Penname: susi_in_love Real name: Susi
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Smoldering by Tagsit Rated: M star [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Justin has grown up in a very different household than seen in canon. He is living on the streets when he is found by the Liberty Diner gang and is rescued - malnourished, exhausted and ill - and taken home by Brian. Can Justin be brought out of this hell he's been resigned to by his hateful father? Can Brian find the one thing that will make Justin whole again?

This story is based on a prior fic - 'Smolder' - by LovelessSouls.  All credit for the haunting story premise goes to the original author, as well as my thanks for letting me repost the first two chapters of that story.


Categories: QAF US, Reader's Choice Award
Characters: Brian Kinney, Justin Taylor
Tags: 100k+ Word Count, Rimming
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 179383 Read Count: 152824
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2016 Updated: Sep 23, 2016
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Date: Sep 03, 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Gratification.

I can imagine how overwhelming it must all be for Justin. So much is happening in such a small amount of time.

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Adumbration.

Who would be looking for Justin? Maybe Daphne?

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Catharsis.

Finally Justin realizes who is at fault. I hope that helps him to get better.

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Revelation.

Well that's a nice way of waking up.

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Restoration.

I don't know whether to feel bad for Jennifer or to be just mad at her. 

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Percipience.

I'm glad Justin is finally able to talk about the bad stuff. 

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Recovery.

It was said from the bottom of his heart.  No matter how much they try to ignore it. They can't change it. 

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Betterment.

Justin is just too cute sometimes. He has stuff. Adorable. 

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Alterations.

He got Daphne back. I'm soooo glad about that. 

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Date: Sep 04, 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Fallacious.

You were right. Poor Justin!!!

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Date: Sep 04, 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Logic: Part II

Finally Brian is talking about his feelings. 



Author's Response:

A little bit. He's still having a hard time being open with Justin. Thanks to Daphne, though, he finally has a reason to talk. Glad to see you're enjoying the story still. TAG

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Date: Sep 05, 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Divulgence.

I really don't know what to think of Jennifer. I'm afraid she still has some kind if connection to Craig. 

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Date: Sep 05, 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Machinations.

Oh no. I knew something bad would happen. 

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Date: Sep 05, 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Deliverance.

I'm glad Justin is okay. I hope they get their revenge on Craig. 

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Date: Sep 05, 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Confrontation.

Yes. I love this part. Absolutely perfect. 

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Date: Sep 06, 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Epilogue.

I absolutely love the ending of thus story. It was just perfect. Thank you for writing. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Present day, post-episode 5.13. Justin has returned to Pittsburgh to build a life and future with Brian. When Daphne asks Justin for a favor, he agrees without realizing the effect it will later have on him, Brian, and their entire family’s lives.


Categories: QAF US, Reader's Choice Award
Characters: Blake Wyzecki, Brian Kinney, Daphne Chanders, Debbie Novotny, Emmett Honeycutt, Gus Marcus-Peterson, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca Marcus-Peterson, Justin Taylor, Lindsay Peterson, Melanie Marcus, Michael Novotny, Original Character, Original Female Character, Original Male Character, Ted Schmidt
Tags: 10k+ Word Count, Anal Sex (Lots of it!), Anniversary, Anti-Lindsay, Anti-Michael, Birthday, Bottom Brian, Death, Established Relationship, Family, Friendship, Hatred, Homophobia, Language, M/M, Masturbation , Minor Character Death, Oral Sex, Post-series, Raw Sex, Real Life Issues, Responsible Justin, Rimming, Sex Toys, Toppy Justin, Vacation, Wedding
Genres: Angst, Angst w/ Happy Ending, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Porny, Romance, Tragedy
Pairings: Brian/Justin
Series: Bittersweet Universe
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98688 Read Count: 209855
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2016 Updated: Oct 01, 2017
Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Sister Christian

What happened to Daphne? I have to read more. Also I think it's normal for a new dad to be a little bit scared. I hope that's all it is with Curtis.



Author's Response:

Daphne dies, that is what the story revolves around.

Most new fathers would be worried but not as bad as Curtis.

Thanks 

~charming1 & Lorie~

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: I'll Stand By You

Curtis is an ass. Poor Daphne, what a big loss. I hope there will be no problems with Brian and Justin taking the baby.



Author's Response:

Our story will have a happy ending.

Thanks

~charming1 & Lorie~

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Date: Jun 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Beautiful Boy

I'm really glad Keegan is Justin's son. And I have to repeat myself: Curtis is an ass. Thankfully Brian and Justin are so good together that Justin has someone to hold on to during these hard times.



Author's Response:

We like Brian an Justin together.

They are wonderful parents.

Curtis is definitely an ass and will be even more of one soon.

Thanks

~charming1 & Lorie~

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 4: You're My Best Friend

That was so beautifully written, very sad but also very good. It made me cry. Thank you for doing such a great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

We cried writing it too.

Thanks

~charming1 & Lorie~

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Date: Jun 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Bridge Over Troubled Water

Mmh, I don't like Brian's reaction when Justin started talking about Keegan living with them. I hope it won't cause something bad between Brian and Justin. 



Author's Response:

Brian is nervous.

He never considered having a child to raise.

Thanks

~charming1 & Lorie~

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Date: Jun 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 6: That's What Friends Are For

I'm really relieved now that I know that Brian's hesitation was about his age. I can totally understand that. Emmett and Ted are great friends and said exactly the right things.



Author's Response:

Brian has realized that Emmett and Ted are much better friends than Michael ever was.

Thanks

~charming1 & Lorie~

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Take Me Home

I haven't even missed Michael in the story up until now. That just shows how unimportant he is. Hopefully he realizes it too and leaves everyone alone.



Author's Response:

Michael definitely made himself unwanted with what he tried to do.

Thanks

~charming1 & Lorie~

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Love Will Keep Us Together

I'm sooo happy they worked things out. Now I hope they keep it this way and Mel can do some magic so Justin can keep Keegan.



Author's Response:

They have truth and honesty, they won't need magic.

Thanks

~charming1 & Lorie~

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 9: We Are Family

Please Brian, don't destroy everything you have. I can't stop reading and it's 1am. 



Author's Response:

Brian has a lot to think about.

Thanks

~charming1 & Lorie~