Date: May 21, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
Go Lindsay. Great job. Finally Brian and Justin are getting closer.
Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:07 am Title: Chapter 6
Michael, I'd say call the police, but then you'd go to jail on drug charges. I guess you should nurse your wounds and come up with another plan ala Pink and the Brain.
Lindsay, next time just a bag of oranges, lol
Awww, loved the intimacy.
Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:07 am Title: Chapter 6
Michael, I'd say call the police, npbut then you'd go to jail on drug charges. I guess you should nurse your wounds and come up with another plan ala Pink and the Brain.
Lindsay, next time just a bag of oranges, lol
Awww, loved the intimacy.
Date: Apr 29, 2017 9:29 am Title: Chapter 6
What an amazing chapter: funny (the dildo battle), emotional (Brian and Justin, slowly going towards each other) and soothing (the way these "strangers" come together in this special place).
I can't wait for Gran to come back and meet Emmett: that's a promise for fireworks.
Date: Apr 28, 2017 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
Once again you delight us with your humour. Must admit, nearly peed myself reading about Lindsey chasing Michael around and smacking him with the dildo. LMFAO! Man alive she's pissed! And righfully so.
that scene betseen B&J.......omg...My heart was breaking for Brian. So broken over what his supposed friend did to him. An absolute betrayal. He just seemed to know that justin would give him sanctuary. It was truly a lovely scene you wrote.
Looking forward to more of course.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Apr 28, 2017 3:34 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow. Remind me not to piss off Lindz.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2017 12:57 am Title: Chapter 6
The guy next door is going to be closer then Justin thinks. Go Lindsay.
Date: Apr 28, 2017 12:43 am Title: Chapter 6
Omg god lol she beat him with a cock..... I normally do not like Lindsey nor Michael but go go Lindsey. I hope Brian will make Justine happy. Thank you for another chapter.
Date: Apr 28, 2017 12:13 am Title: Chapter 6
OMG!!!! I nearly choked on my Pepsi laughing at the cock-whipping Lindsay gave Michael!!! LMFAOOOOOooooooo!!!! It will probably be the first time and only time the Twerp will keep his mouth shut. LOL Thank you Melanie for breaking code and telling Lindsay before the Florida trip!
As for Brian and Justin, I love the fact that trust is building between them. The fact that Brian was honest in his feelings towards Justin, who is so free with his own, was hot and endearing. This is definitely shaping up to be much more than a summer fling for both of them.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2017 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
ROFLMAO!!!! I love that Lindsey went WASP on his ass and beat him with a dildo. He'll get laughed off Liberty Ave if he admits he got beat with a dildo.
Oh what a visual you wrote up!