Date: May 21, 2017 8:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
Deb is going to get along great with Gran.
Date: May 02, 2017 5:07 am Title: Chapter 8
Fantastic fic!
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Date: May 01, 2017 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
I am REALLY loving how you are writing B&J in this. Justin is being causious naturally, but is now willing to take a chance. Brian has opened himself up beautifully as well.
Looks like Justin's favour is going to be getting hsi hands on some footage from teh bar. Hopefully that works out and they are able to nail Michael's ass to the wall!
My heart hurts so much for Brian. such an incredible betrayal. I can't believe that Michael, while denying he did anything, is basically excusing himself at the same time. Vic and Deb are going to go all out trying to get the necessary info as well. Deb must be absolutely gutted at what her son has done. she understands what a betrayal it was. she knows what all Brian went through growing up, the looks he'd get, how hurt he was. He thought he had a friend in Michael. thank goodness Deb is on his side.
Looking froward to Deb and Gran meeting up! Those 2 together...OMG...I can see myself in stiches at times. I definitely see some shenanigans happening there!
Looking forward to the "team building exercise" tonight. LMAO!
Am so enjoying this story. Great humour! You have such a talent for that. It's not forced at all and comes across so naturally. Even in serious stories, you are able to relive some of the tensions but a fun shot here and there. The mix of humour and slow brewing heat in this one, along with the anger towards Michael, makes for a wonderfully well rounded story. A perfect mix of everything.
cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2017 2:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'd like those recipes myself. Emmett and Ted are going to have fun.
Date: May 01, 2017 9:01 am Title: Chapter 8
Yeah, the foul-mouthed Gran is back! It's so refreshing. I can't wait for her to meet Debbie; we might have some hilarious verbal fireworks. I think Emmett could also add some witty remarks.
As for Brian and Justin's mating dance, it's slowly, but surely shaping up.
I can't wait for the team building!
Date: May 01, 2017 5:16 am Title: Chapter 8
I LOVE their time in Sandcove thus far. Gran is a pistol- so full of life and laughter! She's a wonderful addition to this fic and YES I think she and Deb would get along famously. In fact, I think Vic should go down there too and leave Michael's idiotic, troublesome ass in the Burgh alone. Someone else would be sure to kick him in the mouth!
I'm really digging the chemistry between Brian and Justin. Already they seem to be finding a rhythm together. Between the playful, sexually-charged banter to their tender moments, I think each of them have found what they have been searching for without even trying. This is shaping up to be one summer to remember!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle