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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 17

Excellent story! Too bad it ends!

Thank you for all the fun you provided us with this crazy bunch of neighbors.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 5:18 pm Title: Chapter 17

AS always, it's bittersweet to come to the end of a fic. Really enjoyed this. LOVED Gran! Probably one of my favorite characters thus far.

All are happy, well, at least the important ones are. Church lady got what was coming to her, as did Michael.

Everything tied up with a lovely big bow.

I so enjoyed this! Thank you once again.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 9:32 am Title: Chapter 17

Awwww, all well that ends well.  Mikey, you poor drugged drugger, I hope prion is fun.  The church lady was funny but she will also be enjoying prison.

 

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 6:34 am Title: Chapter 17

This story was so much fun! I hate to see it end!

And I just have to say, I want to be Gran! LOL!

Love that everything worked out with getting the old lady jailed for everything she did. Not sure how I feel about Mikey being in jail for a year for something he didn't do. It's a shame though that he didn't learn from his own experience that what he did to Brian was the same thing.

Really happy they decided to live in Sandcove; it sounds heavenly.

Please keep on writing!

Deb

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 4:49 am Title: Chapter 17

It's nice to know that everyone ends up happy except Michael.  Thank you for a wonderful trip.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 5:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Looks like this is going to be another fun one!

Deb

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 6:53 am Title: Chapter 16

The debate about Michael and the crazy old lady is ot an easy one, but she must be stopped.

The last scene was super hot!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 5:04 am Title: Chapter 16

Love the interplay of everyone trying to decide what to do about Michael.  I really think that Rodney has it nailed.  But we still don't know what they decided and how they are going to prove the old Lady is overstepping her bounds.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 4:12 am Title: Chapter 16

Like everyone else I'm on the fence about what to do about Michael. One the one hand, I want his selfish ass to go to jail whether he learns anything or not. But as someone with a friend, who was wrongly accused and did time for 15 years before he was finally exonerated, I have a big problem with jailing innocent people. I would love for that old lady and her cronies to be caught and put in jail for the rest of their natural lives. What they are doing is outright wrong BUT I hate the thought of using live bait to put her wickedly religious ass there. I wonder if there would be some way to sneak a few video feeds with sound into the house so that when they acquire the next victim, there is no way for the old lady to dispute the facts.

That said, I agree with Rodney's assessment of Michael. If Michael gets out of the trumped up charges and doesn't end up in jail, the best and most effective punishment is for him to be completely cut off from any part of Brian's life. That includes not being in a position to ask any family members about him or hearing patrons of Liberty Avenue talking about him. Too bad there aren't any exile laws like in the old days. That would surely be a great way to make sure Michael is gone and forgotten. And if Michael doesn't go to jail, it's going to be a nightmare trying to get a restraining order against him without bonafide proof that he's a danger to Brian. WOW! This is a tangled web! SMH....

Looking forward to more machinations from your devious mind!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 15

Pretty much swooned over Justin & Brian. Big ass smile on my face! :) Wondering if Mel and Lindsey will follow suit? Would be nice for them all to be close, particularly Gus, especially since they all get along.

Micheal..well, I just don't think that boy's ever gonna get a happy ending. lol. Not only does nobody believe him (although factual lol) but he's in deep deep doo doo for his own illegal actions towards Brian. Yup...he's done for. Have to say though, I'm looking forward to more of his demise though. While getting some of his own back (being drugged) what he did to Brian was unforgivable. will he listen though to what Brian said and stay away?

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Chapter 15

Take that Michael and try to figure out a way to defend yourself.

I love the way Justin told Brian that he would like to share his life.

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 11:56 am Title: Chapter 15

As much as I hate Michael, I hope we don't let her get away with kidnapping people. When is Rylie going to make a move?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 6:52 am Title: Chapter 15

Does Michael learn anything from all this?  I doubt it.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 4:31 am Title: Chapter 15

Justin's invitation to Brian made me tear up. How sweet! And now Brian made the decision to move to Sandcove. I really love the development Brian and Justin's relationship is taking. Plus as an added bonus, it looks like a new variation of Time Bender is on the horizon. I don't think Justin will have to worry about not knowing when to stop working. Brian will make sure of that! LOL

As for Michael, it looks like Karma has come a-calling in more ways than one! Not only was he drugged but now he's being accused of robbery AND it looks like he's going to be extradited back to the Pitts to face criminal charges of drug possession with intent to harm! Take THAT Captain Asshole! What's even better is that no one believed his tale even though it was the truth, just like no one initially believed that Brian NEVER had sex with Michael. Michael arguing that there was no proof of what he bought from the Sap was hogwash. Since there were plenty of bottles of water at the bar, there is no way Michael- even being the dumbass that he is- would have bought a vial of it. That village is calling again for their Idiot... Michael should go home! LMAO! 

So glad there is MORE to come of this!!! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 4:06 am Title: Chapter 15

Michael has been banned from Sandcove and thanks to the old lady he looks like a crazy man, thief and a drug addict.

Sap is so going to enjoy being Michael's new best friend.

Loved the way Justin showed Brian that he was ready to share his life with Brian very memorable moment for them.

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 1:49 am Title: Chapter 14

It is quite fitting that Michael is being drugged nd held against his will, and yet not surprising that he doesn't see the irony of his situation<smh>

Reviewer: Lorna Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 14

Ohhh this is starting to get good 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 14

I hate to say it ,but poor Michael.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 14

I love how this group gives so much to the community of Sandcove. Nothing over the top or showy, but sweet and giving nonetheless. 

Great conversation between Brian and Jen. He;s getting more insight into Justin. I think thought that it was mostly confirmation rather than new info. He's realized that his first impression of Justin was off, but they have since been put right. He's really allowing himself to be so open with not only Justin, but with those closest to him as well. 

The contest is going to be good. I'm pretty sure Justin will win it. also looking forward to Brian's reaction when he sees it. Its sounds amazing.

All of Michael's words will hopefully come back and haunt him at some point. However, I'm not so sure he's smart enough to see the irony of it all. Him yelling... "You can't drug me and tell me what you want me to feel..." is exactly what he was doing to Brian. Sadly, he'll probably never get the parallel. I'm actually opinghe does get away from these people. That he's able to contact police and stuff. AS much as I can't stand the asshole, these people are scary! I also want him to get his ass kicked by Brian and the gang. lol.

Another terrific update. As always, I look forward to anything you bring us. 

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 4:59 pm Title: Chapter 14

Ha ha ha, it's so funny how Michael is trying to convince his kidnapper that he's gay and nothing will change that; on the other hand, it's quite dramatic as I think people like that exist and try to convert gays.

Reviewer: Lorna Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 14

Ohhh this is starting to get good 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 5:18 am Title: Chapter 14

Love how Brian and Justin seem made for each other.  Michael is going to be brain washed.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 4:52 am Title: Chapter 14

LMAO!!!!! Michael has met another Joan Kinney up close and personal- only this one is magnified by 1000%. Good for his ass! Maybe he'll see the light in that what he did or tried to do to Brian was WRONG. It's funny how now that the tables have been turned on him, he's not liking it very much but Maniacal Michael actually thought that drugging Brian and trying to force him into a relationship with him against his will was A-OKay. This couldn't happen to a more deserving idiot! What a selfish, conniving WEASEL! 

I really liked Brian's talk with Jennifer. I think she really needed to get a feel for the type of man Brian is. The fact that he was willing to admit aloud that he wanted Justin in his life was wonderful. Also what the guys of Sandcove do for the residents there is great. That is definitely a small town I wouldn't mind being a part of!

Looking forward to MORE!

HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 1:14 am Title: Chapter 13

Hello Karma, This is Michael he is now your Bitch Have Fun lol

How fitting that Michael has now been drugged and is about to have a very bad experience.

Brian is making it possible for his life with Justin in Sandcove.

Can't Wait to See What Happens Next :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 13

The weird family is almost together; too bad Michael will miss that!

He is getting the same treatment he used on Brian, except nobody saw what happened nor where he is!

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