Date: May 10, 2017 7:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
I bet Emmett will try to run longer next time if he finds out about Drew who can be quite an incentive.
So happy Michael couldn't get info from anybody.
I loved the last line from Brian.
Date: May 10, 2017 4:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
HA! Michael getting thwarted at every turn was great! It won't stop him of course...wondering to what lengths he'll go to get information. Wil he try using Gus? We all know that won't go over well at all!! Would be fun to watch though! lol. Hopefully Gus doesn't let anything slip accidentally.
Interesting talk between B&J. Brian is really leaving himself open here. I'm liking it. He even has no idea why, but in the end, it will be in his favour to be open and honest with Justin. It will give Justin the ability to believe Brian when shit eventually hits the fan.
Emmett by teh way is as usual, a hoot!! He cracks me up.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 10, 2017 4:54 am Title: Chapter 8
The village is calling again for their idiot named Michael to come back. It's really time he answered! Love the way Michael was thwarted in every single attempt to gain information that was NONE of his business. He really needs to get a damn life of his own.... or better yet, live the one he actually HAS! I could have hugged Deb for telling Michael off about his matchmaking bullcrap. I mean, all he has to do is look in the mirror to see an empty-headed twink since he's never progressed past puberty!
The talk between Brian and Justin was so honest and open. It's like their both letting down their guards with each other. I hope that Brian does tell Justin about his family. But even if he doesn't at the moment, I like that they are developing trust and are having the opportunity to get to know each other despite the sexual tension between them. LOL I think Brian is actually 'courting' Justin and I LOVE that since it's something the young man never really had.
I honestly don't know how I feel about the Jennifer/Molly situation simply because of Jen's initial actions regarding Justin's coming out. I think that has always bothered me. It was more like she was trying to defend the actions of Craig- a grown man- instead of the child who needed her to love him. On the surface, I can understand wanting to keep the family together but at the cost of a teenager?? A teen is still a CHILD and to me, it should have been a no-brainer where Jen's loyalties should have lain. But I digress... I'm definitely on the fence about him allowing Jen into his life again.
Glad that Em and Ted are having fun and that there is a possibility for Em to have a romance of his own! Goodness, life is just MORE for all of them without Michael around. Hopefully that trend will continue!
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2017 4:44 am Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter. I just hope Deb doesn't say anything. So far Michael doesn't know, but he's sneaky.
Date: May 09, 2017 6:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
I highly doubt that Brian will be the one that exposes Justin. His promises are real. Whether or not Ted or Emmett to is another thing altogether. I can't see them doing it on purpose, but mistakenly tell someone like...*gulp* Michael. I can totally see Michael blowing it for him. Especially after he hears from Gus that he spoke to Jus T. I just hope that Justin doesn't blame Brian in all of it or that if there's a bump in the road, it's one that is easily fixed.
I like that Brian differentiates Jus T with Justin. He's not interested in the singer except for business. The man however is a different story altogether. Justin is hesitant and rightfully so, but he'll realized eventually that Brian is the right fit for him. LOVED how he spoke to Gus!! that was just the sweetest thing. Gus will be over the moon about that and Dad will have #1 spot for a loooooooooooooooooong time! :)
Cheers
Elaine
Date: May 09, 2017 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
Brian might not break his promise, but what about Emmett and Ted? They wouldn't tell voluntarily, that's sure, but sometimes, things get out by mistake.
Nice touch to have Gus calling while Brian was with Justin.
Date: May 09, 2017 10:20 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh please don't let the reason he gets discovered be Brian, this love affair needs help. I wonder if his asking about Jen and Molly was a test. It would seem he could hire an investigator to know how their doing. Gus is over the moon. Good for him!
Date: May 09, 2017 10:10 am Title: Chapter 6
Justin baby you in danger child, lol. Thank goodness Daphne is thinking. It will take more than a pretty face and an awesome kiss to get close to JusT. At least Justin has a good idea of what and with whom he's dealing.
Brian, you could have actually helped Ben. You are after all accepting Emmetts help.
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2017 1:32 am Title: Chapter 7
There is only one problem. Gus. Now that he knows his dad is with JusT he might tell someone who would tell someone. Other than that I don't see a problem. Loving this.
Date: May 08, 2017 6:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Daphne seems to be headed in the right direction with the Sherriff! good for her. she deserves a life too.
I think after the chat with Emmett, that justin will have a new persepctive of Brian. It won't be immediate, he's too wary (understandably) Brian will prove himself though. Thankfully Emmett is on Brian's side and will do what he can to help. Once Justin learns to trust Brian, even a little, I don't think either of them will need much help in all honestly. :)
Ben has much to think about. He's already questioning his and Michael's realtionship. (can you blame him) He's realizing that there's really nothing deep about Michael at all. This is all he is. End of story. A pathetic little man who thinks that he has the right to know anythng and everything that's going on in his friend's lives. Curious as to how long Ben will withstand it all.
We all know he's not going to take Brian and Justin's eventual relationship well. I can totally see him screwing up Justin's private life just to be an asshole, or to get attention that he's not getting from the gang. I forsee much shit hitting the fan down the road. Will not bode well for Michael at all!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 07, 2017 5:04 am Title: Chapter 6
Funny how the weird behavior of Brian got Emmett almost speechless; at least, Emmett feels that there is a reason and wants to help both Brian and Justin to ease the next meeting.
Date: May 07, 2017 4:30 am Title: Chapter 6
I think Brian needs to keep Emmett as a best friend and lose the deadweight.
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2017 4:10 am Title: Chapter 6
Love the conversation between Emmett and Justin. It looks like Ben isn't as trilled with Michael as Michael thinks he is. I love everything you post, whenever you can post it.
Date: May 06, 2017 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aww.. Emmett found his sister. See, small towns have a use (j/k).
Shame on you Justin, you let Brian get you cuz he's cute. The man stalked you successfully, and you hire him? Ok, yeah, he is really cute. I hope Riley likes him.
On the real, Prince had something in his eyes that I couldn't let go of too. Well, at least until the restraining order, lol.
Date: May 06, 2017 6:59 am Title: Chapter 5
Wonderful. Glad Brian told the true.
* hugs *
[Report This]Date: May 06, 2017 6:10 am Title: Chapter 5
Ok I'm hooked just dint keep me waiting i need more.
Date: May 06, 2017 5:44 am Title: Chapter 5
Excellent battle of powerful minds!
[Report This]Date: May 06, 2017 2:45 am Title: Chapter 5
This was good! I'm hoping that Justin does decide to trust Brian.
Date: May 05, 2017 3:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
Very sweet reunion between Emmett and his sister! He was obviously so happy to see her, and that she was thrilled to see him. both got their asses out of Hazelhurst. Both are very happy intheir choices as well.
I like how first contact was with Emmett. Jus sees Brian from a distance and is intrigued. Brian is obviously smitten with the kids dancing and playing. Showing his softer side. How ong before Brian figures out that Justin is the Jus T he's looking for? He's a pretty shart cookie, so I don't see it taking long. Will he continue the intrigue once he finds out?
What kidn of conversation will they have over coffee now?
Very enjoyable story. already it's makign me smile.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 05, 2017 6:49 am Title: Chapter 4
This is going to be interesting.
Date: May 05, 2017 4:17 am Title: Chapter 4
For some time I thought it was Brian who was meeting Justin under the tree.
Nice touch to make Brian meet both Ryan and his father in one shot.
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2017 3:22 am Title: Chapter 4
How wonderful that Emmett's sister is there and is happy to see Em. Now Brian's met Jus T. How will he handle it?
Date: May 04, 2017 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ryan seems a nice and sweet kid.
"I heard Emmett groan and Ted bang his head on the table": I could only imagine the boring guys Ben brought.
Date: May 04, 2017 4:51 am Title: Chapter 3
I thought that delusional, desperate and ill-mannered Michael got on my nerves but I have finally found out that Sanctimonious Michael makes me want to commit {fictional} Mikey-murder! I mean seriously....Him saying, 'Really Brian, you should steer Gus towards real heros, not a rock star,' made me want to smack the words back into his mouth especially since he's been fantasizing about Captain Astro's tights-clad weenie for the better part of his 30 years on earth. How hypocritical!
Incidentally WHY hasn't Brian taken his key to the loft back yet? Now that they are on a road trip, this would be a great time to have the Super change the locks. If not, there is a definite possibility that Michael will invade the loft either trying to look for clues on where Brian and the others have gone or more likely, will be having 'personal relations' in Brian's bed. I don't buy for a moment that Michael is all that satisfied with Ben, sexually or emotionally. I think he's pushing for the others to get into 'relationships' with his new friends-by-default because he knows that given the opportunity he and his f*cked up views of how the world should work according to Mikey's law, will be left behind. Although Ben can be cool, no one wants to hang out with him and his 'Clone,' especially when said clone feels the need to make pronouncements on how his friends should live their lives according to his edicts. Move on Michael!!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter and Justin's interaction with the townspeople. Also looking forward to The Boyz arrival into Justin's private domain. Things are about to get really interesting!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle