: LOL Glad you enjoyed the sex scenes. And yes, the kids are growing up. Zen Ben is quite a bit in the future from this story.

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Date: Jul 02, 2017 11:01 am Title: Chapter 8

Lots of people are showing interest in Curtis even if they don't know it's Curtis they are showing interest in.  Good ole Ted finally let Brian in on the secret that's going around.  That everyone would think that Rage could be killed off is incredible.  It would be funny if I didn't want to cry.



Author's Response: Mixed emotions?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2017 4:11 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh dear.  Rage is dead at least in some peoples minds.  What will Justin say when he finds out.  Or will he laugh.  Curtis will get someone to love him.  And Brian has been outwitted by both Justin and Bree. LOL.



Author's Response: Interesting question about Justin's reaction.

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Date: Jul 02, 2017 3:49 am Title: Chapter 6

Michael is in soooo much trouble.  Thanks to Deb rumors are going around and Jennifer is out for his scalp.  But thankfully Curtis isn't going to jail.



Author's Response: In these stories Michael is always trouble.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2017 3:36 am Title: Chapter 5

Curtis life has not been easy.  He's one character that the more you know about him the more you care.  So I can say without a doubt that his future looks bright now that Hunter has him.



Author's Response: Curtis has stumbled into a good thing.

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Date: Jul 01, 2017 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 4

Michael sounds just the way one would expect.  It's nice that Lacy called his bluff and just what he deserves.  So funny.



Author's Response: Glad Michael sounds authentic. Thanks.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2017 2:27 am Title: Chapter 3

Love how Lacy tries to help and Hunter shows up just in time..



Author's Response: Thanks, they're good kids.

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Date: Jun 11, 2017 3:20 am Title: Chapter 2

Brian is in shock.  Someone dared to mug him.  But the kid kept saying he was sorry, so Brian can't be mad.  In fact, if I know Brian he'll try to help the kid.  Lacy will work with Michael but it won't be as easy as Deb thinks because of his unability to deal with changes.



Author's Response: You know Brian very well.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2017 3:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Brian has done it again.  Found someone who could benefit from being in the family.  Lacy is about to embark on a new career and with her help Rage will be all the rage.



Author's Response: Yes he has. Thank you.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2017 12:23 am Title: Chapter 15

I love Brian and Hunter's relationship.  Yes, we all want him aorund for a long time.  So he needs to stay healthy and defintely not work himself into exhaustion.

Yeah another wedding!!!  Yes, Bree you can be the flower girl.  She's just so damn cute. 

Can't wait to see what happens next! 

Thanks for sharing.

Hugs,
Jessica



Author's Response: Thank you for all the lovely comments and for sharing some of your own life. So glad you liked the story. Next instalment soon.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2017 12:13 am Title: Chapter 14

I understand exactly where Jen is coming from.  I too like to fade into the background.  I hate attention on me.  I'm sure Molly and Justin will be over the moon that Jen is finally happy.

I just want to hug Nick.  He loves Hunter so much and he's not willing to allow anything to jeopardize their long life together.



Author's Response: Sometimes fading into the background has its advantages.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2017 12:04 am Title: Chapter 13

Emmett on a shopping spree, look out Liberty Avenue! lol  I'm sure he had a blast shopping with Curtis and Hunter.

I'm glad he's able to get enrolled into school and hopefully will not have to repeat the same grade.  He's got a lot of people rooting for him to succeed.



Author's Response: I'd love to go on a shopping spree with Emmett.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 12

I forgot to add...Congrats Jen and Seth!  Another wedding. :)



Author's Response: Yes!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 12

I'm so happy for Curtis.  I know he's apprehensive about going into foster care again but I think once they tell him it will be with Raph and Hector he'll come around.  Plus he'll get to see Matty everyday.

Burn that shirt!!!  Ha-ha.  lol

 



Author's Response: The best of everything for Curtis.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 7:24 pm Title: Chapter 11

I know Justin was freaked out about Brian getting robbed but it's not like him to have sympathy for a child. I do hope he changes his view soon.

A half naked Melanie and Brian...yuck. lol



Author's Response: Brian is the most important thing to Justin along with Bree. And I agree about the yuck factor. LOL

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 10

Awe Bree.  She's so damn cute sometimes.  I'm glad the three of them were able to do the art demonstration.

Curtis seems so distraught that Alfred is a girl. lol 

 



Author's Response: I'm glad you find Bree cute. She's one of my favorite characters.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 7:06 pm Title: Chapter 9

Go Mother Taylor!  Her and Seth are finally taking their relationship to the next level.  Good for them.

 



Author's Response: It's about time.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 8

Looks like Curtis is going to be getting a new home.  I hope he'll be happy that he'll become apart of a safe family. 

I hope they can shut down the Hardigans.  



Author's Response: Curtis deserves a safe home, as do all children.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 6:23 pm Title: Chapter 7

I'm happy that Brian and Justin got a little alone time.  I wonder why Bree is so insistent on Justin going to school.

I hope Curtis decides to stick around and not run.  The guys really care about him.



Author's Response: Alone time is always good.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm glad Curtis opened up to Hunter.  He just needs someone to care for a change.  It breaks my heart that there are so many kids like him out there.  O wish we could save them all.



Author's Response: It would be wonderful if we could save the all.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 5

Poor Curtis.  I was abused as a child so I know but the fear and helplessness he was feeling.  I do hope Hector and Raphael can adopt him.



Author's Response: That's horrible. I'm so sorry to hear that.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 4

I figured Michael would behave that way.  But Justin's right.  He'll come around.  



Author's Response: We hope.

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Date: Apr 23, 2017 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 3

Lacy and Hunter are good people.  I'm so happy they were able to get Curtis in from the cold.  

I'm sure Brian is loving the extra attention Justin is giving him.



Author's Response: It's a hard way to get extra attention, but he'll enjoy it anyway.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2017 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

Poor Curtis.  I feel so bad for him.   I hope Brian and Justin can help him.  

 



Author's Response: Curtis is in a bad way.

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