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Impossible by starlight Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 373]
Summary:

Brian got the job in New York and left Justin behind.

 

Lorie thanks for always reading and loving what I write, you are the best Beta.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: None
Tags: Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, MPreg (Yup! Went THERE!), Out of Character
Genres: Alternate Canon
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Emmett/Other
Series: Impossible
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80644 Read Count: 425459
[Report This] Published: Mar 22, 2017 Updated: May 02, 2017
Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WTH??? I love it!! It's definitely a gripping opening.  We have a love child, a manipulative baby momma, a loyal friend, a reminising lover, a horrible family and an idiot.  No pressure, but this is going to be so good!!!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well, that's one way to party, lol.  I can't believe they don't even have the sense to apologize. Btian was appropriately angry.  He really could have said more.  As for Debs visit to Jen, I am aghast! Wtf did she think she was accomplishing?  I love that Justin told her Brian didn't want her seeing Hannah.  

Ted is having second thoughts which is awesome.  Brian needs a friend, a real friend.  

Literally can't wait for the update. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Deb needs to wise up! What gall ad hen plan was thin, oh so thin, we should ave stayed home.  I love determined Brian.  Justin should protect his heart.

My true viewpoint? More, soon, please.  :) 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

They abandoned a pregnant child, seriously there is no justification.  Even if he said go away, you knew Gus honelife was shaky and you should have checked on him. These women are horrible.  Frankly it doesn't matter why Linds suggested an abortion the fact that she did is crazy.  No one should know Mikey fathered a child, ever, lol.

Justin's kind of inconsistent. Poor Hannah is thinking more clearly.  

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

 

Lindsay's lying.  She wanted Brian that's why she visited NYC and why she's holding the reigns on Gus.  Mel is a dough-head.

Charles is a stand up guy.  Em is lucky.

Poor bitter Justin.

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ok, Justin sweetie we need to talk.  You are confusing issues.  Did you keep Hannah away because Brian wouldn't love her or because he wouldn't love you? Plus, you can't keep her away and then blame him for not being there.  Just as he should have opened a letter, you should have called.  I love you Sunshine, but sometimes it takes tough love.

Yup I like Charles.  Mel are you foreshadowing?  Yeah, Deb can suck eggs.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh, poor Brian.  Poor Justin.  Wonderful Ted! Poor Em... This was a melancholy chapter leading to hopefully epiphanies that will move their relationship along.  Justin you can never go home, but you can create a new one.  Brian, it's time to claim your family, your man and your sh!t kickin' boots.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ann, that's better.  They actually talked and got somewhere.  I hate that Brian had to be hurt to accomplish it.  Justin, hopefully is a bit more available.  Hannah deserves to have both parents, I agree.  Still not sure why he used a name Mel came up with.  

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

It was a race to see who would hit him first.  Mikey is such dung.  daphne  fights dirty, perfect.  Brian ignored all the signs but now he knows what time it is.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Whoa whoa, this is take no prisoners.  I bet Deb thinks twice before trying to take on the group again... Cuz they ain't playin'.  

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Like I said, y'all need to stay in yo lanes.  Folks is gettin slammed around here. Dang, can you say that didn't go well?  Poor Linds, not!

Yay, Brian is in love!!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Damn, that's a bad day.  I hate to say in but irl she has a case.  If they were married before common law marriage was abolished then they could meet the standard, which would mean treat as if properly married. Don't you just hate it when people force reality onto fantasy, lol. That said, Mel was out cold.  Seriously, that was cruel and unusual.  Linds is no prize, but damn. And Deb poor Deb.  What a mess.

In other news the boys are back together... Yay!!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 31, 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Damn!  Mikey got played.  That sucks, lol.  Lindsay had them followed unbelievable!  Not sure what her angle is other getting to Brian.  I wonder what she had planned. Poor miserable Mel.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 31, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, the characters are getting spanked!  Lindsay seems the most dangerous. Tho, Deb is bound to get more pissed.  I hope Brandon doesn't end up with a black eye.

i agree, go to Chicago, but remember they travel.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 This is the right chapter now

Oh, poor Deb.  She has no grandchild, her son is an idiot, and she lost her job.  Thus sucks, the world is so cruel to women.  It's not her fault she only worked one job.  Maybe Brian can send her to school?

 

of course Jen likes Brian now, he hasn't been around.  She probably feels bad that he missed Hannah's life. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Dang! Mikey got the boot!  Deb got really lucky with her surrogate sons.  I wonder if she will get a job?  Lindsay is so horrible.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I suspect the being rich and poor us worse than being poor and poor.  Poor you know you can't afford it. Rich poor, stingy dad won't buy it, lol.  Ok I am glad Brian went with them, but he could have carried his own bags, lol.

Poor dumb Lindsay.

Michael is pathetic., There is no hope. Just sad.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 05, 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Aww... a bath and sweetness.  I live it.  Hell yeah you own it daddy!!! Lol

Ted, the QAF secret weapon, he can be what you need.  I like it.  I like Brandon flirting with him too.

The same bag? C'mom  Justin spend a little cash.  Brian, get him an Louis Vuitton Epi leather duffel, they never wear out. 

I guess you can have a life, lol.  Take your time, just promise to come back. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Miles is hysterical.  He's going to get his feelings hurt or bus body hurt, lol.  I love when Brian is all caveman! 

Poor Deb, Michael and Lindsay are going to give her a stroke.  The boys being nice only magnifies the two doofuses being cpself centered wrecks.  

Ted and Brandon, ok... I can work with that!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awww, the dating chapter!  Everybody gets a little love.  Even Mikey in a screwed up way.  They kinda said if you act normal you can still hang, but he is so far from normal.  

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Why Mikey? Why?  Brandon is really, real.  That's awesome.  Ted deserves some happy. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Why is it always the friend who lives vicariously, that knows all the rules??? If Mikey knew how to be a stud with staying power, he'd be a stud with staying power.  He's a needy arrogant judgmental failure with delusions of coolness.  Feel free to use that, lol.

Poor Miles, none of his scenes are working.  Time to kidnap Justin, lol.  The housewife got her face cracked, poor dear, lol.  Go Bri!!

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I am completely lost with Lindsay.  I have no idea what her game is.  Calling her crazy, isn't enough.  The pictures, the actions and the expiation do t make sense.  That being said, she's a danger because who knows what she will do.  Why would she answer all of Alex's questions? Curious.

i stand by what I said about Mikey.  He's an arrogant failure looking for validation. Alex has a mean steak, but I get it.  

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I am completely lost with Lindsay.  I have no idea what her game is.  Calling her crazy, isn't enough.  The pictures, the actions and the expiation do t make sense.  That being said, she's a danger because who knows what she will do.  Why would she answer all of Alex's questions? Curious.

i stand by what I said about Mikey.  He's an arrogant failure looking for validation. Alex has a mean steak, but I get it.  

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I'm thinking she's more a psychopath, people are pawns to her.  Both dangerous and unpredictable but could explain how it's stayed hidden so long especially since she has no since of guilt.  Still not sure what she thinks end game is, but it's on!  She either tries to kill everyone on the way Chi gor just tries to kill her goal, either way her actions will tell us all about her craycray.

That darn Brian always oopsing the condom with Sunshine, lol.