Date: Jun 24, 2017 1:26 am Title: Chapter 16
the pace they are moving is perfect... don't get me wrong, I love when there is more down and dirty lol, but this involves kids and is so the real deal!!!
Date: Jun 13, 2017 7:05 pm Title: Chapter 16
I think Brian would never be as vindictive as Rita.
Date: May 28, 2017 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
I liked everything about this chapter. Ted and Blake are already cute. Michael is just a ding bat. I swear. Ted's right, he probably will blab.
Gus is adorable. His father is growing on me, lol. Justin's a tease, lol.
Date: May 25, 2017 6:18 am Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter with truth/facts exchanged between Ted and Blake who seem to get along. Mel is really nice for once.
The end is promising...
Date: May 25, 2017 2:14 am Title: Chapter 16
Amazing chapter! Ted and Blake... for a minute there I thought Blake was going to get the business end of Teddy's tongue and not in a positive life-affirming way. I can understand Blake being concerned to a degree, given Brian's reputation in Gay PA. But if he heard the rumors and innuendo and really listened, then he would know that this is far out of Brian's character as the hit-it-and-quit-it- Stud of Liberty Avenue. It would stand to reason that if that was Brian's sole intention, then he wouldn't have involved his own son, knowing how protective of Ryan Justin is. I can't understand how a seasoned bodyguard could have missed such epic clues that this is different!
As per usual, Michael is making himself a nuisance. Mel is going to kick his ass, for real, especially if it inadvertently puts Gus in danger. I hope Brian buys a house away from the unwanted foot traffic at the loft. As for Rita, Mel where ya at girl?! I can't deny that I would love to see Mel become a legal pitbull and bite that bitch in the ass where it would hurt the most... her pocket!
Can't wait for MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2017 12:29 am Title: Chapter 16
Love how Melanie is wanting Michael gone. Justin and Brian are getting along good. I'm thinking Ted and Blake might too. So Emmett and Drew will be in the Pitts soon. Things are warming up.