Date: May 21, 2017 8:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hopefully he gets what he deserves.
Date: May 03, 2017 4:47 pm Title: Chapter 10
Man alive...Brian has such a supporter in Gran!! She's showing him aspects of Justin that allows him to see him in a different light. She's explaining justin in a way, that may not be seen or understood. The idea of the "voices i nhis head" was spot on I think and will go a long way in enabling Brian to not just take things he sees at face value.
I literally feel nauseaus at Michael trying to explain himself. He's actully excusing his behaviour! Unbelievable!! The fact that he's scared and running at least shows that he understands what he did was so completely wrong. Still, the very idea that he thinks he can explain it away to Brain...Ugh...sickening! So selfish. No regard for what could've happened...didn't even think that there could've been an adverse reaction. Just a means to and end. I am SOOOOOOOO looking forward to him getting his ass kicked by everyone!!
Daphne is here to save the day!! Oh this video she has should prove to be intersting! There's obviously a lot on there if Sap is already being arrested. I was wondering how you were going to bring her into this.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 03, 2017 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 10
Gran is giving important information to Brian, who seems thinking of potential future with a certain blond.
So happy to read that the geek is Daphne and that she started the downfall of the Sap.
Michael can think what he wants, he put his best friend in danger; if he got the drug from the Sap, he might face a big problem; if he escaped while the police were waiting for IDs, his problem will get bigger.
Date: May 03, 2017 10:41 am Title: Chapter 10
Michael, get ready to hang out at Babylon II, the jail, lol. You and Sap can bring the flava...lol. There is no way you could think what you did was right. None.
Daphne is a Ducky, yay!!! Good job shutting that mess down.
Brian is bewitched by the beach bummy Justin, I love it. Granny better watch out sexually transmitted diseases are rampant in the elderly. Damn that little blue pill, lol.
Date: May 03, 2017 4:54 am Title: Chapter 10
Gran and Brian are a match!! She doesn't mince words with him at all. I think their relationship is really about to blossom and that can only bode well for the hoped-for relationship with Justin. She'll root for both of them without any ulterior motive except their happiness.
Daph is Ducky!!! YAY!!! I can't wait for her and Justin to look at that CD. Also I can't wait to see what Brian's reaction will be. Too bad there isn't one of what Michael did in the loft to also set Brian's mind at ease.
Incidentally....EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! Michael's been loading- or should I say unloading- into Brian's condoms! Why does he have body parts able to do that?!!!! OMG the nightmares!!! Please PLEASE pass the Brain Bleach! The upside is that the idiot is about to be toast in more ways than one. I really hope he doesn't find out where Brian is. Since he has no allies left, including Vic and Deb, perhaps he'll leave town and never return. I know it's wishful thinking but hey, it's all I got!
Great Chapter (even with the bile-bubbling part) and looking forward to the next!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2017 2:39 am Title: Chapter 10
Yeah! Daphne is Ducky. Now it's all coming together and unfortunately Michael knows he's been found out. He actually thinks he can get Brian to understand?
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2017 1:34 am Title: Chapter 10
The naked surfing sounded like fun but I saw Jaws so I would stay on the beach lol
Justin was so tender and just what Brian needed for their first time.
Love Gran she might even be able to make Deb blush lol
Michael needs his flat Ass kicked to a new planet so no one can hear his pathetic whining.
Wait I take back what I wrote before since Sap set up Michael to give Brian GHB he deserves to share the planet with Michael and listen to the whining morning, noon and night For All Of Eternity!!!
How long before whiny britches shows up and everyone decides to beat him with dildos?? rofl