Penname: BellaDonne Real name: Gretchen
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Summary:

Justin and Brian meet when Brian leaves Pittsburgh for a campaign. 

 

Lorie thanks for always being a great beta and the person I depend on to keep me straight when I throw new stories at you.

 

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Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Original Character, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Other Cast Regulars, Rodney, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: Anti-Michael, Out of Character, Toppy Justin
Genres: Alternate Canon, Alternate Universe, Humor
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Melanie/Lindsay, Vic/Rodney
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33211 Read Count: 117909
[Report This] Published: Apr 23, 2017 Updated: May 17, 2017
Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Michael, I'd say call the police, but then you'd go to jail on drug charges.  I guess you should nurse your wounds and come up with another plan ala Pink and the Brain.

Lindsay, next time just  a bag of oranges, lol

Awww, loved the intimacy.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Michael, get ready to hang out at Babylon II, the jail, lol.  You and Sap can bring the flava...lol. There is no way you could think what you did was right. None.

Daphne is a Ducky, yay!!! Good job shutting that mess down. 

Brian is bewitched by the beach bummy Justin, I love it.  Granny better watch out sexually transmitted diseases are rampant in the elderly.  Damn that little blue pill, lol.

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Awwww, all well that ends well.  Mikey, you poor drugged drugger, I hope prion is fun.  The church lady was funny but she will also be enjoying prison.

 

Summary:

Brian is called to work with the Music Industry's hottest singer. Only the singer takes off, and leaves Brian trying to figure out who the client really is and what he is doing when he disappears.

 


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Ben Bruckner, Brian Kinney, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Original Character, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Out of Character, Possessive, What if...
Genres: Alternate Universe, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Melanie/Lindsay, Michael/Ben
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43297 Read Count: 73154
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2017 Updated: Jun 11, 2017
Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, well, well, what a snoop.  How does he think Jus is going to take this intrusion? I'm hoping the live at first sight oartner dulls the you searched through my things part.  I love a good AU, looking forward to Brian putting the pieces together.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Aww.. Emmett found his sister.  See, small towns have a use (j/k). 

Shame on you Justin, you let Brian get you cuz he's cute.  The man stalked you successfully, and you hire him? Ok, yeah, he is really cute.  I hope Riley likes him.

On the real, Prince had something in his eyes that I couldn't let go of too. Well, at least until the restraining order, lol. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Justin baby you in danger child, lol.  Thank goodness Daphne is thinking. It will take more than a pretty face and an awesome kiss to get close to JusT.   At least Justin has a good idea of what and with whom he's dealing.

Brian, you could have actually helped Ben.  You are after all accepting Emmetts help.  

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh please don't let the reason he gets discovered be Brian, this love affair needs help.  I wonder if his asking about Jen and Molly was a test.  It would seem he could hire an investigator to know how their doing.  Gus is over the moon.  Good for him!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well, that Rita is a problem.  Fired is fired, leave him alone.  Hopefully the loft is safe enough.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Rita is a controlling shrew. N's he deserved to be fired.  What she's up to now is riddiculous. All for the life of money, what a shame. 

Brian us working over time.  Justin is a poor totured soul. 

Oh I hope Rita goes after the phone herself, lol.  So cute, Whitney to Kevin, lol.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Michael is completely clueless.  If he channeled the energy he wastes following abroad he could have a successful comic store. 

Oh, I hope they aren't found, but... well, it is a story, isn't it?

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Gee, these two are bad judges of character, lol.  Michael and Rita are probably having voodoo dolls crafted.

Drew and Emmett are on a very sexy stake out, lol.  Very cute.  They will be in love soon.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh, no, Michael is in love.  Gus was smart to leave. Mikey annoys.  Blake us right to be worried.  Fly Jen and Molly somewhere safe and meet then.  But I guess Rita already ruined the reunion so...

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This is going to get messy.  Michael's in like with Jules, lol.  Seriously, if he was less self centered he'd almost be human, tee-hee.

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I thought the banging was Michael, thank goodness it's Deb. Yay, food and wisdom on the way.

As for Blake, I'm not sure Justin was right. Blake should have warned him. After all, he chose Rita, who is now out to destroy him (sort of). Brian basically stalked him, and has a bad reputation, the security person that ignores that isn't doing his job.  Thankfully, he left quietly.

Will the Emmett Drew show change locales?

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I liked everything about this chapter.  Ted and Blake are already cute. Michael is just a ding bat. I swear.  Ted's right, he probably will blab.

Gus is adorable.  His father is growing on me, lol. Justin's a tease, lol.

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Beautifully done! Sex scenes are tough that was cute and sexy.  Michael is craycray.  Drew and Emmett, yeah, no that wasn't in the version I watched, it would have made that caca better.  Speaking of caca, wow, that so gross I wouldn't have even wanted to see it, let alone have it happen to me.  Poor Rita, lol.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Molly, Molly, I'm so happy you calmed down.  It wasn't his fault.  Rita is a piece of work.  I'm glad Jen is back,  I hope Justin is happy reconnecting.  Brian and Rian, too cute.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm shocked, but I'm rooting for Mikey to do the right thing. Rita is a very mean woman, JusT deserves some peace.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I must admit I'm a bit let down that it's over.  I do aporeciate your effort.  Thus was fun and very different.  I'm so happy Mikey did the right thing. Gus got to be the bmoc. Poor Rita, it's jugglers and mimes from here on out. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You're havin my baby... Oh p, how much fun.  I love pregnant Brian. Brandon is saw awesome in this story.  Brian should have told him, but a lot been goin on so, I can see it not coming up.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Busted already Michael.  Miles and Mikeybcant be more pathetic. I love the checking for the damaged testicle, that was so sweet.  I'm calling it, Justin's going be pregnant too. I Love it!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Naughty Em.  Poor Brian.  Sadly, I could have been bribed by those items preggers or not.

Lindsay, take her to court.  She's going to try something if Justin shows up.

Michael and Miles, hysterical.. I'm sure you know 98% of men are terrified of their mothers, lol.  Run Mikey, run.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think narrator got it wrong. They laid in bed making out not making plans... cuz Ted and Brandon are certainly in the running for cutest couple. I hate that you fiction makes me wish I lived in the stories, lol. No one us as thoughtful as Ted just appeared. I'm jealous.

Poor Deb, sucks to be a Novotny, lol.

Linds is twisted metal, simply hopeless.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Clash of the Blonds

Gotcha' Linds.  Too funny she tried to fake amnesia then abandoned that and charged at him, lol.  Alex, it's ok, you're a silver fox stay strong.  Linds is a very special case.

Justin, you are so right and so wrong, taunting that poor unhinged failure, lol.

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: May 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think people should stop talking to Michael.  He doesn't seem to understand words.  Suggest stick figures on plain unlined paper.  Preferably in crayon so he can truly gave a chance of understanding.  How many different ways can one say, leave Brian alone?? At least Mom came, maybe he gets it now. Ugh! He should just go to jail.