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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 6:14 pm Title: What that wicked witch really did

Two good news: baby and memories! So happy for them; it will help to face the trial.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 5:56 pm Title: What that wicked witch really did

Lindsay is about to get what she deserves.  Loving this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 5:34 pm Title: Guilt and second chances

I know I reviewed this but I forgot to LIKE it which I do.

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 5:18 pm Title: What that wicked witch really did

Ok, didn't expect that to happen.  Now they have more ammunition towards Lindsey to keep her away from Gus.

Glad Brian is happy about it.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 9:49 am Title: Lunch with the (overprotective) siblings

Hmmm... 5 yr old twins named Ethan & Aiden... that seems important... TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2017 4:45 am Title: Guilt and second chances

Bravo Justin!!! So well said, formulated, fact based ugly truth shouted to Melanie's face.

And she still dares calling Brian an asshole while he didn't send her to jail! What a bitch!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2017 2:15 am Title: Guilt and second chances

Well, it looks like Justin's talk got through to Melanie.  I'm looking forward to the trial.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 8:46 pm Title: Heartache

So weird! I don't bipolarity's causes, effects and treatments, but it seems very difficult to manage.



Author's Response:

I don't know much about it, but what I know is that's very difficult for the person and those who live him or her. It's a very sensitive matter. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 7:50 pm Title: Heartache

What a suspenseful chapter.  But at least Even wants to be there for Justin.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 7:31 pm Title: Heartache

Poor Isak and Even....my heart really breaks for them both. Mental illness in any form is tough to deal with but when there are out of control violent emotions, those episodes truly traumatic! I speak from experience of dealing with my sons who have similar issues that it's easy to forgive them but you never forget the aftermath.

As for that last statement: Girl, get out of my head!!! Although we are working on similar storylines, they will be vastly different in our approach. I honestly can't wait to see how you bring the Lindsay-Murder-Justin scheme together. I also can't wait to see how you bring the metaphorical anvil down on Michael's head (gotta love the reference to his comic and cartoon obsession, right? LOL)! It's sure to be as amazing as this story has been so far.

 Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing something so private with me, and I am sorry if this chapter has sadden you in anyway. It was no my intention, but in the TV show SKAM one of the biggest issues that are touched in the third season is Even's bipolarity. Not mentioning it in this story would have left it kind of incomplete.

Thanks for the support! I'm happy you like the story :) 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2017 4:42 pm Title: Welcome home

Very good and very bad news in the same chapter! Roller coaster of emotions...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2017 4:24 am Title: What have I done?

Whoa! What a chapter!

I hope Brian will come and get Gus out of there, fast.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2017 12:51 am Title: Welcome home

It's good that Brian and Justin will now have custody of Gus which will make Gus very happy.  But what is going on with Isak and Even?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2017 12:45 am Title: What have I done?

Yes, Mel.  Just what have you done?  You've not been a good mother.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2017 5:04 pm Title: Hit me with your best shot

Great plot, devilish, but Michael deserves that and a lot more!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2017 12:41 am Title: Hit me with your best shot

Love this.  Especially how Ben is colluding with Brian and Justin to get even with Michael and Mel and Lindsay.  Deliciously evil.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2017 12:25 am Title: Rage part 3

Brian won't let Justin lose out on what could be a good deal and using Gus was a smart thing.

Reviewer: LuvableBz Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2017 11:39 pm Title: Hit me with your best shot

Loving this story. 

 

Keep on Writing

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2017 6:26 pm Title: Rage part 3

The boat is starting to rock...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2017 2:07 pm Title: Rage part 2

I don't know the show called SKAM, but it seems to be a good addition to QAF world; there isn't many stories about what could have happened in LA for Justin.

And it will make Michael go completely nuts, which is often a great thing!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2017 3:08 am Title: Rage part 2

Wow, what a backstory.  I think this idea of Isak's is going to chap the unmentionable's behind.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2017 2:59 am Title: Rage part 1

Love that Kinnetik has new clients.  And now the unmentionable is showing up.  This ought to be good.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2017 4:23 pm Title: Rage part 1

I love the "unmentionable" surname!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2017 12:06 am Title: Lunch with the (overprotective) siblings

I really love where you are taking this story! Like everyone else, I am waiting with bated breath to find out what the not-so-Merry Munchers are going to do when they find out all of their lies, deceit, scheming and manipulations are about to leave them with nothing but a pair of ratty thong underwear between them, Can't wait for justice to be served! 

In the meantime, I love that Justin has Pittsburgh's Elite backing him and Brian. That's sure to make Wasp-wannabe Lindsay's bleached hair turn stark white. Not even Mother and Daddy will be able to help her out of the mess she created. Come to think of it, everyone who opposed Brian and Justin, personally and professionally, is about to get the most rude awakening! LMAO!

Please be writing MORE although I know you'll give me my fix when you can. This is just too awesome and addictive not to be craved! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2017 8:36 pm Title: Lunch with the (overprotective) siblings

Ha ha ha, Justin the overachieving twat! He just had to mention he partly owns Kinnetik to have contacts and contracts!

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