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Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2017 6:14 pm Title: Chapter 7

I wonder if Michael has made sure that the others have ignored Justin… So, they are still tricking together. I’m curious about how this will develop… They both seem to be happy and content with it...

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2017 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 6

Michael is such an asshole. Always was, always will be… I’m glad that the Brian-and-Mikey-show seems to be over and that Brian is standing up for Justin against Michael. It’s good that he no longer let himself be so much influenced by Michael. I would have loved to see this New Year’s Eve in the show.

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2017 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 5

It’s funny. So far I never read a story with an annoying Cynthia – and that’s because she is so unique and such a real good friend to Brian, not as Lindsay or Michael. He’s moving back? That’s so great. “Your” Brian has really developed a lot. It seems as if the distance from his so-called friends and the old environment has done him good. And I’m so glad you let them talk about their feelings and their fears.

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2017 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 4

I like the idea that Justin has bought the loft. And the changes sound interesting. He has changed a lot, has grown up. The roles seem to be a little interchanged. I wonder if it really was just a “little boy’s game” for Brian…

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2017 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hi again! I really love this chapter. First it shows, that it seems as if this time it is Brian who doesn’t want to let Justin go… Seems as if he has grown up, overwhelmed some of his demons! And I also like that Justin’s grown up, he is very self-confident in a good way. And then this beautiful and cute scene with Brian and Gus…

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2017 3:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

It’s good to see them together again! Even though I would like the two to have spent their first evening after such a long time together and not with some other trick, it gives your story some kind of ease and shows how independent Justin is meanwhile…

Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2017 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hi! Very interesting start and point to let their story develop further. Every time I see this scene it makes me very sad. To imagine Brian would have went away… Also very well written and I think you let them stay in their characters. I’m very curious to see what will happen next and how their first reunion will be. Thanks for sharing this!

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2017 12:19 am Title: Chapter 14

Perfect ending to a wonderful story.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2017 12:12 am Title: Chapter 13

I'm so proud of Justin - and Brian, but Justin is being so strong here.

On a lighter note, I love their dogs LOL

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2017 12:05 am Title: Chapter 12

Justin has found a friend, yay! And bless, Brian not having any for six days and being an agitated little fart :)

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 11

Ben and Justin's conversation in the park was lovely. I wish Ben would dump that loser lol

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 14

I just read this entire story.  I loved it from beginning to end.  Do you plan on having a sequel? 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 10

Justin topping was hot, I always love when Brian opens up enough and lets Justin have his wicked way with him :) 

"You want to be my boyfriend?" < SO cute how that was a little throwback to Gus's party :)

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 9

LMAO GREAT name choices. And Brian buying Justin a puppy????????? LOVE IT! And then falling in love with one himself lol. Lindsay better make this right.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 8

Boom, in your face, MIKEY!

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 7

Justin is literally a mini Brian, he's created a monster LOL.

Debie's reaction was great, I'm glad she's angry on Justin's behalf.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm so excited that Justin is starting to trust that Brian won't hurt him and that he wants Brian to move in with him. And Debbie's reaction at the end was brilliant lol

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 5

Justin is such a grown up, and Brian just wants to be trusted. Love this story so much.

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Date: Apr 29, 2017 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 4

He bought the loft??????? That is actually so cute and I love the things he did to it. I saw it all perfectly in my head.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

Justin's response to Lindsay was BLOODY BRILLIANT, and so called for. He was just a kid, but they knew that and IMO that should have made them want to keep in touch with him even more.

Gus and Brian are too stinking cute in this. Prince Justin and Pirate Brian lol

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

I loved their meeting aww, and Justin throwing himself into Brian's arms... and look how confident our little sunshine is, arranging threesomes LOL.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

I loved their meeting aww, and Justin throwing himself into Brian's arms... and look how confident our little sunshine is, arranging threesomes LOL.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2017 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am so angry at Emmett, I can forgive the others for not staying in touch, they were never really his friends, but I always thought Emmett had a soft spot for Justin :(

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH. What will happen next??????

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2017 9:51 pm Title: Chapter 14

Absolutely LOVED this story!! I was so engrossed that I couldn't even stop to review this chapter by chapter! Michael as always is, was, has been and will be an ASS!! I'm so happy that despite his machinations, what he tried his utmost to prevent still didn't work; the others came to their senses about Justin and Brian and Justin still ended up happy and together. He's such an ignorant troll but I'm glad that Justin still had Debbie throughout it all and became a success.

I cannot deny that I was tickled pink when Justin was listing all of his accomplishments for Lindsay and how much she missed because of her defection from his life. That's what she gets for listening to Michael's jealous, mean-spirited, spiteful ass. She gets absolutely NO CREDIT except for not having her own mind.

As for Brian, New York turned out to be a blessing in disguise for him. Even though he worked his ass off and eventually started Kinnetik, the real growth was in how Brian viewed the world and his place in it. He had a chance to find out what he really wanted without the distraction of the certain members of the 'family' trying to keep him 14 or even 19, when they met him. I also love that Cynthia became more a friend to him than any of the others, especially Lindsay and Michael. She wasn't afraid to force Brian to look at himself and see the bigger picture of what he wanted for his life. I can't imagine any of the others would have done that because it would have highlighted their inferiority to a complex man like Brian. As long as the 'gang' could keep Brian contained in their box, everything was right in their little worlds. Cynthia always wanted Brian to soar.

I can't deny that I was sorely disappointed with Mel, Ted and Emmett. I would have thought better of them than that, especially Em. I can't even really see how Mel could justify listening to Michael knowing what an asshole he was time-and-again to Justin and the reason behind it. I still find it so telling that Michael was willing to accept Blake into the fold while he kicked out Justin. They should have been able to see that distinction too. Idiots!

I really loved the original characters here. I wish Brian and Justin had friends like Frank and Jack in the show. Perhaps their road to happiness would have been a little more smooth if they had!

Awesome job on this story Jules!! This is definitely going on my bookshelf!

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2017 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yaaay seems i have to read this again when i saw it this morning..Read this several times already but havent managed to leave a review,doesn't have an accnt that time..

This story was brilliantly written..I could see this things happening in the series if Brian really did go to NY and Justin was left behind..

Thank you so much for sharing this to a lot of us..I loved all your story..💕💕💕

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