Penname: BellaDonne Real name: Gretchen
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[Report This] Published: Feb 24, 2017 Updated: Mar 06, 2017
Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OMG 12-10 too funny.  Poor Brian couldn't just leave, lol.  Power struggles are funny. Justin, I call a tech, I know you actually helped Mel.  And I know you didn't destroy the man's tractor and crops.  I hope you're saying "that's the truth and I'm sticking to it" with your fingers crossed. It's a good thing he's wealthy cuz he's gonna have to pay, lol.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thanks so much for this funny and often side splitting story.  Justin progressed and digressed but it's all good cuz he got his man.  Brian and Justin were adorable even with a corrected Claire and an enlightened MM. I wonder if Marco or the other PJs found men or started wearing real shoes? Lol

Thanks again!!!!

[Report This] Published: Mar 09, 2017 Updated: Mar 30, 2017
Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

What did you do to Em??? I'm just joking, he was fine in context.  I just never get to complain about your stories so... Lol

OMG you have a very interesting set up, Mikey is in a relationship sabotaging everyone else and being enabled by the same.  I can't believe he was sitting on the car.   Someone (all of them) need to find a back bone and some smarts.  Even Brian, he said the right things but he seemed to neglect finishing Mikey and making things crystal.  If he wants Justin it's going to require some work.

Im loving it!!!

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay a new story from my favorite author!!! Justin is being harassed by an irrational Mikey or is Ben saying Justin's name in his sleep?  And I am assuming he's manipulated Ted and Em into thinking his fears are right. I'm hoping it's a short distance for them to get to the truth.  Ted is best at Kinnetic and Em is best hanging with Baby.  

Brian is very sexy so far.  I can't wait to see how this progresses.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Why would you insult him after Brian warned both of you??? Oh well, loyalty makes strange bedfellows.  Brian could fix this being direct more so than blunt.  Then again any of them actually listening would solve the problems too.  I love that Justin stepped to them, they deserved it.  Linds is sane, supportive and can draw, this is an AU, lol.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Cute a Brian and Blake friendship, very different.  I love when Brian gave them both a true Come to Jesus moment, even though I feel like he's repeating himself (makes me wonder how thick Mikey will be).   Emmetts schizo, I hope he gets it now.  Ted is being a jerk, but he's heart broken so... And here's Deb, she wasn't so bad.  Although all of this is too weird for adults. I wonder if Mikey's head will explode?

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ah, Mikey.  How out of character that he should go off half cocked, lol.  I love it! Well, Deb now knows much more than anyone, I wonder how she will react?  Ben wtf? I agree it is a shame that you're gorgeous and still have to fight to keep Mikey, but this is a dangerous game. And I love Carl oh, and Linds, Mel, and big gold star for Blake.  He was willing to help Emmett but not dumb enough to trust him not to gossip about him and Brian.  He told Em info he had no right to know to avoid the obvious, smart, very smart.  

I want to thank your beta Lori and your family for helping you create your awesome stories.  I've read each at least twice and some much more.  I know they have a sacrificed as you do and I appreciate it.  

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 13, 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow, these character tweeks work.  Mikey is edgier and a complete jerk.  Justin is scrappy.  Ben is manipulative.  Blake is awesome and Brian's friend.  Emmett and Ted are coming around to sanity.  Deb being fair and Mel/Linds being normal squared is cute too.  It all makes for a really interesting read.  The audacity of Mikey to say he'd talk to Justin, seriously he's riddiculous.  I appreciated Brian's threat, we will see how Mikey handles himself.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 16, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So Ben wanna tango, well Brian's got some moves for ya brother, lol.  Omg all the anger and dare I say rage?  Ok, no way how did you find a way to make Craig and Chris worse? Seriously that is just ick and Dad should never ask Justin to come.  ick!

Emmett and Ted deserved the cold shoulder.  I love Ted and Blake together, but Ted will need to prove himself.

Oh No He Didn't!! I have no words.  Zero.  He deserves whatever is coming.

Please Brian don't answer the phone.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Thank goodness he didn't answer the phone.  I totally see Blakes position, Mikey cried wolf too many times.  This will take time and effort but they are worth it. Yay theyre in love!! Mikey you're on notice the jig is up.  I say Ben seeks comfort with anyone just not Mikey. 

Brian has his man... another yay!!!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh yeah Brian was very cool for warning Ben.  I'm wondering if we have a full blown crazy Mikey coming??? Alex needs a date so does Grant.  Can't wait for Ben to confront Mikey.  At least he didn't try to press charges.  Ted gets to sleep with Blake yay!!!

Totally OT

Depeche Mode -- Spirit is out tomorrow

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Too bad Ben didn't pop him one for good measure.  Mikey is just dumb enough to think this will work.  Will he cut off digits and appendages when Brian doesn't show up?  Ben child you in trouble but help is on the way. 


I like jealous Brian.  Half the battle is communicating and our couple is doing that so trust until you shouldn't.


Loving it!!!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

What??? This story just got even more serious.  I'm glad the truth came out, the first rule of war is know your enemy.  I'm really glad they are communicating.  As for Dan I was expecting the love goddess to hit Emmett.  I'm not sure he deserves it so I'm cool with the assistant.  So glad they can help Ben.  I despise liars.

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I think I posted in the wrong chapter, sorry.  To recap OMG, what??? Poor Justin.  It's time this situation was handled but good.  I know you want your independence but a mans Gita know when to ask for help.  Get a new restraining order, some mace, a baseball bat, a dog and a gun, lol.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 20, 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Omg what us he thinking?  He must have read a comic and there's was this as an idea.  He really thinks he can fool everyone? The DA, Carl?  Poor fool.  He will be lucky if he doesn't go to jail for filing a false report.

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So many WTF moment in this chapter.  Mikey has totally lost it. Poor Deb too late to have a back up kid.  Ben seriously needs a nice injection.  All the scheming can't be healthy.  Brian, yes'm go home.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Umm, Ben seriously you're going to get a 5250 just like Mikey if you don't cool it.  Dan is hysterical when he's not saying I use to date Justin.  

Mikey broke in to the loft? Seriously Mikey you are so confused.

Yay, we are moving fast but who cares our boys are in love, buying a house and basically getting married!!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Umm, I'm with Dan what the heck Grant?? We shall see.  Oh no, I hope Linds doesn't get killed, lo not really but, lol.  Perhaps Mikey will fall in love with someone else and no one needs to get hurt? Not likely, but it's a thought.

Seriously ladies did now seem like the appropriate time for baby making? Their friends suck, lol.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh no, a missing key plus a psycho Mikey equals the ladies are in trouble.  Perhaps Carl confiscated the key?? I guess we shall see.

That house is amazing!  It's perfect for two exhibitionist, lol. And, they are so in love, lovely!

Im really enjoying this.  Thanks so much!!

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Yay Molly dropped dime!  I cannot believe they trashed the house and stashed drugs.  So slimy, I'm also glad Chris flipped out.  Now, Mikey needs to be informed the jig is up and he will get help or go down.  I wonder if there's a two for one rate? Chris and Mikey could share a padded cell.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Dear Mikey, here some ramen noodles, cuz you can't smoke in jail anymore.  Also, please remember jail and prison are different two different things, prison, where you're probably headed is much worse.

Yay, a happy honeymoon! And here comes Jen, dundundunhhhh.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

That's right Justin, handle you business.  Mom, the past is the last but you have to come correct in the present.  

Drew, go fly a kite.  We worked too damn hard shaking off the shackles of the closet to ever go back.  Emmett, strut gurl, you earned it!!!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Ok, Drew sucks! I wanted him fired.  

Mikey, you got played, enjoy your time in prison. 

Brian was nice and tough with every problem in this chapter. I like that.  I've really enjoyed this story.  There were twists I didn't see coming.  As usual you are awesome!!!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 31, 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

There's so much I loved about this story.  You really have found a way to keep me guessing and entertained, seriously thank you.  I can't wait for the sequel and the oops four children that come first, lol.

Summary:

This is really just a one shot but I'm leaving it open if I want to add anything. If anyone has a one shot they wanted tell me and I'll try to write it between other things

 

Lorie thanks for taking time to beta my strange ideas at two in the morning.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Michael Novotny, Original Male Character
Tags: What if...
Genres: Humor, PWP (Plot? What Plot?)
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1924 Read Count: 1692
[Report This] Published: Mar 12, 2017 Updated: Mar 12, 2017
Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 13, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yep, that's our Mikey.  I loved all of the inaccuracies, lol.

Heres my idea how about Brian and Justin dressing as the Bruckners for Halloween or something.  They could do it to be funny and to show Mikey how creepy it is.  I see bad wigs, tacky outfits and all around silliness.  



Author's Response:

The next chapter is going to be written about this. Thanks for the idea.