Date: Jun 11, 2017 6:56 am Title: Chapter 21
I must admit I'm a bit let down that it's over. I do aporeciate your effort. Thus was fun and very different. I'm so happy Mikey did the right thing. Gus got to be the bmoc. Poor Rita, it's jugglers and mimes from here on out.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2017 5:29 am Title: Chapter 21
I enjoyed this very much and I li e your writing.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2017 4:04 am Title: Chapter 21
An exciting chapter where Gus gets the surprise of having JusT come to his class. Rita learns where she went wrong, but will it change her? All in all Justin and Brian seem happy.
Date: Jun 07, 2017 8:12 pm Title: Chapter 20
Whoa! That's a major step forward! And Michael didn't even provoke any catastrophe.
Date: Jun 07, 2017 6:22 pm Title: Chapter 20
Who knew Michael could be so smart.
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2017 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 20
Yes. You manage to get Michael coming in nicely and Justin telling the world he loves Brian. Good job.
Date: Jun 03, 2017 10:41 am Title: Chapter 19
I'm shocked, but I'm rooting for Mikey to do the right thing. Rita is a very mean woman, JusT deserves some peace.
Date: Jun 02, 2017 4:23 pm Title: Chapter 19
Michael chose the right way; good for him.
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2017 5:02 am Title: Chapter 19
Wow! Michael has changed for the better. What did Rita do?
Date: Jun 02, 2017 4:41 am Title: Chapter 19
Michael actually did the right thing. Wow.
Date: May 30, 2017 4:16 pm Title: Chapter 18
Yeah, Rita is getting some payback. I just hope the reporters will make her life a living hell for some time.
I love how Brian and Ryan are interacting; Ryan seems to consider that Brian is part of his life from now; I guess it's only an additional "plus" for Justin, so he knows they are well together.
Molly is such a pest when she wants; she didn't even try to understand her brother. Glad that Jenifer wasn't that blind.
Date: May 30, 2017 11:30 am Title: Chapter 18
Molly, Molly, I'm so happy you calmed down. It wasn't his fault. Rita is a piece of work. I'm glad Jen is back, I hope Justin is happy reconnecting. Brian and Rian, too cute.
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2017 4:38 am Title: Chapter 18
Yay, Rita finally got what she deserved. Why doesn't Justin tell Molly that Rita never gave him the messages from his mother?
Date: May 28, 2017 9:04 pm Title: Chapter 17
The end is hilarious: I could imagine the scene with big Bubba, the piles, the phone and the dumb asses. Excellent.
As for the beginning, hot and a little funny: no condom, that's too bad!
Date: May 28, 2017 7:59 pm Title: Chapter 17
Beautifully done! Sex scenes are tough that was cute and sexy. Michael is craycray. Drew and Emmett, yeah, no that wasn't in the version I watched, it would have made that caca better. Speaking of caca, wow, that so gross I wouldn't have even wanted to see it, let alone have it happen to me. Poor Rita, lol.
Date: May 28, 2017 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
I liked everything about this chapter. Ted and Blake are already cute. Michael is just a ding bat. I swear. Ted's right, he probably will blab.
Gus is adorable. His father is growing on me, lol. Justin's a tease, lol.
Date: May 28, 2017 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 17
Harve neeeds to post that to YouTube immediately!!!
Date: May 28, 2017 5:29 am Title: Chapter 17
That was so evil, more please.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2017 4:20 am Title: Chapter 17
Oh lord. Tell me you have something devilishly planned for Rita.
Date: May 25, 2017 6:18 am Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter with truth/facts exchanged between Ted and Blake who seem to get along. Mel is really nice for once.
The end is promising...
Date: May 25, 2017 2:14 am Title: Chapter 16
Amazing chapter! Ted and Blake... for a minute there I thought Blake was going to get the business end of Teddy's tongue and not in a positive life-affirming way. I can understand Blake being concerned to a degree, given Brian's reputation in Gay PA. But if he heard the rumors and innuendo and really listened, then he would know that this is far out of Brian's character as the hit-it-and-quit-it- Stud of Liberty Avenue. It would stand to reason that if that was Brian's sole intention, then he wouldn't have involved his own son, knowing how protective of Ryan Justin is. I can't understand how a seasoned bodyguard could have missed such epic clues that this is different!
As per usual, Michael is making himself a nuisance. Mel is going to kick his ass, for real, especially if it inadvertently puts Gus in danger. I hope Brian buys a house away from the unwanted foot traffic at the loft. As for Rita, Mel where ya at girl?! I can't deny that I would love to see Mel become a legal pitbull and bite that bitch in the ass where it would hurt the most... her pocket!
Can't wait for MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2017 12:29 am Title: Chapter 16
Love how Melanie is wanting Michael gone. Justin and Brian are getting along good. I'm thinking Ted and Blake might too. So Emmett and Drew will be in the Pitts soon. Things are warming up.
Date: May 22, 2017 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 15
I thought the banging was Michael, thank goodness it's Deb. Yay, food and wisdom on the way.
As for Blake, I'm not sure Justin was right. Blake should have warned him. After all, he chose Rita, who is now out to destroy him (sort of). Brian basically stalked him, and has a bad reputation, the security person that ignores that isn't doing his job. Thankfully, he left quietly.
Will the Emmett Drew show change locales?
Date: May 22, 2017 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 14
This is going to get messy. Michael's in like with Jules, lol. Seriously, if he was less self centered he'd almost be human, tee-hee.
Date: May 22, 2017 2:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
Deb is such a nice person in this story!
Blake is weird and a little too much concerned by Brian's reputation. Once Drew is there, things should be OK on this side.
The kids seem to get along very well.