Penname: BellaDonne Real name: Gretchen
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Summary: Feature

Brian takes the family he made to New York to save them from the family they once believed in. Justin lives in New York and meets Brian in the park.

This was plot bunny from DramaQueen who wanted to see if I could help bring it to life

Lorie as always you are the greatest beta I could have ever asked for. 


Categories: QAF US, Reader's Choice Award
Characters: Brian Kinney, Carl Horvath, Claire Kinney, Craig Taylor, Cynthia, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Ethan Gold, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jack Kinney, Jennifer Taylor, Joan Kinney, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Original Character, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Ted Schmidt
Tags: Abuse/Child Abuse, Anti-Debbie, Anti-Ethan, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Melanie, Anti-Michael, Family, Friendship, Jealousy, Mental Health Issues, Minor Character Death, MPreg (Yup! Went THERE!), Out of Character, Possessive, Suicide
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Melanie/Lindsay
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77973 Read Count: 349827
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2017 Updated: Sep 01, 2017
Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

It's as is Bruan has a whole posse he didn't know about.  Lol.  I'm not sure it was proper for the ladies to go to the diner just to cause problems, but the Liberty Losers needed some problems.   Although, in America there's no such thing as fighting words, meaning you can say almost anything it's when you do something it changes - pouring stuff on them was an assault, not saying they didn't deserve it, but tsk tsk. Lindsay is hysterical, flirting from behind bars, Too funny.


I like this feels like a fairy tale, a bit if a dark one, like the Grim tales, but you know something more than day to day life is guiding it.  Justin is going to give in completely soon, no one is safe from the Horvath charm.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This is so cute.  I know that seems an understatement, cuz it's dealing with serious subjects, but the instant family is sweet, funny, and so ... Cute.  

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

In a nutshell.... more! Love ya'!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Lindsay, you really, really, don't want to go there.  It would be a disaster. A complete terrible worse than Pittsburgh disaster. She's so stupid she probably won't listen, lol

Alex is amazing. I need to book an appointment.

Im so happy Gus us doing so well.  Brian and Ted are doing well also.  

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I don't like Nancy.  Mothers can be so.... ick. Ron's no prize either.  Still loving Alex.

Lindsay, get you patents to send you to the Dinah Shore weekend. You'll have a blast! No, you won't see Brian or harm Gus, but sluts will be so willing to make you smile. 

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh no.  I'm afraid.  

At least Brian and Justin are smiley. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Well, that was easy.... Or was it? Will money be enough to get rid of her??? O don't know.

Ted, yes that was flirting. 

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Yay Ted!!! Mel, Linds set you up.  No honor among thieves and all that.  Maybe you and Mikey can share a cell.

Summary:

This is another life that Brian and Justin end up reliving, when they return to help get others lives where they should be. 

 

Lorie you know you're the best beta, but thanks for always being there to help me.

 

Nichelle, you asked me for this and it wouldn't leave me alone. 


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor
Tags: Out of Character, What if...
Genres: Alternate Universe
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Emmett/Drew, Michael/Other, Other Cast Pairing, Ted/Other
Series: THE STORY OF OUR LIVES
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114446 Read Count: 183282
[Report This] Published: Jun 18, 2017 Updated: Sep 03, 2018
Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jul 13, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm so happy Blake has seen the light.  Ted is cool in thus stream.  Jennifer, I'm so happy they found each other.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Haha!!! Gus knows Cynthia too. Cindy, girl what you up to?? I'm so glad Justin is back!!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yay, Jennifer!! Life is about to get good.  Cynthia good job finding the needle in the haystack.

 

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A new fic, I'm excited.  Everything is different, this could be very interesting,

Justin, turn around you a are making a mistake, ugh. I can't imagine it being more difficult, but that's why I'm reading not writing.  

Hi Star-- you're still my fav!!!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Brian, were you listening? I'm sure you were.  Edgy Justin is cool with me.  I wonder when he will remember. 

Adopting Gus is perfect.  Hunter with Justin makes since too. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That's as clear as mud, lol. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh no, sexual healing didn't work? How are we going to thaw this cold Justin? Brian can't fix the others if he can't get through to Justin. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Gus didn't do it either? What's it going to take?? He is just putting Brian through his paces isn't he? 

Im on the edge of my seat. :)

 

Summary:

Justin and Brian meet on a vacation. They continue to see each other until Justin gets tired of being a secret and begins to resent the barrier that Brian keeps between them. 

 


Categories: QAF US
Characters: Brian Kinney, Cynthia, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Molly Taylor, Original Character, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Ted Schmidt, Vic Grassi
Tags: Anti-Michael, Out of Character, Possessive
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Drama, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin, Melanie/Lindsay, Ted/Blake
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52271 Read Count: 197998
[Report This] Published: Jul 07, 2017 Updated: Sep 22, 2017
Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jul 13, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Mikey just give up.  You have no idea what you're up against.  You can't stop a tidal wave. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jul 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

"Swish, swish, bich... another one in the basket."  Good job Justin! He shut Mikey down well.  Brian realizes who he lost and he is trying to change its beautiful.  Mikey, you're gonna lose.

A custom tricycle, rich people are hysterical, lol.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ahh...connections, it must be fate.  We are heading towards a glorious and probably angst you reunion.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awesome!! But I knit it can't be that easy can it? But you the ones that get you to do things out apif character like gave a two year relationship without disclosure are the ones you can never ever shake.  Even in a fast car Justin... er Cole.  Lol on the threats to Lees car.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Justin, Jusyin, it so written in the stars, lol.  Michael you're gonna regret this big time. I'm wondering if Justin will solve the accident that was always Mikey's fault... Yep I projecting, lol.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 The Return of Brian Kinney

Awww, lol, awww. I think that covers it, lol.

Hi Star, the worlds all crazy right now, you are a safe harbor of fun.  Kisses to Lori, an awesome beta!!!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A new one!!! Brian, I know you understand why Justin left, just make sure when you find him you treat him right.  I can't wait until the survelence videos shoes Mikey driving or walking sooner than he said.  Grr..

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed
Date: Aug 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Michael is such a doofus, perhaps Deb being upset us the word kind if ou sheet for a Mama's boy like him.  There's no way he's laying Bruan back. He can't even apologize. I agree with Linds he's nuts.

i like this Justin and Brian they are very cute.  Grampy us a teddy bear. It's all good, lol.