Penname: BellaDonne Real name: Gretchen
Member Since: Aug 27, 2016
Membership status: Member
Bio:

[Report This]
Reviews by BellaDonne
Impossible by starlight Rated: M half-star [Reviews - 373]
Summary:

Brian got the job in New York and left Justin behind.

 

Lorie thanks for always reading and loving what I write, you are the best Beta.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: None
Tags: Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, MPreg (Yup! Went THERE!), Out of Character
Genres: Alternate Canon
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Emmett/Other
Series: Impossible
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80644 Read Count: 425464
[Report This] Published: Mar 22, 2017 Updated: May 02, 2017
Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Whoa Alex, that was a quick second diagnosis.  Not sure Lynette is messed up, she might be mixed up.  Lindsay is a bag of mixed nuts.  Ron was funny, finally laying down the law.

Hopefully, he can talk sense into her.  If not, commit her on a psych hold.  If she could fool a doc for 72 hours she's the pyscho Alex says. Then the only solution is get a gun, dundundunhhhh...

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Bam, bitch go down!!! I'm applauding Bruan's restraint.  He has years of pent up Mikey mess he could have taken out of his face!  I'm sure Horvath would have seen it except he only has eyes for Deb, lol.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

WTF?!?! Where is Miles? Oh, I didn't like Him, but I also didn't want him harmed.  I wanted Mikey harmed.

Lindsay has snapped or has she? She made me back to Mikey and didn't kill him.  Hopefully she finally made a mistake and they can pick her up.

Thank goodness their rich, because it is so time to move.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Justin, I think you let her grab you so you could kick her ass.  Nice job by the way.  You did better than Mikey and Miles. 

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Damn you Lindsay, if you had just hit him we could sweep it under the rug.  Nancy is always a pistol.  Lindsay, poorvLindsay ending up in the trunk listening to the boys, lol.  Brian, you were very very bad leaving the police. 

I enjoyed this!  Can't wait for more!

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Mar 31, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Potty training, lol.  Why does this seem familiar to me? LMAO! 

Good for Lindsay, drawing better than we thought, and impressing Brian.

I wonder what's in store for us? Penny seems like a pistol and Nathan's a terror, big fun!!



Author's Response:

i'm relieving my childrens life throught Nathan and Penny.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Gus has a point. Speaking of which, that's a timeout moment. She could have poked his eye out! Nope no coloring for the little barber. 

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 05, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hysterical! The fake couple was the funniest!! I agree that camping should involve electricity and being inside, preferably a five star hotel. Ok, these kids are skating the line on being special to being "special" . I don't advocate kiddie leashes but, Justin might consider it, lol.

 

Be safe, we'll miss you...

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Joan sober??? Is she dead? Wow

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That's it I'm sending the short bus for Nathan.  He's so bad.  And gross, it's time for a new fridge. 

Hazzlehurst in the hizzouse, lol.  

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

You know, dog owners do that to be funny, oops your dog is preggers.  Unfortunately, some very odd breeds get created.  

The Hazzlehurst clan was hysterical and very sweet.  

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

These two are the worst parents, lol.  A cat? Oh no, poor Cosmo.  I'm not sure if you been around any geniuses but they tend to be very strange.  Nathan fits the profile, he's smart and  very naughty.  I'm glad Penny will be happier.  

Score one for Joan.  Her actions were completely selfless.  She is doing great!  I like her, good job!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I really like reformed Joan.  Nathan and Penny older? Hopefully they grow out of there bad kid ways, lol.

cant wait for more!!

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Rage is Dead

Yay, Rage is dead!!! Actually, yay a new story!!! Justin and Brian are already too cute. Can't wait to see where you're taking us.  As always, poor Ben. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I guess we left all the schmoopy in the last chapter.  Brian should have said, son I will move heaven and earth to have you near me.  Well at least he gets the summer. 

Cute wedding.  I'm just concerned all of these covert actions are going to feed Mikey's crazy.  Plus, if they are staying hiding isn't the way to go.  If they don't shut the silliness down, it won't be shut down.  It's none of Mikey's business if they ever get married.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Even a normal Mikey is left of center.  Deb did a good job keeping quiet.  I wonder if Marilyn has a part to play other than narrator?

I'm thinking Justin is tough and Brian is sentimental so far.  Frankly, I always thought Brian was the more in love of the two.  That first night his affection was more than a mere trick, the lookalike hustler, peeing on his work, the scene at Mikey's... The list could go on and on.  

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I liked Rachel.  How do you train someone to be perfect without whips and chains? I hope Hunter can handle all of the anticipating and codling.  Oh, and he needs to handle a disappointed Lindsay.  

And a general... Awww. Cuz this is sweet.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yay Ben!! Yay Mikey! Nice job taking up for your son.  Lindsay even if you are right, why would you go to his parents?   I wonder if we are looking at some Linds Hunter moments on the horizon? 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

First, my apologies, I haven't been available to keep up.  

Hunter, he's coming right along.  Good for him. 

Poor Gus.  He's going to need extra attention, I'm sure the boys can handle it.

They are lucky they werent struck blind, lol.

Summary:

Justin and Brian meet when Brian leaves Pittsburgh for a campaign. 

 

Lorie thanks for always being a great beta and the person I depend on to keep me straight when I throw new stories at you.

 

DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Original Character, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Other Cast Regulars, Rodney, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: Anti-Michael, Out of Character, Toppy Justin
Genres: Alternate Canon, Alternate Universe, Humor
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Melanie/Lindsay, Vic/Rodney
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33211 Read Count: 117759
[Report This] Published: Apr 23, 2017 Updated: May 17, 2017
Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay a new story!!! So this is a slow burn, not love at first sight.  I can feel it.  

Im calling it now, they did not have sex.  I don't know how Mijey faked it but he did.  Deb at least gas sense so that's promising.

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thank goodness!!! I know GHB is a serious drug and what Mikey did was very wrong, but it's all better than voluntary sex between Brian and Mikey, ewww.  Ted, Emmett is right, you must tell Brian.  

Justun is very, naughty.  I'm glad his friends called him out.  Perhaps, Brian needs to investigate the nudist chef thoroughly.

*** I just want to issue a blanket typo apology.  I'm losing my sight due to my allergies, some days are better than others (some reviews are coherent and sone need decoding). My apologies. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I hope you know what day is cuz I gotta give it to you for Granny.  Hysterical!!! It's Jen with a bad mouth, lol.  Her intelligence gathering was epic.  I can't wait to see what she's up to.  Brian is about to be hit by a whirlwind!

dap- slang word meaning positive affirmation or credit

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thank you fic gods! Brian knows the truth mostly, but I'm thinking there's a lot more he will uncover.  Luckily, he's got Justin and his crew to distract him. 

Bens situation is curious.  He was to balking about Mikey, right? But his if he's never been to the Pitts?

Very nice using Time Bender as a analogy for Brian and Justin.  We are only learning more of the facts, but I'm sure Time Benders villain/love has been revealed..

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Progress!! Yes! I like the idea of Brian playing in the water.  Just stay away from sharks.  Oh no, Mikey is going to get caught,  this GHB issue won't quit.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Michael, I'd say call the police, npbut then you'd go to jail on drug charges.  I guess you should nurse your wounds and come up with another plan ala Pink and the Brain.

Lindsay, next time just  a bag of oranges, lol

Awww, loved the intimacy.